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Just a shark floating through the void with way too many bee's in the brain.

Self taught writer, artist, programmer and whatever the hell else the ADHD demands to be understood.
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Actually I do have another idea, one that could keep us working on Nocturnia while keeping the game in a 'frozen' state until Esty is ready to return.

Would anyone be interested in turning what we have so far into an actual book? The process would comprise of us rewriting scenes to better flow into each other but maintain their overall content. Such could then be put onto book sites like say word press and royal road.

We could construct everything up to The War. If we agreed upon it necessary scenes could be added/removed as well (nothing that would dramatically alter the overall plot or main characters so far).

Reason I suggest this is that if the majority of people don't want to continue without Esty, this'll be a good way to keep the spirit alive while waiting for when she's able to return. Also would provide those involved a good piece of work for personal portfolios and/or get more exposure for creatives amongst us.

My only caution would be that it'd be a considerable amount of work (mostly cleaning up and making the existing writing 'efficient' for reading quality).

If most people are keen I can draft up a pipeline for development.
Im immediately breaking at least 2 of those beach rules. Webb and Harriet kinda both count as animals(webb more than Harry), plus the Morrigan has her crows so she WILL be feeding the wildlife.


Excellent hahaha
Holy hell Flux that was a lot of words. Why. WHY.
(Don’t worry I’ve got you, minimal summary of the above).

General Continuation of the Game
- Beach Episode will not grant Wealth/Personnel on completion.
- War will be on hold for 2 Rounds (Beach and Aid Crisis).
- Options for how Estywen’s characters are written aside.

District Conflict Resolution
- Current interpretation of district fights is that of player resolution.
- Draft dice roll rulesets for fight resolution provided, optional use.

Beach episode
- Two week (9th – 23rd) project period for Estywen return (longer if agreed upon).
- Setting: Beach Day, make Martin cry and/or just have fun (collabs encouraged).
- Break Lifeguard Martin’s mind minigame rules(optional).
- Potential gift art piece of main char’s for Est/Everyone.
- Provide clothing, pose, activity(optional) if MC desired to be in piece.

Aid Crisis Round
- Ceasefire round, return to semi-normal play.
- Wealth/Personel income granted at end of round.
- Writing characters free from Esty interactions to return to play.
- Beginning to write Esty’s characters aside to be later picked up.

(Flux)Oh hey, responsibility!
- I have some understanding of Esty’s direction, but not completely.
- I’ll develop some ideas for arcs moving forward after The War.
- I am absolutely open to ideas from players.
- I don’t know if I can fulfill this role long term.
- I will ensure to the best of my ability to pass the reins over if required.

And that’s the above ~2000 words summarised in ~250. If you need more detail read the above post section or feel free to PM me/Mention me in OOC. If you want to discuss any of the posted points please Mention me in OOC so everyone can see the discussion/alteration/solution.

EDIT: I will have the beach day draft document up in 24 hours hopefully for people to start working on/having fun with~.
Alright, I'll break this down into sections with headings so hopefully it makes it easier to read. There will be a summary in the next post too if this is too much. Please feel free to ask me any questions or make any suggestions.

Order of contents:
- General continuation of the game (Peronsel/Wealth, The War and Esty characters).
- District conflict resolution (Supplement rules if required, otherwise as agreed by players)
- Beach Episode (Fun little piece and time to regroup ideas/direction)
- Aid Crisis round (minor story impact event)
- Me in this situation (An unexpected turn of events)

- : Peronsel/Wealth generation, The War and Estylwen character territories : -


The beach episode will not acquire anyone Wealth or Personel as it is an out of character event. The end of the Aid Crisis round will continue standard play and I'll maintain the 0'th post in terms of Wealth and Personel income. (Unless agreed otherwise by players).

Regarding the war. In my mind it does not feel right to play out Estylwen's characters (Ezra Blackheart, Antonia Franchesca, Vincenzo “Vincent” Accardo) when she has worked so hard to build them and establish their presence in the world. For this reason I think it best to hold the war and interactions with Esty's characters for that of a month (longer if we can easily manage it). After this period we will decide as a group what to do moving forward, voting on options we place on the table and failing that I'll make the call. I propose two options at this point (and welcome others to propose solutions as well):

Option 1: We classify Estylwen's area's as locked down. Writing this should be easy, @SporkoBug's monsters overrun the area, military assumes martial law and occupies it etc, the lock down cleared once Esty returns.

Option 2: After a wait period Esty's territory becomes free game. I'll write resistance but otherwise it'd be like acquiring any empty territory. Once Esty returns those territories or some territories of the strongest players would undergo a "revolution" of sorts to return Esty's characters to the game with land to fight from.

In my opinion, option 2 would be best but relies on the good will of the strongest players to accept the loss of some territories to allow @Estylwen's return when she gets back. This would ensure that the territories don't get left behind through no upgrades or lack of geopolitical activity. Option 1 is easier, but leaves swarths of area inaccessible in stasis.

I propose these options so everyone can continue playing until her return. In my experience, projects like this that go on hiatus for extended periods rarely pick up again, so I hope my options allow Nocturnia to continue while keeping the seat warm for Esty so to speak.

Regardless of what is decided, Esty's characters will be written aside so they are free to return with her and free characters currently locked in interactions with them (Example: Ezra holding Adel, will PM @Yankee and @ERode about that. Anyone else locked in Esty interactions let me know and we'll figure a route out of it if necessary).

With that being said, onto that of faction vs faction conflict.

- : Game battles and District wars : -


My experience so far with fighting for districts has been that so long as the aggressor has the manpower/wealth to invade, they can initiate the event. From there the two parties write the battle and more or less amicably agree who the victor is through the writing (Esty explained it as a gacha game, but with no notes on actual mechanics, this is my best interpretation).

If this does not work moving forward, I'll propose a ruleset to roll for district victories so they can be rolled for and settled that way. Otherwise players are more than welcome to continue writing battle conclusions as they agree outside of dice and chance.

Draft district dice roll rules in hider:


The above rules are only there for players who wish to use them or settle disputes in battles if required.

- : Beach episode : -


I propose we take two weeks minimum to develop this (9th March - 23rd March) as both a well earned fun break and time for Esty to return. If anyone has direct contact or alternative details it'd be a really nice piece if they could send it to her as a PDF for her to read in her spare time.

I've also contacted an artist friend to hopefully commission and help co-create a beach portrait of all the current major characters. Something of a "Best Wishes/Get Well Soon" postcard and little gift for everyone for putting so much into this so far. Worst case we'll have the PDF at the very least. Once it's done or close to finished we'll decide if it goes in the IC posted clearly as an INTERMISSION - ALT UNIVERSE piece, in the OOC or somewhere else entirely.

In terms of the beach piece. Here's the setting:

Martin Luthin is a lifeguard, but he's better known as a dick who kicks over sandcastles. He likes the rules, and it's time to ruin Martin's day.

You get 3 points for every rule you break. I'll decide which player gets the points if multiple people break the same rule based on creative and comedic value with runners up for 2 and 1 points. The player with the most points at the end earns the honor of having ruined martins day.
(Or you can just write your characters doing whatever they want, interacting with whoever, however. Enjoy~!)

RULES TO BE BROKEN:
1 - No open fires/flammable sources.
2 - No loud music/noises.
3 - No firearms/weapons/explosives.
4 - No hunting.
5 - No vehicles.
6 - No camping.
7 - No Animals.
8 - No drugs.
9 - No surfing.
10 - Do not feed the wildlife.

Also, PM me or post in the OOC mentioning me with what your main player character would wear to the beach and me and friend will get to starting the art piece for the beach episode to be sent along with the final piece for Esty and everyone here. We can get char refs from the portraits but further detail is always appreciated~. A character brief should include:
- Character clothing.
- Character pose.
- Character activity (optional).

For example: Khor wears a full wetsuit with a scuba rebreather and purple/magenta stripes. She's intense in a comedic sense with her pose. She's throwing Adel into the surf.

- : Aid Crisis round : -


If Esty isn't back after the 'beach episode' round, we'll continue with the Aid Crisis IC to keep things rolling. The aim is for this to be a significant event that doesn't alter Esty's overall plot but provides players the opportunity to continue their dominion of Nocturnia. The reason for this is to avoid a long Hiatus (unless it is agreed upon by all players) to avoid the RP from dying out.

At this stage I'll likely PM all players at the start of it inquiring any plotlines they had with Esty and where they'd like their characters to go/what plots they'd like to ensure the RP is tailored to peoples preferences (to the limit of staying in the lines of Nocturnia's setting).

Ultimately for me this would mean my characters would also take a background role and my territories would be up for grabs by anyone as if they were free so I can focus on maintaining the world's reactions to or supporting player's actions. Khor, Antonio and Akir will still play their roles due to their place in the story now but can assumed to be 'factionless'.

This would also begin deviating from Esty's ultimate vision for Nocturnia. I'll do everything I can to respect her work and ideas but I simply just don't know everything she had planned and my additions will inevitable change the course somewhat. My efforts will be in the best of faith, but even my style of writing compared to hers is going to make things feel different, so I apologize in advance if that becomes more noticeable over time.

Finally, my position in this!

- : Flux the accidental show runner : -


Me and Esty have discussed deep plot points, no complete reveals but I have a general idea as to the source of power and how to make that a wild good event should players go for it (it'll shine best as players pooling resources and going together to find it). As for leaving the city, that's at least fairly self explanatory and pieces writing for the military have left me well equipped to handle that one.

On this though, I have no notes, no over arching plot, no idea outside what is mostly posted in the OOC first post about what and how Nocturnia is. It'll take me some time to develop some basic framework to follow (the beach episode will hopefully be long enough) but I'll also reach out to players for plots/developments they'd like to see to weave in.

Moving forward I'll coordinate the game/story according to arcs/chapters. This arc being The War. Once it concludes I'll see what direction everyone is going in and decide the next crisis/challenge to overcome until players are satisfied to write an ultimate ending or exit for their character/s. For example the next Arc could be Finding the Source of Power, if the prerequisite is paid for.

Finally, my own situation. I've been working a bit back and forth with Esty on this and have committed a fair amount of effort, but in open honesty I'm not currently sure if I'm in the position to run this indefinitely. I can do this for a month without impacting myself in the foreseeable future but beyond I simply won't know until we get there.

At that point, I'll either confirm myself able to continue or at least hopefully hold long enough to pass the reins again should it be necessary.

- : PHEW : -

Well this was a long damn post wasn't it? Don't worry I'll have a summary below.
I'll get to writing the second post now, might be a little lengthy, but summary of it is:
- Next round will be a 'beach day' for everyone's characters to be goobers.
- Round after with be the Aid Crisis.
- After that, we'll discuss together if Est still isn't back and I'll likely write her characters aside for her to use later.
Alrighty finally sat down sorry. First post will just be replying to stuff then second post will be the pplan inbetween Est's return:

instantly cancels flux

*Me being immediately deleted*
*WARNING LOUD*


Please no destroy me haha

Should the current war be put on hold then, Flux? Right now, Matthias is more leaning towards the "quickly finish the war by beating the shit outta people before the lack of aid becomes a problem" method of handling things, but I can understand if you don't want to puppet Est's characters in this case.


The current war will be placed on hold for the moment. I'm thinking of a scene/round where players have to establish some form of self sustainment for their faction/districts themselves or through collabs. Potential examples: @The Savant Asterion's public fruit gardens being expanded, @LanaStorm Emily's relationship with Noc Noc burg for infinite chow. (Will explain this micro crisis and reasoning further in next post).

It does leave my character(s) in a bit of a sticky situation (my own fault really), but I certainly don't mind waiting to resolve that, and seeing what other characters get up to in the interim.


For the next 2-4 weeks if the aid blockade crisis goes ahead that shouldn't be an issue. After that it'll actually be a very good way to sideline Ezra for later while getting Adel back into the game if Esty is still away. (Can explain Adel in PM's. Will explain Ezra and Esty's other chars in second post after this).

Currently, my character and NPCs are in an interesting situation, because I was writing up a storm with Est in a google document.


I imagine that is very heavily intertwined with Esty's characters directly, in which case out of respect I'm not sure I can help with unfortunately. I am happy to look at what's there and we can try rewrite it in the context of different character interactions though if that's possible and you still want to use that work. Otherwise can always wait until Esty's back and reformat it for that time ^_^.

People were asking for those "nice break scenes" we could possibly put everything on hold and have an imaginary reality sequence or something. So it's not overly serious and can be fun while Est is away.

I like this idea, that way Est will have an easier time once they return ^^. Nothing to catch up to. It would be like a nice...filler episode haha.

Every anime has those random filler episodes that don't make sense or they take way too long like Naruto. 😂 It could be a nice touch and it would help keep everyone interested hopefully along with making it easier for est to return too.


I was thinking exactly this and going with that 'beach day' idea I proposed not too long ago. I also think everyone deserves a fun piece to commemorate how far this has come. I really mean this when I say everyone has done a phenomenal amount of work toward this. All of it's quality material to read and some pieces are reaching the length of a tenth of a novel, combined together is truly becoming an epic and everyone should be proud of that <3.

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I'm excited to see what ideas Flux has up their sleeve as well. Their post got me interested.


I have A LOT of ideas I could run with, but I'll need some time to make sure I understand everyone's characters and the setting well enough to keep it faithful to it's origins and something that Esty can comfortably come back to. This is something I'll explain further in the second post.
This is going to come out of the blue, and I do this with a heavy heart, but a family emergency has come up which will remove me from the site for an unknown period of time. I won't be able to GM for you lovely people anymore. I nominate flux as my co-GM, and hope you can all still thrive without me.

Take care, everyone.


So sorry to hear :( hope things stabilize for you soon

I'll post something in a couple hours in terms of two intermittent events/plots that shouldn't really affect the overarching story too much and also keep Ezra, Vincent and Antonia safe for the moment (hopefully that could carry for approximately a fortnight to a month).

After that I'll make a call on my ability to run things and whether players are enjoying where I'm directing it.
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What is better... 100 new Gyfted police officers loyal to Leon? Or one Lion man with 100 new POWERS!!!!!??!?!?!


Leon's corruption arc is just becoming the most coked up sugarcrush goblin kitty this world has ever seen lol.

EDIT: I'd give the man some credit and say 8 - 10 before his heart just Explodes. My real question who would survive the crack off longer than the other, Khor or Leon? Crazy vs Actual Fitness. It's like a drinking game! Kinda! haha
Damn, y'all were doing shit in Riverbend right under my nose?

Guess that'd definitely put up some complications regarding trusting the Eel with anything. Which is fine. I need more enemies.


I wouldn't worry about the Eel. I don't think it's a name anyone will be hearing any more lol.


Khor Kosović - The Eel, Ezra Blackheart



War torn streets, Riverbend


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Soon, Khor found herself in the back of a van entering Riverbend. The district was in ruins, smoke spewing into the air. She still wore her hospital gown, still had the pistol, the only addition being slippers on her feet.

Ezra sat across from her, arms crossed.

”Kill the monsters. Report back to the van.”

Those were his instructions he had told her before they left.

The van came to a stop, and the back doors were flung open.

Khor just stood in the alley she’d been ditched in, looking like an escaped asylum patient and just about as confused. She only managed to find her voice as the van disappeared, shouting out after it. “What- Are you serious? What the hell does that even mean?”

She quickly scanned her surroundings. What the good goddamn was Erza talking about. The sounds of fire fights dying down or periodically kicking off echoed through the district but other than being in a warzone she had no idea what ‘kill the monsters’ meant. Did he mean the bad guys? Who were the bad guys here?

She kicked off the slippers. They’d be useless here, at best tripping her up in a vital moment. Maybe she could find someone who fell in the fight that had occurred prior, if she was lucky she’d find some body armour, boots that fit well enough, some ammo.

Shit ammo. She’d been so zealous to share a moment with Erza she’d ditched the magazine and only left herself with a single bullet. On that note what the hell was she thinking, share a moment with Erza. A moment of weakness to let the monster in, the only uncertainty being whether that monster was him or herself. She scratched her head with the tip of the pistol while muttering. “You know it’d probably make you smarter if you pulled the trigger. Blast all that bad meat out of your own head. Idiot.”

The pistol went back to her side. A breath. By some miracle she was out and free. No point squandering yet another lease on life. Kill the monsters. Figure out whatever the hell that meant, get some gear, do some business, at least long enough to find a way back underground to disappear before they thought she was running away. That was the plan then. She could scorn herself for crumbling to her own demons later. Just need to survive. The simplicity was strangely calming.

Inspecting the alley found a man who’d bled out, complete with a helmet, knee and elbow pads and a vest containing undamaged ballistic plates. Checking his boots it seemed his size was close enough for her. Running would suck but it beat rubble and debris carving her feet up till she couldn’t even walk. Quickly kitting up she inspected the body for ammo. Not a bullet left. He went down screaming, without a doubt. The rifle rested empty but she picked it up too. Worst case it’d make a good club.

Now to find whatever the hell Erza was talking about. She walked carefully toward the end of the alley. Monsters. You’d think he could’ve been a little clearer. Hell if it meant putting an end to a fight she would’ve happily obliged. Seemed Erza was like most other cowboy speech rule the world types, speaking in metaphors rather than getting to the damn point-.

She looked by the corner. Erza’s words became clear. Kill the monsters. A broken body shambling just beside her exit with limbs pointing out in directions not thought possible. Each end a sharpened appendage of bone to shred whatever it struck. She found herself lost for a moment. He wasn’t wrong. That was a monster. An indescribable horror. As her mind failed to rationalize the sight it turned to lock its eyes on her.

She darted out. Monster’s scythe flying through where she was. Using the momentum the rifle swung out ready to strike. The monster seemed to brace itself. The rifle swung in. Butt stock one side. Wall the other. It’s head cracked and the monster fell, limbs still flailing. She swung again, the flailing now uncoordinated but more violent. Another. Spilt like a melon. The monster stopped.

She stood there breathing. What the hell was this thing? Looking up she spotted more. Four more. All locking eyes but frozen for the moment as if lost in shock. These creatures surely couldn’t feel such things. She couldn’t explain it but she readied herself regardless, rifle ready to swing. Voice growling. “Come on then. Come get some.”

The first two rushed in, the other two hesitant. The first met the rifle's swing sending it to the ground. The second stabbed its arms forward only to catch her follow through. Executing the first with a stomp it’s head gave way. These things were fragile, easy to break. The other two launched forward with wails. A roundhouse kick sent the first to the ground but the second found purchase. Arms wrapping her from behind trying to hold her still. The other got up again and rushed forward.

Khor balled up, coiling her legs. All her strength thrusted out to send the monster to the ground again before landing low on her feet. The monster holding her stumbled forward. She jumped, throwing her legs up. Her weight overwhelming its balance. Both falling flat she kicked out rolling to her feet. Bringing the rifle down like an axe, another monster went still. The other turned as if to run. She pulled the pistol and fired the sole bullet, putting it down quickly.

The last one on the ground seemed injured. Scuttling its limbs to try and get back to its feet but only pushing itself away from her. She flipped the pistol in her hand to hold it like a hammer. Coming down atop the monster the back of the pistol came crashing into its skull again, again and again. It stopped moving. She felt warm now, wet with gore. Ready for the fight. Looking further down the street she saw a countless horde dispersed about, just staring at what she was doing. Looks like Erza was getting what he wanted today.

Ezra watched from an unseen place, wholly satisfied with what he was seeing. See? She just needed the right target.

It wasn't enough, though. There were still monsters eligible to be decimated. For Khor to be truly transformed by this, she needed more. She needed to be thorough. She needed to leave no room for this to be simply chalked up to as a mistake.

So, he waited, anticipating.

Khor wasted no time. If the hoard were to swarm that would be that. Reflex replaced reasoning. Instinct overriding emotion. The only way out was through. Anything was a weapon. A brick. A pipe. A bottle. A knife. Occasionally the monsters carried firearms that were still loaded which were quickly emptied in Khor’s hands. The street was a haze of red. One insane effort to make it out alive but even that was fading. What replaced was a thirst for more.

More threats. More risk. More adrenaline. Slowly all that mattered was the rush. Riding the mirror's edge of survival. Nothing else compared to feeling so alive being so close to death. Actions became rhythmic. Exhaustion became irrelevant. So long as her blood pumped she could go on. Escape seemed a distraction now. The only objective at this point was turning beast bodies back into dead bodies. After minutes of madness the end of the street was nearing, the final groups remaining.

The cries of monsters were predictable, almost comforting. It was just a monster, wasn't it? This seemed to be an unwavering truth, until… Something strange happened to the noises they made. Changing pitch, then almost like they were changing frequency, until– pure, unadulterated horror of human voices cut through. Some very small…

And, before Khor’s eyes, the next thing to go was the veil over her eyes. The monsters quivered in their forms, before they lost their skins like waves of dust, and underneath? People. Some were Order, yes. But the majority? Civilians. Mothers. Daughters. Children.

Across the crimson-washed street, there were little shoes that fell off in one child's attempt to escape. A woman's purse. Mangled corpses no longer recognizable. The remaining groups of people stared in horror, before they continued to flee.

”M-monster!” A voice shrieked out.

And, standing silently by Khor, now revealed with his hands clasped behind his back, was Ezra, his abyssal gaze neutral.

”It's not your fault, you know? You can't help who you are.”

Khor just stood still. The rush dissolved immediately to shock. She didn't turn to face him, fearful of glimpsing her path of carnage behind herself. She stood, mind surprisingly blank, contemplating what brought this to happen. She'd let her guard down to let him in, and he proceeded to take every liberty and more.

Despite her denial she knew deep down who she was to begin with. She knew to keep it tamed and unleash it only to fight through the madness of this city when required. But she still offered that moment of weakness. All just to feel accepted for a moment. To feel like she wasn’t alone. To feel ok.

This was what she asked for. There was no avoidance of blame. She opened up to share a moment. All Erza did was fulfill that request, and even now, a part of her pleaded to give up and fall into the comfort of someone who accepted her.

The only question was why.

Khor’s voice was soft and low, between a growl and a whimper. “Why? Why would you accept this? What part of you makes you think this is ok?”

Ezra quietly moved to stand in front of Khor, the sharp cut of his suit catching the little sun that made it through a weak break in the clouds, shining through. He placed a gentle hand on Khor’s head, like how a father might be affectionate to his daughter.

”The power to shape your world is nothing to be ashamed of, my dear. When I was much younger, I was buffeted by the winds of those who took, and took, and took.

“Then, one day, a man came to me, and said he could make it all go away. I was given a gyft. But more importantly, I was given the power to shape my own destiny.

“The man wanted gyfts to be put to an end. I agreed, they brought nothing but misery. And so I intend to do just that. But you, my dear, I wanted to save you. Not only that, but I wanted to release you from your inhibitions. No more of this hiding from yourself. You owe it to yourself. You owe it to all your moments of weakness, when you could have taken action.

“You think of yourself alone, don't you? That no one understand you? This honest form of yourself.”


His hand shifted, nudging Khor’s chin up to look at him. ”I see you. And I accept you. No matter what anyone says, you're perfect. And I will be here, waiting, until you fully realize this for yourself.”

And with that, he simply left. Calmly pacing through the scattering crowd as if on a morning stroll. Khor didn’t track him, still lost in his words. He said so little but it carried so much, too much to digest in the shock of the moment. The only thought looping in her mind was that she wished Akir or Adel were here to make sense of everything Erza just said. Outside of that the consequences of her actions bore down upon her. If they had any right mind about them, they’d never see her again.

Erza was right from the start, or at least he was now. She had no friends, not anymore, not after this. All she could do now was accept what she had done and what she truly was. Mind turning further to static, a whirlpool of frantic denial giving way to grim acceptance, she slowly turned to take in her work. Before coming to a conclusion on her new identity she saw two people standing where she began, looking over the aftermath as she did. An Akula and another. Blinking away the disbelief she recognized Puddle and Rada.

Rada just stared at Khor, unable to process that this was the work of her friend. Puddle’s eyes wandered the street, analytical in scanning the carnage like he was just trying to attain a body count. It took a few seconds before he collected and concluded on what everything in front of him meant. Eyes locked on Khor’s bloodstained body, his expression burned through her with calm, righteous fury. Even over the chaos she heard him slam the bolt in the gun. Even over the dissipating screams of those who fled, she heard his words as his rifle raised, gun sights silhouetting her.

Puddle spoke clearly. “Śmierć przed tyranią.

His finger curled around the trigger. Rada wrenched Puddle’s arm. A crack.

Khor stumbled back. Dropping to her left knee. She tried to move her left arm. All that responded was twitching. The bullet tore through muscle. Flesh wound, but bad. The pain brought Khor back to the moment as she looked back to the two down the street, Rada yelling. “It’s Khor! What are you doing!?” Puddle threw Rada off, fury taking hold of his mind, rifle raised again, finding no other words but to repeat himself. “Śmierć przed tyranią!

Khor dove aside. Another bullet ripped through the air. She sighted a subway entry and broke into a run. Stumbling as another bullet cracked by her. Rada could be heard pleading for them both to stop but neither Puddle nor Khor had the mental capacity to comply or acknowledge.

Her injuries were taking their toll. On a good day Puddle stood no chance, but in her state it was only a matter of time before he caught up. Trying to stay on her feet she tumbled over a turnstile. She wasn’t sure why she was fleeing or where she was going. She only knew primal instinct, and that was to run, to flee, to be anywhere but here. Why she even wanted to keep fighting, to keep living was a mystery but she fought on for instinct’s sake alone.

Puddle could be heard clomping along behind, keeping better pace than herself, following the trail of her victims and her own blood denying her escape. Darting down service tunnels she descended further swinging round stairs as Puddle's breathing could be heard above. Soon Khor burst through a final door to find herself on a landing next to a raging waterway beneath the streets. Eyes wild found no other exit. Turning found Puddle. Rifle raised.

Puddle left the rifle hanging in her face as he slowly stepped closer. The distance inevitably closing with every minute step.

Puddle spat through clenched teeth. “Khor Kosavić. By my word, held as the highest truth, on the lives of my brothers and sisters. Under charge of tyranny, I challenge your title to trial of branding. Affirm status or accept the omega pact.”

Rada stepped through the doorway heaving, finding words through panic. “Puddle it’s Khor! It’s Eel!” Rada slowly approached Puddle. Hands raised. “Just put the gun down. Let her talk. This isn’t her. Someone else did this.” Rada’s eyes shot to Khor. “Tell him, tell him you wouldn’t. Tell him you couldn’t. Tell him what really happened. Please.”

Khor’s eyes drifted off the gun and onto Rada. Khor wanted nothing more than to lie, to tell Rada that this was just a bad dream or someone else's mess, but it just wasn’t her nature. She’d lived a life of fearless accountability, one that left her without regret. She always took responsibility for her actions so she’d be the champion of her own destiny, and now was no different. She looked at Rada one last time with a weak smile. She wouldn’t accept dishonor or death at Puddle’s or anyone else's hands, but she’d take both on her own terms.

She fell backward. Feet slipping off the landing. Rada shrieked. Puddle dove forward.

Then the water took her.
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