This is my review of the current submitted characters and I'd like to see if @Lumiere has any thoughts about them. Once that has been done, the judgment will be passed.
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@A Lowly Wretch
I feel like your character would be recruited by Kazzok instead of being thrown in a jail cell. Especially since she didn't fight his forces at all.
@ShwiggityShwah
Looks good to me.
@Veradana
This too.
@Eisenhorn
They're both good though I prefer Lash since she'll fit better in the story.
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Also, I love how you all have problems with your character sheets. ;)
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@A Lowly Wretch
I feel like your character would be recruited by Kazzok instead of being thrown in a jail cell. Especially since she didn't fight his forces at all.
@ShwiggityShwah
Looks good to me.
@Veradana
This too.
@Eisenhorn
They're both good though I prefer Lash since she'll fit better in the story.
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Also, I love how you all have problems with your character sheets. ;)

