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A repost for the new RP, several generally simple changes have been made, as summarized in the changelog. Otherwise the same.




@Lewascan2 Right, that reminds me. Any tropes you would recommend? I haven't read nearly enough (bad) Naruto fanfiction to be aware of them. Or, rather is there a list of such?


I've put a small list of some basic ones as examples in the OOCOP, which I may expand as others occur to me.
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Sorry, I forgot to do do that.

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There's actually something I forgot to list in long-term goals. It's not major, but just ensuring certain canon elements remain in tact. I.E. NarutoxHinata happening, and the like. But, yeah Jaden/J has a lot on his plate. I won't assume he'll be able to accomplish everything on his to-do list. But, it's nice to have a clear set of goals. I might add a couple things for flavor. But, for now I've been on this computer for long enough (as of typing this)

So, thanks for the feedback!


No problem. Once you've added a hider as well as whatever else you need to for the sheet to be complete, just let me know, so I can give it a (hopefully) final lookover. In large part, I'd say this is nearly passable as is, aside from the final tweaks you and I have mentioned.


Approved!
You can pop that sacrifice to our lord and savior, Itachi glorious addition to the emo clan in the CS tab!

Jaden Bernes CS


As a quick preface, I'd prefer all CSes to be contained in hiders for space-saving/neatness purposes.

That aside, however, I very much like what you have going on here. The list of goals, in particular, very solidly label this guy as one of (if not THE) most broadly ambitious of the current PCs. As things are, I actually can't find a single thing to critique. Is this still a WIP, or would you consider this complete?



@Lewascan2 As you can see... I got a little silly at times. May have... gone too far in some places.


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You can toss Kohaku in the character tab at will.

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You can move Ren to the CS tab.

Okay, before I make my character; are there any relevant clans in the Cloud village?

Other than the Chinoike Clan, not really. There's only one other named Kumo clan that I'm aware of, and they don't have any mentioned bloodline. Although, technically, the Chinoike don't join Kumo until after Shippuden (but before Boruto). In the current era, they would be based in the Land of Hot Water and technically aren't associated with any village, having been banished there due to political machinations and false accusations.


Looking good! The only thing I'd say needs to be changed is that he wouldn't have Calorie Control as a jutsu starting out. That's something that actually needs to be learned and isn't inherent to the Akimichi. As soon as you fix that, however, I would say your sheet is good to go!
Approved (as soon as you edit the Jutsu).
After that, you can drop him in the character tab.


Looking good! I look forward to seeing what you do with this concept.
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You can pop Kaneme in the character tab whenever you're ready.


As before, I love what you’ve got going on here!
Unless you want to fill out the Tropes any for the start, then I’m able to confidently say there are no issues with this sheet.
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You can move Yumiya to the character tab whenever’s convenient.

The Elemental Nations


Date:
1 aNb (After-Naruto's-Birth)



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Passing Go - Year 1: After dying and meeting Kami, the PCs have reincarnated into a new world and life, some with more local savviness than others. How will they survive, and what sort of foundations will they lay for their futures?


Took me a hot second to get around to reading it, but flawless work. I have nothing to comment on as far as required changes.
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You're good to drop it in the character tab here, where I've already prepared the proper OOC: https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/5486277.
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