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Is the rioting and BLM brought up yet?
6 yrs ago
Honestly, I don't get the grief given to SAO when there's stuff like Mushoku Tensei where the MC actively lusts for underaged girls. And it's the most popular isekai in Japan.
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6 yrs ago
Reminder that the Pentagon just confirmed UFOs are real.
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6 yrs ago
Also, it's kinda annoying going back and forth writing short replies since I got other stuff to do and that just interrupts my rythm.

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Every android is equipped by default with a quantum wireless communication device, allowing latencyless data transfer to everywhere in the world, no matter how far. You don't actually upload your mind to the android itself. Instead, you control it remotely from the Mothership. Every android is also equipped with a device capable of outfitting the body with any kind of clothes you want, though the clothes would disintegrate if taken off the body. An android could eat and drink like a normal human, and they can use the nutrition to replenish their battery. They're also equipped with mana-sensing devices so you could always pinpoint where a place rich in mana is located. And of course, they could automatically communicate with the natives thanks to the real time universal translator program.

Here are the loadouts you can choose. You only have 10 points to spare.
Weaponry
  • Arm blaster = Fires off an energy blast from your palm like Ironman (1 point)
  • Finger pistol = Allows each one of your hand fingers to act like a handgun (1 point)
  • Arm gatling gun = Transforms your arm into a gatling gun. (2 point)
  • Shoulder rockets = Fires off miniature missiles from your shoulders that could be set to aim for specific targets (2 point)
  • Arm blades = A sharp blade pops out from the side of your arm. (1 point)
  • Arm grenade launcher = A hole opens on your palm and a grenade is launched from it. (1 point)
  • Energy shield = Conjures an energy shield in a decently wide area that could be used to protect not only yourself but others as well. (3 point)
  • Gravity field generator = Generates an increased gravity field all around you. (3 point)
  • Photon discharger = Sacrifice your android body to create a large and powerful explosion. The amount of power depends on the remaining energy you have. (3 point)

Utility
  • Antigravity flight device = Allows flight (3 point)
  • Spy droids = Releases tiny insect-like droids that could act as additional eyes and ears. Can't be too far away from the android and would eventually die as it runs out of energy (2 point)
  • All-purpose scanner = Can scan all sorts of objects including biological creatures and see what elements they're made of (if the database could recognize it). Also allows you to see through skin, clothes, and even walls, up until a certain thickness. (2 point)
  • Jet flippers = Allows fast swimming in water (1 point)
  • Medicinal nanodrones = Can inject nanodrones into a biological creature's blood to heal its wounds and illness. Not every wound and illness could be healed however. (2 point)


Feel free to suggest more devices other than the ones listed here.
@Dark Light
That's a good idea! I'll think up a loadout system where you have a bunch of tools you could fit into your android body, from flight system to camouflage. Naturally, you can't fit everything.

Not sure if an upgrade system would make sense though. You'll already get the best android body they could make after all. Maybe if you can find magical artifacts and the like that could be researched for an upgrade, though that upgrade would be shared to everyone.
@OwO
Are pantyshots okay?
@Hitman
Is it good enough now?
Woah, that was quick.

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Good character idea! A few points of note that I'd like clarified-
  • Her being physically weak somewhat contradicts her intensive training. While not all people are born with the same level of physical fitness, it would seem that Alexandria would be somewhat physically competent, what with 15 years of rigorous training by her family.
  • Personality could be more fleshed out, seems a bit short, even though House Lionheart is a rather straightforward one, personality wise.
  • Backstory could use a hair more info, I'd like some details about her family and school life, if possible. Doesn't need to be a novel, but a solid two paragraphs give a good idea about where characters come from also, mind-reading demons need to mind read

Overall, good concept and I look forward to seeing what this character will become!


  • True enough. In my mind, I was imagining that her training was more focused on magic and gunplay than physical strength. Combined with her being a petite girl makes her not have much physical strength. I guess she could be more focused in agility and speed than raw strength physically.
  • I'll try to flesh out her personality more
  • Ah, okay. I'll try to add that.

Here's my CS.

Might be interested. I have an elf character in mind.




After taking their baths, the two soon dressed up to start the day. As usual, Corona wore her casual thin sleeveless white dress with a silky green loose coat to cover her otherwise naked shoulders and arms. She also wore sandals underneath, certainly an unorthodox choice for such an institution like a school or a learning academy. Maybe if she were Bestia, it would look more normal, but Machinas certainly mainly wore shoes or boots as their footwear. She also wore a green headband with a rose attached to it as her head accessory. Another oddity for a Machina. Her outfit was mostly similar to what she used to wear as the village apothecary, and back then, she was certainly surrounded by nature more than bricks and machines like she was now.

Esther on the other hand wore a more traditional yet risque outfit. She also wore a sleeveless dress underneath her tougher autumn brown jacket. But the hem was clearly much shorter than Corona's, showing a generous amount of her legs and thighs. However, she wore a pair of shoes and socks as her footwear. And her headband had no flowers on it, just a blue gem to decorate it. In all respects, she certainly looked more like your typical Machina student.

The two then went down to the cafeteria for their breakfast. Both had classes for the first session, so they couldn't dilly dally around for long.

Once there, they took their food first, with Corona choosing some simple bread while Esther chose the chicken soup instead. They then took the nearest empty-ish table, which just so happened to be the one Allie was sitting at.

"Excuse us," Corona said to her as she took her seat beside her. Esther on the other hand sat across them two.

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