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A Stone Amongst Bones

On a world as ancient with civilization as Ecetopia, few are the lands untamed and unfrequented by mortals. Fewer still are reaches pregnant with secrets untold and rumors maligned equally by time and twisted tellings; few, yet present. Such places exist, known to mad mendicants and enlightened gurus. Such a one is named Rzail. Within that accursed subcontinent’s boundaries a blight preternaturally strips the land of vegetation, darkness, and light; twilight holds eternal tyranny over petrified forests, sand flats, and noxious bogs; and madness ensnares all but the hardiest of fools who dwell long within its borders.

Yet fools there are.

Amongst that tight coterie of misanthropes and pariahs are aboriginals, rustic ranchers wild as the befouled soil they subsist on, adventurers yearning to discover themselves by losing themselves, and scientists attempting to discern the future by understanding the past—but in a manner well outside the mainstream. Of the latter, a team of crypto-archaelogists, from the University of Eceterum Alacis, recently descended on Rzail’s Doch Mol ruins, an historical site mostly buried beneath dunes the color and texture of dead flesh that undulate as far as an eye can see.

The name Doch Mol they ascribed to an ancient fortress, although the only evidence for such are the ostensibly innumerable layers of bodies, a thousand generations dense. These hint yet at what may have been a vast city. Added to that is another oddity, a pillar unearthed and decoded from its ancient tongue that reads:

“Karnorouri, Seer of Seers,
Whose gaze doth scry the edge of time,
Sees not the end of old Doch Mol,
Where eternal reigns dare rise
Beneath the Mountains of Ez-Lye
Where, by His word, death undies.”

They called it, not to anyone’s astonishment, the Karnorouri’s Pillar. Based on the little evidence at their disposal, they assumed the place where it was found must be the name of the place of which it so ominously spoke. Yet of mountains naught remains. All about is plain and dune where buried life and lifeless brume conspire to blot the past from view. That and the legends of the aboriginal elders who recall an era of a powerful dwarven lich and even now ward their humble villages against the threat of undeath. Even the esteemed colleges of Eceterm Alacis, busily perturbing the final resting site of so many, occasionally shiver at the thought of bones rustling from more than just the twilight wind.
I can understand the reasoning behind requiring approval from two mods per character. However, in practice, it seems that some of the mods are busy people. Through no fault of theirs, it can take a very long time to get characters approved. Perhaps a compromise is in order? Maybe you only need one mods approval, but other mods can step in and say "Yo hold up you need to change this." Or maybe just make it so only one mod is necessary.


It has already been changed such that if the character is well-within reason only a single mod needs to approve the character.
@Mr Rage Please expand on what that cost is, how it is intended to work, and what those ranges might be within the ability itself.
@Lmpkio Are you saying you want to immediately re-submit him as tier 5 and not use him to fight until it becomes available? If so, I am OK with that but I would like to see what other staff have to say. @Rilla Your thoughts?
@Lmpkio I'm hoping sometime this summer, so not in the immediate future, but still within the next month or two.
@Lmpkio This is definitely a cool character that I would like to see, but having to force an "Undead Dragon Lord" into the constraints of what is currently allowed is difficult to do with the concept and I'm thinking not quite working out. You'd have to give him a huge handicap to make it play out in a manner that makes sense in-character, I'd think, otherwise hold off until we open up tier 5 or 6 which hopefully shouldn't be all that long.
@Styxx Acheron Approved.
@Mr Rage If you could tweak augmented reality a bit to have it read in such a way that it is more of an interactive illusion (like a halodeck) than outright matter manipulation, that would be great.
General Moartyme steepled his fingers as he sat, elbows on the conference table, and nodded slightly in concurrence with President Inealdo. His wasn’t the innate action of a sycophant; instead, he saw and supported the wisdom present in his leader’s words. By this point, with only a half-cycle having passed since the attack, the local system was secure. Indeed, that was part of his purpose in coming to this meeting. To provide an update to the other board members on the status of their defense force’s reaction to the attack.

“All vessels, foreign and domestic, within 100 AUs scanned and deemed safe. Outliers currently being interviewed, but none of serious concern. Mostly smugglers, a handful of which, as we are aware, are permitted in Federation space for economic purposes.”

He took a small sip of water and continued.

“Prolonging the travel ban serves no purpose. Indeed, to do so is detrimental as, with industry crippled, we must rely on maintaining a healthy trade relationship with our neighbors.”

He glanced around and confirmed his suspicion of unanimous support on the matter.

“I will immediately inform the defense force that the ban is lifted.”

He stood and walked over to a corner of the room, pulled a communication device from his pocket. Placed within his ear, he opened a secure line to military headquarters and passed along the order. Within a handful of minutes, vessels would once more be free to come and go at will. Satisfied that the orders were being carried out, he returned to the table, where the other members graciously awaited in silence.

“Now to the matter at hand. As to preventing such a heinous act from again occurring, we will be constructing an intelligent network of satellites to scan incoming vessels for threat signatures and deploying them in a series of overlapping grids around each planet and, moreover, around the entire system. Instead of minutes notice, we will in the future have over an hour in which to coordinate a response. This, our best scientists assure me, includes from superluminal and extradimensional infiltration attempts.”
The Kindred have my approval.
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