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Unless Wraith and EE sees problems in the Flash CS that I don't see it's probably accepted.
I would personal approach as if someone asks for critique, go for it or if something is preventing your comprehension of the post. Otherwise most of what you mention above is just nitpicking and unless asked to be corrected will potentially upset and drive away writers. Most people on the Guild even in advanced are doing this for fun or as a hobby.


Not to mention a lot of us are aware of our tendencies and are hardly really new to writing. I've been doing it for almost eighteen or so years, for example. I would also argue that there is good filler and bad filler (on the purple prose mention), but that goes into my writing philosophy and influences which is another whole discussion itself.
Here's a WIP I'll be updating over the next couple of days. I'm looking forward to this.


So is it done, my man GG?

I don’t think anybody has posted interest in Hellblazer yet, though technically I am supposed to wait a few more hours by my own rules...

Do you have an opening post already done? That might make me consider exceptions (like I did with other sheets in the past).
I guess I'm due for a post, ASAP.
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Sure, I don't really mind at all. If it makes your life easier I could just omit it entirely because in at least the Hellblazer incarnation of Constantine (which I'm heavily going off of) his relationship with Zatanna is sort of just a footnote, they occasionally would work together but that was about it. It was more of a nudge nudge wink wink to DC fans to show the connections between the Vertigo Line and the more mainstream comics. She plays a much bigger role in the New 52 Constantine but I personally hate that version of him with a burning passion because none of the new writers got how to actually make Constantine work. So I'm just going to pretend in my own perfect little fantasy world that his new incarnation never happened. XD


Much appreciated. I look forward to the magical corner you will be working with being developed.
Hope I'm not too late for the party after all.



My name's John Constantine, and here I stay: haunted by London. And London, haunted by me.


Looks rather excellent with only minor hiccup. I intend to work with Zatanna as well and she is mentioned in the Batsheet as a past encounter as well has a working relationship with Bruce. But you mention meeting her in 1977 which would make her way older than Bruce which makes a bit of the backstory I had in mind (as well as future stories) a bit wonky. If it is not too much to ask, could Constanine instead met Zatanna around 1997-2000?
So I'm enjoying the IC right now and I'm wondering what the etiquette is here on giving writing tips?


I suppose I’m not sure exactly what you mean. Do you mean giving or receiving? The way I’ve always done it back when I was a player was to learn off Byrd Man, Eddie Brock, Bounce, Morden Man (Union Jack), and Master Bruce’s posts by reading them and trying to get a similar voice as they had. I asked a few of them through private messages about specific advice and tips which worked out swimmingly for me. Though I obviously still have problems myself (my White Tiger post has some run-on’s and fluidity of written language issues for example). I love doing these games because I keep constantly learning whilst having fun.
HYDRA was the primary reason for Namor's joining of the so-called 'Invaders' , led by a soldier named James Barnes


This was redacted and changed to Jeffery Mace.

I'd like to read it in detail beyond that, which would be a lot easier if you formatted it like other CS's (aka hit the enter button more because it all reads like a giant wall of text and hurts my old eyes).
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