FujiwaraPhoenix

Kyoukai no Kanata- Reverberance

Alright.

Well, I'd like to wait until tomorrow afternoon before I'd like to write a post up to kick things off, so look forward to then.

Kyoukai no Kanata- Reverberance

It's permanently open, so sure, why not?

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@KoL: I'll leave that to your imagination.

@Zombehs: Familiar/shikigami are essentially the same thing, but that aside, the concept looks fine to me.

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@Zombehs: Erm... I'm going to go off the assumption that you haven't seen the end of the series, so...
I'm pretty certain that such conduct is usually frowned upon and usually results in general shunning by everyone who knows of it...
Also because, even without that, they need a power, and stacking extra strengths on top of that power is... Usually...

@KoL: Well, it is summer break when the RP starts, so...

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Ah, no, that's fine. Like, I don't mind a weapon user, so long as it doesn't overlap with anything else, per se. So long as you can take a concept and make it your own, I'll usually have no problems.
Miiight be a bit nitpicky if it looks too strong, though.

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@LotusWarrior: That's a darn shame. Well, no harm, no foul. Good luck with your classes!

@KoL: That's fine, then. All my qualms are gone, you're free to put your form in whenever.
Also, if you haven't already noticed, I end up accidentally dropping a lot of game terminology when I'm just chatting. It's... A habit.
Whatever. Point is, accepted.

@Otaku95@Zombehs: Foreigners are A-OK, but remember that they've got to have SOME reason as to why they're there in the first place. It's in a relatively landlocked region of Japan, so...
Yeah.
And for Otaku's second question... Not necessarily and depends. It depends on what you define as a 'gun' and how exactly that scythe functions. I have no qualms with melee weapons, so long as they're strong enough for combat and not enough to bisect, say, a skyscraper in a single swing.

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Alright, reading over...

Well, that much in-depth statistical rundown was a tad overkill, but hey, I ain't complaining. I mean, I was vague as hell on my form, but... You know, I should actually specify that a bit more, now that you mention it...

ANYHOW. It looks about fine now, though given how much of a range it has it makes afk hunting silly, so I'd say maybe not drain an 'average' (I mean, there isn't exactly an average youmu, but whatever) one dry in a minute, because a minute can go by surprisingly fast. Maybe... Two? Three? iono, I just think that, with that kind of ability, you don't really get the most use out of it if you hallucinate vividly for a minute, then go kaput. Just my two cents, but you may have differing opinions, and if so I'd like to hear them.

History seems okay, so if you tune the numbers for the drain a bit more it's more or less acceptable in my eyes. Open for debate, though.

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Okay, that's reasonable, then.

And... Yeah, that needed some degree of clarification. Better.

So, uh... Yeah, no other problems sighted. You're free to enter now.

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Ah, okay. I think I was just mistaken, then. My bad.

And... Okay, that's reasonable enough, yes.

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Alright, well, since no edits have rolled in from lotus yet, I'll get everything else out of the way right now...

@VitaVitaAR: I mean, if the duffel bag's not too huge, then it should be okay. I think. Otherwise, I guess that's fine. Accepted.

@Grey Star:

• Well, not to be technical, but fake glasses don't dull eyesight, per se. They're usually clear plastic, iirc.
• Since when was 16 a freshman? In Japan, 15's a freshman because high school's only 3 years long iirc. Well, generally, unless you're going off of either a) the lunar calendar or b) other shenanigans that may have gone down... I think.
• Please tell me she doesn't bring that stuff with her to school.

's about it, I think. Also, a wok more or less named 'Master' seems... Interesting. I'll see how this plays out.

@KoL:
Hm. Well, nonspecific height is a minor issue, for one, but... Yeah, let's get to the issue of that power you've got there.
Hoo boy. Well. That's broken. Like, a mile is MUCH more than a small city block; I would know, I LIVE in New York City. Like, twenty blocks is a mile here, so even half a square mile is HUGE. Also, after plugging the numbers in following some minor calculations (praise be to algebra plus logarithms), the barrier hits max size in ~7.33 cycles. That's freaking FAST, especially given how it's growing exponentially. Nerf numbers on that, please. Both fronts.

Following that, I kinda need an idea of the rate at which the energy gets drained. Also, the fact that it's inescapable means that there's no counterplay if a character ends up inside while fighting yours... Well, at least, as long as she's allowed to not be inside the boundary while it does its magic. I like the concept, but it just seems really heavily balanced in favor of your character. Not many other issues at the moment, but since history isn't complete I can't judge any further.