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Fetzen@AwesomeZero5: Sorry for taking so long; exhaustion finally caught up to me when I saw the question, so I couldn't respond yet.
Alright, so, basically, the character functions super well even without human experimentation to the point where I feel like you could push forward without it. Most of the form feels like something you could kinda see happening in a film, but that one bit feels... Well, tacked on? The fact that it really did nothing AND that he has enough emotional baggage as it is (which works well in establishing goals/motivations) makes me feel as if you could streamline the character a bit better without needed to resort to that.
Because seriously, I really do want to see how this character pans out otherwise.
(Also because dealing with more things that break the Geneva Convention, uh... Well, yeah, I dunno what else to say.)
You're free to debate me on this, though. I'm fairly open to letting it slide IF you can convince me.
Followup: can you give me a justification for the whole "He has to fight or put himself in dangerous situations since he can’t adjust to being without it." thing? Like, I get that he can't adjust to a civilian lifestyle, yes, but is there further justification for such a mindset?
Anyways...
@Anonawrimo: Accepted.
I might send Daichi off to LA because I'm not sure how well he fits (tonally) with the others.
Speaking of whom: last group, location. Gimme.
Alright, so, basically, the character functions super well even without human experimentation to the point where I feel like you could push forward without it. Most of the form feels like something you could kinda see happening in a film, but that one bit feels... Well, tacked on? The fact that it really did nothing AND that he has enough emotional baggage as it is (which works well in establishing goals/motivations) makes me feel as if you could streamline the character a bit better without needed to resort to that.
Because seriously, I really do want to see how this character pans out otherwise.
(Also because dealing with more things that break the Geneva Convention, uh... Well, yeah, I dunno what else to say.)
You're free to debate me on this, though. I'm fairly open to letting it slide IF you can convince me.
Followup: can you give me a justification for the whole "He has to fight or put himself in dangerous situations since he can’t adjust to being without it." thing? Like, I get that he can't adjust to a civilian lifestyle, yes, but is there further justification for such a mindset?
Anyways...
@Anonawrimo: Accepted.
I might send Daichi off to LA because I'm not sure how well he fits (tonally) with the others.
Speaking of whom: last group, location. Gimme.