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Was a bit of a fast post to get something up and keep things moving. :)
Cari Cruz

Cari was dashing throughout the corridors like a shadow trying to escape the light, stopping occasionally so that she could get behind some cover and scout what lied further ahead. She could see Niesha behind her following in her footsteps, making sure that the fellow pirate didn't fumble in her steps. The two of them could see from behind the cover the AA gun. At about a hundred metres away it looked like an easy sprint, but with the soldiers operating around the perimeter Cari knew that going in through the front door was a bad option.

The sound of shells constantly being fired at the Dusicyon resonated throughout the alleyways and Cari turned towards her companion. She spoke as clearly as possible but the occasional words were muffled beyond recognition, requiring her to perform some rudimentary hand gestures to explain the plan.

"We'll enter in from higher up and use your bow to create a zip line over towards the AA. I can climb up that building and throw the rope down to you so you can make your way up," her yelling whispers were enough to see that Niesha would understand their plan, and Cari finished the brief with her fingers pointing towards a multi story building that they were close to.

Leaving her partner where she was, Cari crouch walked her way around the corner and towards a concrete and brick tower. She placed her fingers on the seems of the brickwork and used her enhanced grip to give her the strength that she needed in order to climb up such an impossible surface. With every reach she managed to gain that little bit of height until she ended up placing her fingers over the edge of the rooftop.

Cari peaked over the top of the edge to see a lone guard watching the AA building. A smart defensive move as any frontal assault would have been left with an ambush from above, but that all relied on the enemy not working out where the soldier was stationed. Carefully she reached back and pulled out one of her hand pistols and took aim at the head of the stranger, and began to count.

"One, two, three, four," *KATHUMP* "five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten," *KATHUMP*

She took note of the six seconds between shots and used this information to her advantage. Cari waited patiently and pulled the trigger, using the sound of the AA to muffle the sound of her own firearm.
@BlizzStill can't accept it. Like I said, take a look at the other two and use theirs for inspiration. Those things I listed were only examples. I'm looking at design and layout too. Explanations on abilities and limitations. Images for appearances. I want people to show that they've put in a decent amount of effort like they actually want to participate, and not drop out after a few days.

I'll give you one more chance before I can't accept it any further. When I see that all you did was hack out a few things and 'leave' the same details in the "extras" part, then I know that you're not really taking this seriously.
@Mugin Yes. Just starting

@Blizz
Declined

Sorry mate. Not enough detail. Take a look at Oni and Dragoknighte's entries.
For weapons, pick one.
For the Bio I don't want anything written for after they receive the contract (It was stated in the Character Sheet layout)
Demon's age should be a number

If this is just a draft, please don't present it until it's fully complete

(On a side note, can the child be older than 16. Having a 12 year old just doesn't feel right in this kind of world. :\)
@Dragoknighte lol yes. You're all good to go.
Reading through, and not sure if someone mentioned it, but it could also be a coverage thing. Having a look there's 5 times the amount of members in casual as opposed to advanced, meaning your selection pool for possible players is larger.
@Dragoknighte
Accepted!

I like the secondary abilities like fix. Something that may not always be useful in battle, but a.unique ability none the less.

Your explanation about Mat's speed is good as well. Not a lot of people think of how speed and reaction time relate to each other.
@chukklehed
Declined

I raised some concerns with you through the PM that you sent, and I have yet to see anything rectified. Instead, you've disregarded my concerns and proceeded with your character design.

I am talking about the points where her senses have been increased, along with her Utility skill where she is able to create a shield from only light. Is she a defensive character or an offensive one? And by saying this I am asking you to choose. Also, the Personal reality bubble is a skill I do not understand. It does not link into the other skills and only mentions that it is the source of her power.

Your demon and your human don't share the same traits. They feel like two separate characters with different sets of skills. The ability to record down spells has no correlation to the ability to create objects and weapons. I also feel that the ability to recreate a permanent object into something else may class as over powered considering you could grab someone else's weapon and recreate it as your own.

The character simply does not flow. It feels like a collection of skills that have similar traits so that they interact with each other, but there is no set theme for your character.

This is without going into that extras part. There is no mutual agreements/clauses between Demons and Humans in their contracts. Demons steal people's souls, unwillingly, as described in the OOC. The contracts are not up for redesign and they will not be added as an extra point into the character sheets. "Telling me" to add that, and then doing it anyway, alone tipped me over the edge.

Fix it.
End of discussion.


@Oni_
Accepted!

Love the design and violent nature of her skills. Place it up in the Character sheet when you're ready.

Also a tip for the horns, just state that when she's not in battle they don't appear. ;)
Oi... hi! :D
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