manapool1

Starwars rp

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Mercenary

Name: Lance Ordo
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Mandalorian "Ordo Clan"
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 165 lbs
Appearance:

Lance

Armor

Skills: Close Combat Expert, Equipment Repair and Modifications,
Weapons: DL-44 Blaster Pistol, VibroKnives
Equipment: Thermal Detonator, Wrist Mounted Flame Thrower, and his Armor
Force sensitive?: No

Bio: Lance is a member of the Mandalorian Ordo clan, during his late teens he began training to become a mercenary. After some years he gained some experience as well as becoming a competent mercenary.

This better?

@pkken

yeah, that's good

The age of humans is fairly new

@manapool1
Hey, is it fine if I were to make a little bit of an edit on my CS? I want to make her not only really strong, but superhumanly strong. After all, I see her as the strong, impulsive, punch-everything-that-tries-to-kill-us type of brawler character, and from what I can tell on the other CSs, there are characters who are stronger then her, but are able to rely on other feats, while Emma mainly relies on her strength and sometimes her charisma.

@Framing A Moose

sure, but don't make it too much, got it?
Like, stay at around martel's level.

Fairy Tail: We Are Family

my excuse is I'm lazy
I am bad at this

The age of humans is fairly new

Feeling the torch leave his hand, he nodded to emma with his same stern look that he kept and watched her return to the others. Inside the dark, barely visible steps made of sand stone led evenly down the at a rather steep level. Them seemed well instact, except for the first two, and where covered in various markings and symbols. Only the first ten where visible, even with the new light. Kanaan was suprised to see the ball of light, stepping back a bit.
"Oh dear, I was not aware one of you was already able to use magic... I am glad"
He muttered, seemingly slightly relieved by this before her turned to the vampire.
"Your men are welcome to come with you, but in so much armor, and as a bigger group, you will be a bigger target, and I should let you know that no average warrior will last long down there. I am sure your men are capable...but monsters are no laughing matter"

Starwars rp

WIP
Name: Shana Octhar
Gender: Female
Age: 28
Race: Corellian

Appearance

Skills: Flying ace, Mechanic and great with blast pistols
Weapons: A blast pistol (shown in appearance)
Equipment

Spaceship: YT-2400 light freighter

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Force sensitive?: No
Bio: Shana has jobbed quite a while as a smuggler now and knows the underworld better than her homeworld Corellia. While she isn't on a job she maintains her ship and tries to improve it.

@DiZL ReloadeD

APPROVED
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Starwars rp

Mercenary

Name: Lance Ordo "Knives"
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Race: Mandalorian "Ordo Clan"
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 165 lbs
Appearance:

Lance

Armor

Skills: Close Combat Expert, Equipment Repair and Modifications, Agile warrior
Weapons: Heavy Blaster Pistol , Dual VibroKnives
Equipment: EMP grenades, Thermal Detonators, Smoke grenades, Wrist Mounted Flame Thrower, and his Armor
Force sensitive?: No

Bio: Lance spent half of his life on the planet Ordo, home to the Ordo Mandalorian Clan. Since young age Lance has shown talent, most notably in close combat wield VibroKnives as his primary weapon of choice, also earning him the nickname "Knives" because of his deadliness at close combat with the VibroKnife. He lived most of his life on the planet Ordo, when he began training he was the age of 8 and the time he took on his first job was the age of 16. After being in the business for 8 years Lance has made a small name for himself being competent in taking care of what his employers ask.

@pkken

first off. you're not going to be an agile warrior in mandolorian armor, let me tell you that now.
Second off, how what kind of heavy blaster pistol?
Too many grenades, and tell me how many you carry of each. Be reasonable.

Starwars rp

-.-, So many female characthers... *Ahem* Anyway about balance issues, i made some changes to my characther:

Change 1: Ive heard that Shien and Djem So tough they are both form 5, they have diffrent objectives: Shien Focuses mostly on blaster deflection and Djem So focuses on turning enemies attack in defendse into offense. So i will add Djem So with Shien, but ill lower Ataru to Basic, since Shien and Djem So are still Form 5 and are still focused on counter-attack AKA Deflect and redirect blaster fire and turning strong defendse into crushing offense.

Change 2: Remove force stealth [Its enough? i can also lower skill with Force Augmentation]

Change 3: Improving/Editing Bio and Personality

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@CommisarJhon

It will work man, though I may be slightly harsher on you at times, sorry.

Starwars rp

@HaltingBlooper
Approved

Starwars rp

Name: Tex

Gender: female

Age: 20

Weight: 111

Height: 6'5

Race: human

Appearance:

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Appearance in equipment:

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Personality: strong, cold to most, usually inconsiderate, independent.

Skills: hand to hand combat, guns and aim, gun repair and cleaning, speed, flexibility, dexterity, athleticism

Weapons: her special modified lazier pistols, wrist fla,e thrower, And more along the way.
Equipment: her armor, impact grenades, and gear attachments.

Force sensitive?: no

Bio: grew up and raised in a hostile environment with other mercenaries. She's grown cold and inconsiderate over the years but has a soft side that she doesn't show anyone. And through the jobs she's become a prime killer.

@manapool1

@Lunar

what kind of laser pistols? Also, get rid of the speed thing. Your character is in mandalorian armor by the looks of it, which is extremely heavy.

Starwars rp

@RumikoOhara
You're approved, can't wait to see in game