Avatar of Lyla

Status

User has no status, yet

Bio

~Gay, polyamorous, I have a partner, and been playing games since I was 2 years old!~

"Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead." -Oscar Wilde

Most Recent Posts

@Fabricant451@HylianRose@tathgon@Oxenfree@TheWindel@CrazyShadowy

Added a discord link to the OOC page! Just a place for us to chat, really. ^.^ You can also do private messages in it, so you don't need to play PM tag. =P
@CrazyShadowy Yeah, just switch where it says it. Nothing big. =)
@TheWindel Yeah, like what sort of knights your commander specifically leads. Obviously a knight commander can lead any knight, but they would be in charge of specific ones.
@HylianRose - The queen has been approved, so feel free to fill out the rest of Willow's sheet. ^.^

@tathgon - Approved! I love the concept. =3

@Oxenfree@TheWindel@CrazyShadowy - If you haven't already, please add your knight company to the CS. I added mine for Adelina if you want to look at that example. =3
Posting her again now that it's filled out. Well, other than relations which I can discuss and fill in as characters come in. But for all intents and purposes here is the queen.



@Lyla


Approved!!

@tathgon - Heading to bed so I'll look tomorrow! :)
@Yuuta Awww I'm really sorry to hear that! Good luck.

@CrazyShadowy - Approved!
@Oxenfree That's a great idea!!! I can't add that to the CS right now, I'm out. But please feel free to add it! Probably under extras right now. Yeah.
@CrazyShadowy - I obviously want to approve, but there are a few things... ^.^ Just minor really. Namely, can you put descriptions of her skills? I know are no brainers, but maybe add what she is capable of (if you want). Where did she get the ability to use water for healing? I assume it's a minor magic, but it came from somewhere, right?

As for her items and powers - you seem to have 3 minor ones and one major (weather control). Is that okay with you? Also you didn't fill out a very detailed history of her childhood or adulthood. Is that really the only notable events in her life? Why did the queen promote her to knight commander? Also in her weaknesses - what words, exactly? Like insulting Willow? =3

Last two things I can see is that you didn't fill out special moments and the aura color - unless she can sense them, I don't think anyone knows their own color. That part of the CS was more for flavor than anything practical. I might find a use for it later, but not really anything right now. =3 Otherwise she seems cool. Almost seems like she became a knight commander to specifically watch over the princess... which is possible, she just probably wouldn't have her own command of knights. Maybe she directs the royal guard instead of a group of knights?


Approved! =3
@TheWindel - The only slight I see is where her spells and items originated from - excluding her blade, which was handed down. Like where did the items come from and where did she learn the spell? Otherwise I think she's an excellent character. ^.^
© 2007-2026
BBCode Cheatsheet