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5 yrs ago
Current No point posting your writing online if you don't care about praise.
6 yrs ago
Is the rioting and BLM brought up yet?
6 yrs ago
Honestly, I don't get the grief given to SAO when there's stuff like Mushoku Tensei where the MC actively lusts for underaged girls. And it's the most popular isekai in Japan.
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6 yrs ago
Reminder that the Pentagon just confirmed UFOs are real.
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6 yrs ago
Also, it's kinda annoying going back and forth writing short replies since I got other stuff to do and that just interrupts my rythm.

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Whew, I feel a lot of characters here are six feet tall or more. Makes my five feet tall character feel small. Maybe that's too short even for a fifteen-year old girl?
@Discontent
Good point. My character is probably around 5 feet tall.
@Cuccoruler
Kinda waiting for Vreskrr's post.
Lily Flameheart


Lily blinked. She certainly didn't expect the ghost to have this kind of reaction. She had expected her to act like Bea did, especially with how her expression looked as nonchalant as the latter.

A heavy weight of guilt immediately settled down in her heart, as she saw her eyes quivering, tears building up in its sockets. She certainly didn't mean to make her cry! S-she's not a bully after all!

"Just...dorms...meanie..."

"Just wanted to find the dorms, you meanie!"

Her heart broke after she said that with such a pitiful expression. She had made a terrible, terrible mistake.

"I-I'm sorry!" Lily quickly said. "I-I thought you were trying to scare me so I scared you back. I-I didn't mean to make you cry, h-honest!"

This was a rare occasion for her. A proud dragon like her rarely apologized, and even if she did, she would do it with a huff, throwing away her face while blushing. She never apologized this earnest before.

Seeing how the ghost was still in such a vulnerable state, she quickly approached and gave her a warm hug, trying to calm her down. She didn't know why she decided to do it, only that she simply had to. She couldn't leave her in such a state.

It was certainly an odd sight, as the ghost was quite taller than her. She could've been her senior, and she would be the one to comfort her. But alas, the fact was different, and her bonnet ended up awkwardly touching the ghost's face as she hugged her.

...Her scent... it's... nice... Her body felt cold though... Well, as expected from a ghost...

After about ten seconds or so, Lily released her, looking closely at her face to see whether or not she had calmed down.

"I-it's alright, I-I'll accompany you to the dorms," Lily said. Her guilt still weighed heavily on her mind and she wished to make it up by helping her out. She just hoped that the ghost would be willing to receive it.

@Rune_Alchemist
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Just two questions/concerns. You mentioned her health and frailty, and how they kept her from attending school before. Why? Why is she sick and frail? Is she still sickly? If she’s so delicate and unhealthy that attending school is too dangerous, how is she supposed to fair at a boarding school? If you could explain this and tell us if she’s still sickly and to a more specific extent, that would help immensely.


Yeah, she's better now. She not going to public school was the combination of her easily getting tired and her parents being somewhat overprotective to her. That, and public schools not really teaching magic that much was quite a turn-off to her. With her now at the age of entering the academy, and her knowing that the academy is all about teaching magic, she is actually excited to go, and she will insist to go even if her body is still weak.

still quite nonathletic though, which is why her score on that matter is 0. If there's a running class, she will definitely be panting behind.

Next up, for the question of her tutoring, all the characters in the RP start out at the same level magic wise. Because some characters don’t have their magic or ability manifest until their first year, its highly unusual that she would get this tutoring at an early age. This would make her much more advanced than the other mages, and for equality’s sake, we’re gonna have to put our foot down on that. She can have received supplementary tutoring after starting high school, but I’m gonna be highly skeptical about before.


Ah, it wasn't my intention on making her more advanced than the others. I'm okay with leveling the playing field.

If you could address these issues over her health and tutoring, and correct your CS accordingly, we would be happy to admit your character. :)


Ask away if you still see something that bothers you.
@Invader Len
@onenote
Oh yeah, forgot to tell you that I already fixed my CS.

And my character's a mage. Thank God I didn't make her a familiar.
Victoria Luxemberg


It was another peaceful day at Silver Lake. Lately, her students hadn't done anything noteworthy, like sending love letters or peeking at the girls while they were changing (Ah, the brazenness of youth), so she had been quite bored. Mid term exam was still quite a way either so there wasn't any hustle or bustle among the students. Maybe she should do a surprise exam? But that would be quite cruel to the students, though she had to admit that she loved the surprised looks on their faces.

"Huwaaaaa~" she raised her arms as she stretched while yawning. It was a pretty unladylike thing to do but there wasn't anyone else in the teacher's room so it's okay.

And then, suddenly, someone switched the light switch off.

"Ara~? A power outage?"

Unfortunately, it wasn't something like that all, as then she could feel her body flying through... something without her consent. And then, she heard someone's voice. "Heeeey. Hey, you guys. You're all alright now." An average, male voice called out. "Come on now. Let's not waste any time here." She had no idea who the owner of this voice was. She had never heard of him before.

And when her sight returned, she was no longer in the teachers' room anymore.

"Arara~ where is this?"

She looked around, only to see that she was in some sort of assembly hall. The entire place was lit by lights hanging from the steel ceiling. The walls were painted white and there were absolutely no windows. There were only a pair of doors at the very back which, presumably, lead in or out of the hall.

She noticed that she was sitting in the front row, and that to the left and right of her was a bunch of other people she didn't know. Some of them looked normal enough, but there was one with some sort of white stringless balloon swirling around her and another one who looked like she was a talking, walking doll, judging by her joints.

"Oh my, am I dreaming? Should I pinch my cheeks?" she mumbled to herself while smiling. Even in an odd situation like this she still kept her composure. That steel mask of her was the reason why some of the more troublesome students feared her, as she couldn't be teased at all.

Her attention was then brought to the front of the room, where there was a stage and standing on that stage was an odd-looking man with a swirly round thing as his head. He was the one who possessed the voice, it seemed, as she could tell the similarity right away.

"Ah, good. You're all awake," he said. "I'm sorry if I interrupted your matters but I assure you, this matter trumps all your matters combined."

"So you must be asking, 'Where are we?', 'Who are you?', 'How did we get here?' and other related questions." The figure continued. "Well I am The Entertainer and you are in IDEC HQ, specifically in the Officer Assembly Hall. 'What's IDEC?' you ask? It is the acronym for InterDimensional Enforcer Corps. An organization dedicated to preserving the balance and harmony of the Multiverse. By the way, I'm the guy in charge."

...Yep, she didn't understand a single thing that came out of his mouth... did he even have a mouth? She certainly didn't see one.

"Now then, do you have any other questions before we head on to the big stuff?"

As a teacher, she very well knew the saying that you should ask if you did not understand what the teacher was telling you. So, she decided to raise her hand like a good, model student.

"Anoo~ excuse me, Sir Swirly Head Man, but could you explain again from the very beginning? I'm not sure I caught them all... or if, at all..."

But her question was drowned by the doll-like girl loudly saying that everyone should introduce themselves, followed by a protest with a girl with an eye accessory in front of her chest (youths and their odd fashions).

"Well, if you want my name, then I'm Victoria Luxemberg. Nice to meet you all~" she said while spreading her bright smile to everyone in the room.

@PaulHaynek
Ok. Will post on the IC soonish.
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Could you explain this better? Only one in her family with magic? Do you mean her family was all Familiars? Because everyone in the world is either a Mage or a Familiar.


Ah, I thought there are people with no magic in them.

Then, I'll make the father a mage and the mother his familiar. Will edit the CS.

How did her mother die? What's the significance? Why was this not included in her bio?


..Yeah, in retrospect, I should have not added it in. Will edit it out.

Do you mean a Mage or a stage magician? Please elaborate a little bit.


The former. She doesn't like the spotlight so the latter is off-limits. And she thinks stage magicians that only use tricks instead of real magic don't deserve the title anyways.

This is the exact same password as the Avanhelsing's. Please re-read the rules, and choose a different password.


Will fix.

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