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Current GM of World of Light. When it comes to writing, there's nothing I love more than imagination, engagement, and commitment. I'm always open to talk, suggestion, criticism, and collaboration. While I try to be as obliging, helpful, and courteous as possible, I have very little sympathy for ghosts, and anyone who'd like to string me along. Straightforwardness is all I ask for.

Looking for more personal details? I'm just some dude from the American south; software development is my job but games, writing, and trying to help others enjoy life are my passions. Been RPing for over a decade, starting waaaay back with humble beginnings on the Spore forum, so I know a thing or two, though I won't pretend to be an expert. If you're down for some fun, let's make something spectacular together.

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So that's were I got the name from! My bad, they have no relation whatsoever, would you like me to change it?


No problem! A change is probably for the better to eliminate confusion. 'Withered Villages' is a fitting substitute from an outside perspective, but would the occupants of those villages refer to themselves as such? Perhaps something like 'Thornmold Villages' would be a little more subtle, conveying a sense of strength and independence to the villagers but also a threatening feel to onlookers. Your call.
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Ahh, my mistake, then would 8000 suffice?

As for villages, they are the 6 the Allied with the North Gara-somethings. They will grow pretty large later on, can't have every Uri crammed in one city. Unless that's what you want. They are also oppose the Kingdom.


I'm just wondering why they're called Sanguine. Do they have something to do with the Sanguine Communion? I don't remember that.
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Why thank you, it will be useful for me to lol.

Approx Cimex Population, if humans are 9000 the Cimex would be about even, in fact, even more I believe, the Cimex appeared before the humans. 10,000, cause it's obvious they would be over 9000.


Heck do you mean, Cimex before humans? Humans were the very first sentient race.

Also, why are the 'Sanguine Villages' in northern Uri territory?
If human pop is 9000, Outsider pop is 90.

I fixed my tiny map.
@Lugubrious

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 8/10
Story Line Advancement: 710 (very nice, Anju are being combatted, Invidia is at the summit, Order shall be restored to the world)
Character Development: 6/10 (Invidia definitely is developing personality once more, he has a favourite part of the day, has a distinct dislike for cold due to experience. I like)
Independence: 10/10

13 Khookies (just implementing the all-new harshness rule xP) also, Invidia should have received a 20 level boost due to the time-skip.


Aw. Well, had to start somewhere. At least I get a hecka-strong boost. Here's your updated map.

I didn't want to make excessive marks by outlining the Sanguine Communion's hunting ground, but it's pretty expansive.
@Hael Feel free to add it and upload the image via imgur.

In fact, everyone might want to place a mark on the map to show where they are - the Tabernacle, Ialu's village, Vestecian kingdom, important places in Uri and Cimex realms etc.


Can do. I'll use the map you put on the last page.
Khookie alert, when you get the chance.
Invidia, the Liaison


Foolish as it might have seemed to some, the outsider known as Invidia could pick an hour of the day that he most treasured. The light of day, to a being with such attuned eyesight, was nothing but blinding, and a beacon to illuminate behind the veil of secrecy beneath which all outsiders dwelt. Night, however, was more dangerous still, thanks to the merciless onslaught of the chaos god. Entities carved from fear whose only purpose was to bring terror and death stalked the night, and the gleam of Galbar's moon did not sufficiently illuminate the clutching shadows. Night also permeated the land with cold, a cruel chill that returned faint but painful memories of the Liaison's old life, before he had been named. Instead, Invidia favored most the hour of twilight, the orange skies and wispy clouds, a short period just between the radiance of day and the despair of night. It was a time that didn't quite fit into either, and so one that best suited those who didn't quite fit anywhere.

And now, the hour of twilight shone down upon the Tabernacle's uppermost floor. Its only ceiling the vault of heaven, it was formed of a tiled expanse lined by pointy spires. Up here and alone, Invidia could sit in a wooden chair and open its eye to gaze upon the sun as it dipped below the horizon. The approach of a Communion monk, breaking the serene silence, gave Invidia ample time to conceal his eye beneath his robes. Turning his masked, faceless head upon the newcomer, he asked, “Good tidings?”

The monk nodded her head. “Designations from the humans and Uri have agreed to meet, and we've received word that several humans of particular note, named Ialu and Zerabil, will be joining us as well. Before too much longer, the summit will begin.”

Invidia rose from his seat and joined the monk as the two made their way downstairs. At the second floor, the outsider bid the woman farewell, and journeyed out into his solitary balcony where the shadow meetings were kept. Twenty minutes later, a dark shape dropped down onto the balcony next to him, and Invidia said, “Good twilight, brother. What n...!”

The Liaison stumbled as a razor-sharp claw raked across his chest, slicing through cloth and almost raking a deadly furrow through his eye, had he not instinctively scrunched the lid shut. Bright, scarlet blood spattered across the stone. Surprised and hurt, Invidia fell back against the balcony, and shrieked in horror to see a six-eyed monstrosity leering at him. Paralyzed with fear, Invidia was unable to react in time to prevent his assailant from diving onto him, throwing him through the balcony railing and into free-fall. With a haunting howl, the creature leaped from the precipice after him. ”This beast went straight for me eye,” the outsider panicked, ”It has killed outsiders before, even in disguise!” Invidia smacked, hard, into the ground, one of its legs snapping off at the knee. He wailed, and sifted through his pockets until he found a reddened sponge. With only a moment to spare before the monster landed on him, Invidia popped the sponge, and new blood surged into his system. Just in time, the outsider rolled out of the way, and his attacker slammed into the ground.

Invidia took quick stock of his surroundings. He'd landed in a garden courtyard behind the Tabernacle, and while there were no people around, there lay only a few dozen paces away another railing, this one protecting unwary walkers from a cliff edge and a far more deadly drop. Invidia hadn't much more time to think, however, as the black creature lunged for him. It screamed when its claws were sheared through by a Dyun-bone axe, Invidia's own. It looked to where Invidia's leg had been broken, and saw a new one, freshly regenerated. Maddened, it pounced again, but though it had six eyes, the outsider's one, blessed oculus saw far more clearly. With practiced efficacy, Invidia cleaved the creature's head, and the monster fell still, snarling, until it melted away into ink.

In its place Invidia beheld an eye, much like an outsider's, but withered from disuse and corruption. Arranging his robes to hide his wound, Invidia looked upon the thing in shock. ”This...is one of my own people. An outsider...once. Not anymore. It is something different.” Hobbling to the fence, the Liaison leaned upon it, looked down at the human city below. ”Who knows how many more there are out there...we must be prepared.” That night, Invidia addressed the Sanguine Communion, and began the Cleansing—a hunt for the Secret Hunters, an endeavor to root out and rid the world of the nightmarish Anju threat.

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Several days later, Invidia stood in the grand conference room, awaiting the arrival of the other faction leaders. Though his leg had yet to heal fully and necessitated the use of a cane, Invidia, masked and robed immaculately, was more hopeful than ever before. The forces of light and order were poised to convene and create an alliance to drive back the evil hordes amassing to tear everything to pieces.

Summary
Khookies - 1 K spent to begin the Sanguin Communion's Cleansing of Anju – 10 K spent to rise to level 5 – 10 K remain

Might – 6 MP spent to rise to level 5 – 2 MP remain
Free – none used – 1 FP remains
Thank you all for participating in the survey, all of you may add 1 credit to your totals. I believe Harine will be doing the next challenge.
Hey Lug, for me and Can collab do you mind if we take control of Ronin or did you want to that?


Go ahead and use him. In case you didn't know, because of the unwieldiness of it, the Imposing Axe has a low hitrate, but it also has huge damage. Do work that in with Ronin's fighting style.

Oh, and if Arkhant is seriously wounded on Ronin's watch, he'll be devastated. Don't kill Arkhant, but feel free to do anything else short of that.
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