Memory

Myriad Reality

*Shockwaves and tremors from the battle cause my balance to falter, fury flashing in my eyes. And a low snarl echos beneath my mask, I right myself my weapon flashing as I stand upright then-*

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Why-
*The clang of my blade, now jet black sword echos as I slam the flat of square at your jaw.*
Won't-
*I slam the backswing into your chest by the hilt of the sword, fury and rage forcing my full strength to manifest. Each blow cracking the planets surface.*
YOU DIE!
*My last blow sends breaks the earth beneath us*

@Dark Cloud

*Slides backward across the surface of the planet from the force of the attack, and I throw an onyx dagger at you, propelled by the shadowy energy*

Myriad Reality

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*Dashes forward, taking wide strides toward you as the barrier drops and dragging my blade through the dirt*

@Valiance

*Stomps, causing trenches to burst open with the black energy and engulf you*

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*my head tilts upward hard and I smile, slugging you with uppercuts and hooks towards your chest and head, each connection is met with thunderous shockwaves*

@Ignacious

*Matches each strike with a blow of my own, resulting in shockwaves rocking the planet beneath us*

Myriad Reality

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*pushes my fist more and all of the magic circles overlap, creating an explosion that acts as a second, full-powered punch*

@Ignacious

*Takes the hit in order to uppercut you at the same time, releasing waves of the black aura that crumble the rocks at our feet*

Myriad Reality

Oh and if you want to edit that last one as a result, feel free. Up to you.

Myriad Reality

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*Holds my hands out in front of me as a curved blue barrier appears, reflecting the laser into several smaller lasers in random directions*

@Valiance

*Follows the attack with a burst of black spheroids that tug non-anchored surroundings into their centers*

Myriad Reality

@Memory Ah I've never done these boss like battles. I don't believe my character would give up. Also, thank you. How do I do a good job though?

@Dark Cloud

No worries. We try to keep things dynamic rather than scripted, so the fact that he's pushing doesn't mean that he's unbeatable, it just means that everyone needs to push harder =P
A lot of people struggle with showing how powerful attacks are with descriptions of how they impact the surrounding environment or visual effects that accompany them. It's a really good skill to have.

Myriad Reality

@Dark Cloud

Idk if it's any help or if this is just what you're doing with this guy, but final boss style fights in MR usually last a really long time, so a lot of back and forth posts are expected. If giving up is just what your guy would do, that's fine, but you don't have to if you don't want to. As a side note, you do an awesome job showing rather than telling with damage.

Myriad Reality

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No, you do not understand.
*My form distorts, shifting in and out of reality. Voice filling everyone's minds...*
But I will make you understand...
*Something within you feels different, like your strength is being drained, and then you see me. A shadow cast over the land, dwarfing the horizon and I laugh.*
Then I will break you.

@Dark Cloud

*Solid pulses of darkness emit from my body and slam into you, each bursting on impact*

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Setting the mood?

@Valiance

*Aims at you and releases all of the stored light in a concentrated laser*

Myriad Reality

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*Steps backwards, my eyes faintly glowering at you in all your brilliance. Yet I do not flinch, I look almost hungered by the sheer amount of power I sense in you.*
Impressive

@Dark Cloud

Your kind is fixated on power. It will be your undoing.

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I expect you to survive this.
*slides up to you, and in a blink of an eye I punch your face, the magic circle compresses, metal that is covered in a aura of red and black energy bursts out of my fist and arm, connects to your face cracking the space around us like glass, the same black and red energy sprays out behind me from the magic circle*

@Ignacious

*Pushes back against the punch with my head for several seconds, the energy fighting for dominance—moments later, dark fire flares up around us*

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*Shields my eyes but doesn't avert my gaze*

@Valiance

*Raises my hand and drains all light from the planet*

Myriad Reality

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Nothing witty to say?
*Suddenly from behind you a vein of amaranthine pierces the back of your skull. Several shadowy hands pinning your arms and legs, then your mind begins to feel as though something is causing you to lose important memories. Your filled with vile thoughts, your very being being corrupted.*
Come on say something funny.

@Dark Cloud

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*Walks to the edge of the pit and looks down*

@Valiance

*A geyser of caustic light bursts from the pit, and I step out of it’s brilliance*