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@Siber Your character feels very D&D, I guess you played it before? :P
The Background is mostly Ok, but there was a few things I wanted to clarify with you.


  • Apart from Sand Elves, Elves mostly stay within their forests so there is little chance Elven Archers would protect Euphoria. Most likely, it would be half-elves. There are a few Elves that left Mica and Yeryn, and a population of half elves across Edanica, but it is unlikely that this close to the borders of Mica you'd have elves living outside. :)
  • That part of Edanica is scarcely populated. It would make sense that Euphoria lies close to the coast, to the West. Most likely, tourists would refer to people traveling by sea to and from Malia, and stop there in the way.
  • So, Lunara is your chosen God correct? As per the edit made to the OOC, part of the chosen God's essence will be inside of your character. Just wanting to make sure!


@Assallya Hey! The character's backstory is mostly fine, with plenty of details for me to use later. Like you already mentioned it could had a bit of polishing, but it's a detail. There are only two things I am worried about;

  • Evil alignments generally makes me wary. They can be fine if played well, but an "Evil" character is someone that like to hurt others and innocents for no reasons and take pleasure in it, for example. It could be someone that's cruel and with zero empathy - so they generally make pretty poor companions. This is why I am double checking to make sure this is what you wanted / mean when you picked Evil? If you want someone with no rules that is generally pretty selfish and lacks empathy, you're looking at Chaotic-Neutral. Evil are generally Demons, Devils, etc and creatures like Bugbears and Goblins that revels in hurting others and killing.
  • I also just need to make sure your character falls in with the others in that she is imbued with the divine mission to complete the mission and stops the prophecy the gods sent them on Edanica for. Despite her generally more selfish nature, even the evil gods of the Pantheon agreed to make their own Envoy work on this with the others!


@TheWendil Not a lot to say here, we had already discussed much of the finer details through PM.

@Guppy Franz You perfectly encompassed the feel of Nuniel's Empire I was going for in your descriptions of the Battlefield. I love it. Arthur seems pretty balanced and apart from a bit of polishing and colours that could be added to the sheet itself, I don't see any inherent issues with him.

@Sleeth Unique idea, which I like. Being an Undead have some implications to it, mainly the opinion of the people you will meet along the journey and, possibly, keep the fact he's an undead hidden from most of them. From your Background, I feel like your character and @Guppy Franz 's could have already met before, on the battlefield :^).

@Rune_Alchemist Good description, plenty of details and a bit of divine confusion. I also do not see any inherent issues with her.

@PigeonOfAstora I found it weird that you picked Eros at first, but it does indeed fit with the Loyalty part of him. So she comes from Brudel, is that correct? Also, I see you specialized in counter spells, which is all fine, but I suggest you also have a few offensive options. There won't always be casters among the enemies, so I recommend al casters have a few offensive options. :P

@Click This Directly inspired from Fire Emblem's Pegasus Knights. I think it was in Path of Radiance that there was a Kingdom with an order of Knights - I loved it so much. Many years later, here we are. Feel free to send me your CS!

And that is about everyone so far I think. Now that I took the time to properly re-read everyone's sheet thoroughly, I feel like the time is coming where I'll make the final roster choice. I will wait a bit for people to edit their sheet one last time and for @Click This do possibly post their characters. I think if everything goes well, the final roster could be picked by Saturday and the IC could start this week end!
@Sleeth

Hey, I saw your question too late - you wrote that very fast ahaha. It's fine to play an undead, especially in the Concept of the RP when you're possessed by a god's essence.

I will proceed - probably today - to reading all the characters again and all that stuff so we can possibly start soon. :)
@Sleeth Yeah. I'm the same most of the time. Sometimes I can post multiple times during the week if things go slow but most of the time I have to end for the week end!
Still looking for more applications!
@Siber Do not feel terrible. :P You didn't know, you're still fully welcomed here.

As for everyone's characters, I am waiting for more application before closing them and choosing the roster. I'd really like at the very least 4 characters, 5 if possible and 6 max but things are going slower than I'd hoped. :/
@Rune_Alchemist@Siber@TheWendil@ERode@Assallya@LuckyBlackCat

Hello people. I pinged everyone who showed interest in the OOC so far, and one more.

I have edited - again - part of the OOC because I have had many questions about character creations and realized a few things were either confusing or did not translate well from on paper D&D to the Guild.

All of the added or edited parts are in red in the original OOC first post;

- The Concept Section have added details and split into points to try and make it more clear
- Added a new 6th rule instead of explaining in in lore. I felt like it was better to be an OOC rule than force it on characters through lore reasons. As mentioned, it can change later on.
- Added a section in the Character Sheet to add the God you are linked to, now.

I'm sorry about that !
I feel like these changes will make characters a bit more unique, though, and give new opportunities in IC.

EDIT: Obligatory, sorry double post.


So they were smarter than Niall thought. It seemed they suspected something was afoul when his darkness dissipated, but they still did not see him or knew for certain someone got it, so he was still safe.

While the camp was ordinary enough, it was well protected by it's location. Assaulting it would be difficult, as he previously thought. If there had been nothing else, Niall might have called it enough and head back top the meetup point, but something the guards said caught his attention. They apparently had a prisoner, or at least someone they kept somewhere and planned to "do something with him". MIxed with the basement entrance that was guarded, Niall's curiosity was picked. Furthermore if it turned out to be something or someone that could jeopardize a future mission on this camp, he'd rather bring the information back to the Queen.

With the moon still high, Niall decided he would attempt to gather more information. Stealthily, he made his way across camp through elevated position or by sneaking between tents, whichever was more practical. He would use his Eye of Night only if absolutely necessary, seeing as how the two others seemed to think something was amiss. Then again, the one sin the camp seemed far too busy to drink and revel around the campfire. Once close to the entrance of the possible basement, Niall went high and scouted around to make sure the guard was alone before striking. He threw his land into the ground close by the guard, hopefully forcing him to look in the direction of the noise at the very least, then Niall would drop but a second later behind the distracted guard and take him out silently. He would then grab the body atop his shoulder and head into the basement. Before he was too deep, he propped the body against the wall inside as if the man was sleeping, which he might as well be since Niall did not kill him, only knocked him out.

Only then would he head further in.
Thanks! :)

First post officially out, so we'll see how it goes from there.


It had been days since Maria left her villa back in southern France. For years now, Maria had been doing her work solo, mostly, and it had been working out rather well. For a time... for a long time, she managed to keep her area cleaned and secured. She preferred it this way, as her powers were hard to control and risky to use and she could never be sure of when, if ever, the day would come where she failed and unleashed something she'd rather not think about. Because of this, she felt as if relationships - magical girls or otherwise - was simply an added risk she had to do without. However, this was no longer an option.

Maria had received a letter, or rather an order, directly from the Grand Ministry that strongly suggested she should relocate herself at the Marrywell Academy, in London. It would seem she had little say in the matter and the Ministry being what they are and holding the sway they did, Maria had to agree with their suggestion. And so, no later than a few days later, she was in London.

Amongst the many reasons cited and half-hidden strong-arming arguments in the letter was an explanation that they believed that Maria needed to stop being solo, and she...kind of agreed, in a way. Working alone was never her wish, but a self imposed restriction for fear of her Grimoire - and it took it's toll. Loneliness could only be endured so long, and Maria's career approached a century now. She felt that isolation was almost as big a risk to her mental state than risking it with others and mixed with the Ministry orders - here she was.

All of this was going through her mind while the silver-haired woman walked through the Academy's paths, eventually arriving where she was heading. Maria had been told to reach the Training Facility B, where she'd meet fellow magical girls. More accurately, she was asked by the Ministry to be a team leader, of all things, and to come here to watch the girls which might become her team members. She tried to do so without catching too much attention, but...

It turned out the viewing space she went up to was already inhabited by a pair of girls; one red haired one and another taller with a gothic appearance, both seemed around Maria's physical age. They themselves would notice Maria was wearing a long black dress that clashed with modern times, her pale blonde hair neatly tied at the back and she was walking with regal appearances, hands joint at the front. She walked up close to them, until she could also see the girls on the training field, then addressed them.

"Hello." she said, keeping her stare blank for now, but bearing a smile as best she could. "You must be Charlotte. My name is Maria de Borbón, freshly arrived here in London. Pleasure to meet you, miss Clementine..." she said with a slight polite bow that, again, betrayed her advanced age and upbringing.

"...as I am you, miss...?" she said, trying to remain as polite as can be.
I'ma have some catching up to do in this IC. x_x
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