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Reluctantly retired roleplayer.

Except when I'm not.

Why are you here when you should be writing posts?

You can edit a bad draft, but you cannot edit a blank page.

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@Stein Did you want me to remove the note staying the RP is full from the top of the OP's? Not sure if you want more players or not, but I can remove it in the case that you do.


Gideon Engelhart



Location: Engine Room



Pulling up his diagnostic tool, Gideon brought up the schematic of the atmosphere scrubber filter and turned the device towards Camilla.

"You'll need to remove the filter." Gideon began to explain as he pointed to the schematic. "It can be a bit tricky, you'll need to take your time and gently remove it. Rushing or pulling too hard will damge the filter and then we'll need a new one. Gideon said with a slight smirk. "Sure the Yao Nu would really appreciate that." Turning around for a second, Gideon rummaged through some of the tools laying nearby before turning back around holding an odd looking device with a small tank and a brush head attached to it.

"Filter scrubber." Gideon said with a smile before Camilla could ask. "Just give the filter a few overs with this and she'll be free of all contaminants in no time. You'll notice a distinct change in colour from its current polluted yellow to a much nicer cream. Would love to get it white again but only way to do that would be to buy new." As the words finished coming out of his mouth, the arrival of a new voice caused Gideon to turn towards the doorway only to be greeted by his favourite pilot.

"The more the merrier Daph!" Gideon exclaimed, her eyes more than welcoming to the delicate female form in the doorway of the engine room. "A lot of the repairs are fairly technical other than what I've already asked Camilla to do, but if you don't mind running a few quick errors around the ship I could use your help in speeding up some of my repairs." Gideon stated before pausing, "That is, unless you've got a hidden talent for HVAC." Dismissing his own joke with a wave of his hand, Gideon continued talking.

"Apparently the heat exchanger is on the fritz, it's venting some pretty nasty steam into the kitchen. Any chance you can go and turn some isolation valves for me so we can use out of the kitchen until repairs are finished?" Gideon asked, tapping the display of his diagnostic device before turning it towards Daphne. "The valves are located here and here" He said, tapping the appropriate locations in the dining room and the hallway. "It's very important that you give the steam another path though, you'll need to open the dump valves to vent the steam outside the ship. It's also very important we don't leave the atmosphere with those open so no matter the Captain's orders, do not move this boat without making sure those are closed." Gideon finished turning to both woman as he rubbed his hands eagerly.

"So what do you say we get down to work?
@Stein When you day he overlaps with Miles I assume you mean the aura being able to extend? And I assume when you refer to overlapping with Andrew you mean the aura acting as durability?

Definitely can trim the powers, was aiming to rewrite then either way. Was hoping to narrow him I to the brawler niche so I'd like to focus on the durability and physical enhancements. Can definitely axe some of the energy absorption and the ability to spread his shield.

Also will note what he can presently do and what he can't. Meant to lay my sheet out like that in the first place but decided to opt for something different. Obviously it wasn't the best choice haha.
Posting my CS here, it's got a few things left to edit but I'm welcome to critiques especially from Stein haha.

Dang it lol I thought for sure Glitch was going to get the gang together.
@Stein Was that Glitch contacting Miles and Andrew?
Managed to finish the post so no worries on the extension! Thanks for understanding though!


Gideon Engelhart



Location: Engine Room



The Captain must have been having one hell of a day. It took every ounce of Gideon's will power not to double over laughing at her asinine accusations that it was somehow his tinkering and not her running the ship ragged that had caused the numerous malfunctions across the Vengeance. Gideon had known from the moment they picked up that compression coil it would blow but the Captain had insisted that was the best he was getting with their limited finances. Perhaps next time he should insist she part with a few pairs of shoes so they can get the parts they need.

As Anisa stormed out of the engine bay, Gideon felt his lips curl into a smug smirk. The Captain's heels clacked annoyingly along the steely floors of the Vengeance her hips swaying with so much vigor that Gideon was sure one could give out at any moment.

"Too much negative engine man, ship ain't supposed to be named like this one. Ship should be named with love." The engineer muttered to himself, gathering up tools before turning to notice Camilla had entered the room.

"Heh, no I frosted it instead." Gideon replied with a raised eye brow and a mischievous grin, answering the sarcastic inquisition with a smart remark. "Don't suppose you'd want to lend your pretty hands and help a lad out?" The engineer asked as he scanned his diagnosis tool. The malfunctions were all over the ship but if he had Camilla help with some of the simpler tasks then they could still get the boat in the air reasonably soon.

"The grav boot isn't a huge priority in my opinion, so long as everyone knows to strap themselves down once we're out of the atmosphere we could make due. The compression coil is going to be the most time consuming but..." His voice trailed off slightly as he scanned the list. "The atmo scrubber filter could likely just do with a routine cleaning. Any chance you'd want to take a whack at it?"
@Lord Wraith Since you are informing me on day 5, you can be granted an extension. (One of 2 that I granted when notice is given.) So if you do not finish it today, you have an extension if you so wish it. (As long as it is reasonable of course.)


Okay in that case if I don't end up posting today, I'll just need an extra day as I can definitely finish it on Monday if need be.
It's in the works and should be finished today. However I must add that in the event that I do not finish it today, you may as well remove me from the roster as I will be out of town for the weekend and unable to post before the timer runs up.
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