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3 mos ago
Current I would like two months alone in the forest in a comfortable cabin with good wifi and a stocked library please and thank you
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4 mos ago
the library just gets more amazing.
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5 mos ago
brb my reality is being challenged
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6 mos ago
One more day.
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6 mos ago
Anemia sucks. I feel like there's an invisible vampire sucking my energy through a straw.

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@Polybius The plot thickens! A part of me wants to connect this somehow with the Stellar Express, maybe some branching sects sprinkled throughout the continents. They'd be right at home in Loris City, too.

@ChickenTeriyaki If I understand correctly, Ari shares two bodies: one in Loris, one in the wilderness? What exactly is her motive? Would you mind explaining what's happening and why? ;)

(also, your linked picture doesn't work, all I see is a placeholder that says "no hotlinking." xD)
Vincent began to trudge throughout the mansion and using his pen drew the required sigil on each person he found then placing their soul stone into the sigil to return it. He decided he would start with Maribeth and go around the house from there.

The stone flashed and hovered a moment above the glowing sigil before it seeped slowly into the stone. By degrees, Maribeth's statuesque form gained shades of color -- until her eyes cleared and she made panicked sounds of pain and terror while the rest of her body regained its functions. Finally she collapsed to the floor, her head in her hands, shaking uncontrollably. It would take an hour or more before she was in any condition to speak, let alone get up on her own.

Others were luckier; depending on the inherent strength of the soul, some of the servants were quicker to recover. Turalee, the cook's apprentice, roared in frustration while still frozen in mid-run; when command of her own body returned to her, she stamped her feet and whirled to face Vincent, lilting only slightly with a lightheaded vertigo. "I sawed ev'ryting, sah," she snapped. "Ta light'nin', an' ta Grit. End o' th' world, o'er mah rottin' corpse." She rolled her shoulder and cracked her neck. "Tank ya, sah, I owes ya. We fitin' now, sah?" She punched her palm.

Quog, the gardener, had been asleep when he'd been turned to stone. Upon his revival he continued to sleep, to wake a bit later with no clue that anything was wrong, save for the peculiarity of the sky. He was a big man, built like a beer keg, who said little and had a face as expressionless as a wall. When he finally understood the gravity of their current situation, he grunted his support and proceeded to do as he was told with obedient and determined strength.

A few of the servants had lost their soulstones, probably stolen or devoured by Grit. Most of the eight that Vincent was able to revive awoke in varying states of incapacity.

"When this is over," said Randy in a careful tone, "and we've saved the world, may I remind you that you left me atop the Wall." He hadn't until now quite realized his situation. He was beginning to enjoy the power he now had to destroy Grit completely in a single swing, but he now saw the very real possibility of what might happen to him afterward -- placed back on the hooks on the wall to talk to himself for an eternity.

“Roy. Would you as kind as to contact her Majesty?” Berry then focused her efforts trying to look outside the estate. “I feel she would like to be informed of our current situation.”


"Sure thing, Ma'am." Roy stood up straight, and he went silent while he relayed a message to one of Queenie's guards.

"I'm 'head of ya!" called a woman's voice in response to Berry's wish for weapons. Turalee -- with a wild frizz of hair and boots under a long skirt -- approached out of the halls, grinning and strained with the weight of a wide metal box that she carried resolutely toward Roy and Berry. She dropped it with a thunk at Berry's feet and threw open the lid. "Five laser settin's, stun ta nuke, disinnegrate dem bastahs." She shoved a laser pistol into Berry's hands, then hefted up a bigger weapon. "En'gy web, one trigger, clear th' whole block. Dem Grit'll go runnin', ha!" She held up the bulky gun to her shoulder and peered through the sight at Roy. "We take back dis city, ma'am, we show 'em."

She gave a small sigh. "I wish I could go and talk to him now, without having to go through all the Grit and other dangerous stuff outside the Wall. Then we could get this all done much sooner, haha. But we'll get there eventually, me and Moth and everyone. I know we will. And when we do, Periphery will be free of Grit once again, and everything can go right back to normal. I promise you." Maria held the queen's hands between hers, in a gesture of support.


The queen's smile was softened by the tears in her eyes, and she nodded her agreement -- she'd needed that reassurance, a flicker of hope and confidence in what had been a lifetime of guilt and pessimism. "We will," she said in a breaking voice -- then swallowed and gave a firmer nod, once again taking on the poise of her position. "We will prevail here and now, restore peace, and ensure no one suffers like this again." She squeezed Maria's hands, breathed, and willed herself to believe.

A thunking and whirring noise preceded the approach of one of the queen's guardian robots, which stopped and gave a short bow. "Your majesty," she called in a crisp voice, "Roy has established communication from the field."

Queenie gave Maria's hand a reassuring pat, then wiped her eyes and stepped with resolve toward the robot. "I will speak with him."

Your Majesty, I'm here with Miss Berry, Roy's voice emerged from the queen's robot.

Back in Vincent's mansion -- where the windows were webbed in blue light and beyond them scales and claws and shadows shifted -- the queen's voice spoke clearly from Roy's chest. I'm here. What's happening? Is everyone all right?

"Is that the queen?" Turalee squeaked, her eyes wide, staring up at Berry as if the older woman were suddenly a celebrity.

"We've secured the perimeter," Roy began the briefing in a professional tone. "Vince has revived a few already, but we're surrounded."

Do you need more weaponry to break through?

"Seems this place is already equipped," Roy responded; the box that Turalee had brought still had quite a few varying weapons tucked between layers of silk. "With a distraction, we'll be golden."

I don't know yet what distractions I can provide from here, but I will make every effort to assist. Miss Berry, what is the situation from your perspective?
@SepticGentleman This is wonderful and unsettling -- a sentence far more frightening than prison. I'm imagining what sort of community would send people there, and for what range of delinquency -- and whether that community might have an alarming population of half-mites, if the halfway house is such a reliable, easy "fix" for the less desirables.
@ChickenTeriyaki I'm loving the weird fantastic mysteries, haha! A continuation of the secrets of Loris City?

The one idea that sticks out to me right now is that a necromancer might become, in a way, Death itself -- which makes complete logical sense. It's definitely a concept that could be utilized elsewhere as well!

Owenshook Forest is the staple, necessary haunted forest.

(Love One Shot btw! xD)
@Crawkid Hey awesome! I don't want your ideas to get lost in the OOC though -- if you wanted to write up a bit of a legend, or a short story, or a bit more finished character sheet, and post it in the Characters tab, that would then allow other players to find and use that info in their own articles. If you've got particular questions, though, we can help brainstorm ideas for your article! Maybe what you're developing here could be a known disease or condition that involves being haunted. Since ghosts and visions in this world are known to be real, medicine and science are probably synonymous with witchcraft and folklore. I can totally imagine medical references that include remedies for hauntings, possession and curses. But just some ideas!

It looks like a few people are waiting on @Polybius article on the towers, though, haha.
Alright, introduced my baseline element officially. Sorta a cosmology within a cosmology with the Barkolopus.

Aetherial energy hasn't been defined in any shape or form by the way.


I was about to ask about aetherial energy when I saw this comment, haha! I want to say, perhaps, that whatever it is that gives the Ruse form and magic spells their power is also the thing that the Barkolopus devours -- but if the Barkolopus is a ruse, itself, then ...? That's a pickle. Unless it's NOT a Ruse, but something else entirely, and it eats the Ruse and magic in general.


@ChickenTeriyaki This is really interesting. So, the workaholic people with such a lack of creativity are unable to imagine anything but their fears, which gives power to the very spell that is keeping them this way. But then there's this plan and ulterior motive, and who's that traveler? So many questions! I could see this existing -- feel free to drop it into the Characters tab.

Are character interactions allowed?


I'm not sure what you mean by that? Interactions with your own characters? Of course! Interactions with characters in other players' articles? Maybe PM that player about a collaboration. RPing in the world in general? Not sure yet -- I think it'd be too muddy to open the IC as a free-for-all RP, but I'll encourage and link any separate RPs that might use this concept.

To keep things tidy, at least for now, if you guys wanted to collaborate on a story I'd keep it within one post. I'm not at all sure that was your question, haha.


I'll just submit the concept of a character I guess?

A woman who has had a powerful imagination since being a kid. Traveled around a lot as a kid. Has two Ruse? Both are mostly invisible. One projects feelings of stalking the woman, and incites fear. He's followed her from house to house, but she's so used to him now she just calls him an asshole and smokes the house with sage whenever he "acts up" (created from stress of moving and fear of new things as a kid?)

And a woman who also follows her as she moves around, but is much more passive through-out the day. The time she "acts up" by inciting fear, is when this character is around reflective surfaces, as she has a sort of phobia about mirrors. She appears as a copy of this character, but with red eyes. Sometimes she'll appear in the reflection behind the character, or she'll move in a more rushed manner as the character passes a mirror/reflective surface.

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Also I like the idea of those towers as well...and my thoughts go that going there would possibly be a philosopher's journey. Its dangerous and incredibly difficult because of the high winds, sandstorms, Barkolopus, and constantly shifting sands. But it is said that there is a man who has found eternal life who sits patiently waiting at the top of one of the towers...to offer guidance and a nice cup of tea to whoever actually finds him.


Yeess this sort of haunting is one of the staples of the concept of the Ruse -- reminds me of Bloody Mary. Burning sage is a nice touch -- Witchcraft is definitely a huge influence, and is definitely real in this universe. I'd love to see this character developed more, or let us know where you'd want to go with it!

Your idea of the guy on the tower reminded me of this painting, by Cosimo Galluzzi:




@Zealous Blade This is awesome! Definitely interested to see where this train goes -- my bet is something nefarious, but maybe it's connected to another location that seems completely unrelated. This concept of a train for people who've given up or are dissatisfied with life reminds me of something but I can't put my finger on it. Either way, this is great!
@Arawak My brain keeps coming back to your creatures, haha. Especially a legendary city that no one can find because it's on this thing's back. Any interest in developing them further? ;)

@SepticGentleman Perfect, of course! Certainly they should make random, offhanded appearances in several unrelated articles. *nods sagely*
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Gotcha.

Maybe whatever Ruse caused the disaster isn't around anymore because he/she/it turned the only people who acknowledged it into tiny, cackling troglodytes, who don't even know what Ruse are anymore.


Karma. Best answer ever.

But are these the only ones? Do they reproduce? Do they die? Do they split themselves into two now and then? Or maybe one hibernates in a trash heap and three come out in spring?
@SepticGentleman Hahaha this is an awesome twist on an otherwise tragic disaster. The best kind.

Maybe there could be more to that tragedy that turned the original villagers this way. Hmmm.

If ya poke this over to the characters tab we can totally canonize it!
woohooooo! \o/
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