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Dragon Ball ~ The 13th Angel

Made additional grammar edits, a couple of re-wordings of things. Added a race name. How is she looking @IceHeart?

@KiltmanBagz

Looking good, nothing caught my eye that was out of place this time. Go ahead and move her to the character tab.

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@KiltmanBagz Alright, so aside from figuring out a name for your race, and a few things to fix in the bio which would be good, the character seems great overall. With a few minor changes it will be character tab ready so consider it accepted.

@DrTwit Hmm well I noticed you spelled [devastating] devistating but aside from the minor grammatical nitpick I don't see anything holding the character from making the jump to the character tab. Accepted.

@NacNak I like majins and don't mind having one, though of course certain limits must be put in place. For example the Power Play rule will be unusable with her candy beam attack. So after reading the bio again, I noticed you ended with her still be imprisoned, was there a reason for that?

@Chev As for you just waiting until you can make those changes before I can decide.

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Alright so we have 4 characters so far which is good, though they still need some tweaking before everything is done. Soon I'll start accepting characters at which point you'll put them into the character tab. From things I have to think about first right now when I have time. Nothing is set in stone yet though so stay vigilant!

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Zepura of the Demon Realm

Name: Zepura

Appearance: Zepura

Age: 38

Universe of Origin: Demon Realm/Universe 7

Race: Demon

Gender: Female

Personality: Zepura is a proud member of the demon race but is smart enough to not let that pride cloud her judgement. As a demon Zepura finds it hard to think of anyone outside her own race as an equal and will not go out of her way to help others. She will lend assistance however when it suits her own purposes. Despite her brutish appearance she is a tactical fighter who will use the terrain to her advantage if possible.

Bio: Zepura's birth was a unique one. She was born with the help of an ancient ritual to endow her with magical powers from birth. The ritual was a success but the effects were not as apparent as the demons had hoped. She was indeed gifted and grew stronger and faster than many but by age 15 her growth slowed down considerably and soon her growth had ground to a halt. Tried as she might her powers would barely grow from then on.

Her parents were disappointed as they had hoped to become a powerful clan in the demon realm, enough to become fit to rule by their king's side. Tried as she might she has yet to figure out a way to resume her growth and the shame of her failure has hung over her for many years. Unable to increase her power further she was forced to instead grow her wit and technique instead.

Once Daiquirian noticed her, he told her flat out she had potential but that there was something preventing her improvement. Unable to ignore the revelation she begged the angel to train her, to which he agreed, but under a few conditions. Normally he would not allow any demons to travel with him as the demon realm was sealed away, but as long as she promised not to share information back to the demon realm and to follow his every order, she would be allowed to tag along.

Annoyed by the conditions, but ready to bank on the chance the Angel could help unlock her potential she agreed. She only hopes she doesn't live to regret her decision.

Aura Color: SnowBlue

Preferred Fighting Style: A combination of melee and magic for an oppressive power-style. She also wields a demon-face club with magical properties to become a heavy-hitter. Even without her club though, her marital arts and magics make her a worthy fighter. She likes to weave magic spells into her attacks to try and force her opponent into a corner for a big finishing blow.

Signature Combat Techniques:

EarthQuake Hammer Blast: Endowing her demon club with magical energies she slams it onto the ground, causing a concentrated earthquake toward the target. After a brief moment the gruond underneath the target erupts into many shards of rubble to pummel the opponent with.

Gravity Pressure Seal: Making a clenched fist, a strange symbol will appear in the sky above her target. She then swings her fist down which causes the seal to activate, creating an intense gravitational pressure on the target area. The gravitational force greatly depends on her magical reserves.

Stone Enforcement: Slamming her fist into her palm she activates this magic, which causes the surrounding area to get ripped from the ground and bond with her body to create a protective layer. This skill requires a constant application of magical power however so it's usable time is limited.

Approximate Combat Strength: Picollo after fusion with Nail

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@Chev Ya so there will have to be some edits there with the history and things. Also remember to use an individual for the approximate power level part. Easier to just be able to compare with characters than try to just have a set power level. Power levels change all the time after all.

The angel in the roleplay is called Daiqirian. He stands at 5'5", of course has blue skin, white hair and a halo, though this one has the tainted red cracks on it. He has a somewhat square face and looks a bit on the gruff side for an angel with a somewhat average build. Also be added my own character to the character tab soon as well. Before I start the accepting process.

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@SolusFalcon@Chev@Archmage MC Just mentioning so you guys for sure know about the OOC thread.

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Just for clarification we will be avoiding canon characters for the most part, so Beerus is certainly not the target God of Destruction. Thankfully there are plenty of Universes out there with their own crazies to pummel so lots to see and encounter. To keep off the radar the crew will be Universe hopping most likely after every major 'arc' to keep the gods eyes off and keep things fresh.

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@KiltmanBagz

So far she is looking pretty good. Hoping to see some 'original' characters and I am not disappointed. Of course it isn't finished yet and I'm not accepting characters at this early date. I like the bio though you do have some misspellings in there you might want to fix like angle instead of angel and other typos. Might want to make the technique names pop up a little more too with something like maybe some underlining so it's easier to see right away.

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Should I post my character submission there?

@DrTwit

Yes you should. Character submissions should make their way over there. Afterward I'll come up with a method to decide which to choose. Put in the regular OOC and not the character tab first though, that's for accepted characters only.