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@floodtalon

Oooh, with the proper edits made, that reads fantastic. Heartless is approved and fills up the roster for The Jacks once again. They're currently on their first mission, but as soon as it wraps up we can introduce Heartless to the rest of the team back at the hideout. I'll get with you on the details of that.
@floodtalon There's still no mover or changer aspects to the trigger event. Nothing is there to indicate a drive to escape/flee/run from danger (which should be easy since he's trapped in a shed), or body/self-image issues (which can be a stretch with the situation, but if he's hallucinating via starvation/dehydration it can be achieved). Side note that isn't important, there's no description of his villain costume in the appearance section. It's not necessary, but it's advisable he has something. Even if he can turn into living shadow, he has to return to flesh and blood sometime and could be witnessed doing it. Plus he shouldn't be able to attack people while he's a shadow, so he'd have to solidify for that, etc. Again, not necessary or super important, but advisable.
@floodtalon Awesome possum, just tag me in a new post when the proper edits are taken care of.
@floodtalon It's cool to see that you've migrated over here! I like the character and think there's a great deal of promise for it, but there are some issues that you'll need to address.

he is 110 punds even.


locked him in an abandoned she'd for 3 days.


Than bigger things like games.


These are just some examples of grammar and spelling errors that I'd like you to proof read for. It never got so bad that it was annoying to read, but it was jarring.

Another thing to address is the classification of his power, which I admit comes with some gray area (pun not intended). I definitely agree that it is mover (teleport through shadows) and changer (shifting body to a different form), but it isn't a stranger ability. It definitely has stranger applications, but I couldn't call it stranger in and of itself. What I would definitely call it, however, is breaker as his body changes to a form that completely alters how physics affects him.

Another thing to address is that the trigger event just doesn't match the power. If it was a pure stranger ability, then yeah it'd be great, but it isn't. Remember that a trigger event has to incorporate all aspects of the power classification. There's nothing indicating a desire to flee from danger, to run away. There's nothing involving an issue with self-image. These things are integral for a mover and a changer. To make things easier on you, I won't force you to reclassify the stranger portion to breaker as I would like to do, because making a breaker trigger is difficult and weird (usually involving drugs/hallucinations/other confusing crap that convolutes the whole situation), but the trigger does have to be changed enough to involve and incorporate 1) a need to flee/run away from danger, and 2) a problem with his body/self-image.

And lastly, if you want to incorporate creating shadow objects, then he will need to also have the blaster categorization. That would make him incredibly complicated and convoluted for a trigger event, so I highly recommend against keeping that aspect of the power in order to save your own sanity. :P Besides, someone that can peel off of the wall and garrote you in a closed office is pretty terrifying as is.

Oh, and one last tidbit from me.
@floodtalon@Sho Minazuki

It was unfortunate that Mary's attention had been called elsewhere for this mission. Akoni had somewhat liked her. His new associate? Not so much. More power than sense, and in the grand scheme of things it wasn't that much power either. He wouldn't have been surprised if the half-demon kid got himself killed by mouthing off to the wrong people in the very near future. If he didn't know his own temper, he wouldn't be surprised if he were the wrong person the kid mouth off too. Such an anger management problem, such a mouth, it was surprising that this half-breed was actually as young as he was. Or maybe that was the perfect evidence to showcase the kid's youth. That rash inexperience. Regardless, Akoni refrained from gate walking the cricket into the sky, or introducing him to horrors unknowable. As little as the old mage cared for this companion, an ally was an ally in these dark times. Akoni wouldn't shed any tears if Henry died, but the cryokinetic teenager could at least be useful until then.

That was another thing that bugged Akoni, Henry's age. Clearly the Charred Council held no reservations about recruiting children, that much was made clear when Midori had joined him back in the Ancient Library, but her fate was uncertain and now here was this new kid to take her place. Midori was overcome with the naivety that came with her age, while Henry exhibited the brash side of that equation. Were the Charred Council really recruiting worthwhile agents if they had to resort to these individuals? Or were they simply throwing any bodies they could find at the problem without regard to life and hoping that something stuck? The first possibility was indicative of incompetence, which Akoni had already written off in his discussion with Fenn. The second implied desperation, which was more believable given the circumstances, but there was still something else. Something hiding in the shadows, behind the veil of it all.

The elderly man's attention had been wrested back to the present when addressed by a few angels from the Army of Light. Ah, these were potential allies. Unlike the Laguna, they could be reasoned with. Distrustful to be sure, but given the circumstances they had every right to be. With the right words, Akoni knew that they could be a boon in this ques-"How about you mind your fucking business assholes!"

...

"If you do not die here, the universe is truly an unfair and imbalanced place," Akoni mumbled beneath his own breath. He mentally and physically prepared himself for an assault thanks to the incredibly tactful and charismatic Henry, only to find an entirely different assault on his hands. While Henry barked out orders he had no right to, the older man was already jumping into action. With a snap of his fingers, music materialized from nowhere and Akoni was already defended as four gates materialized around him in his Tortoise Shell technique. An assault had already launched itself toward him, either blind to the purpose of the gates or incapable of stopping its own momentum, but caught up in the attack regardless.

A suitable defense now in place, Akoni got to work manipulating the battlefield for their own advantage. He called upon the magics of his new book, the Dunwich Diary, his eyes glowing a murky blue, emanating small wisps of shadow. Around the clearing, just on the outside of his gates and around the enemies grew the Stygian Eyes, ready to burst into caustic acid once any living thing got too close.
@Everyone that isn't a tropical fruit:

He's joining in game with their current meeting.
The Minutemen and Others - Denver Skyline



"Holy shi-!" Furnace jumped reflexively as Jaunt appeared in front of him out of thin air. Acting entirely on impulse, he swung up an unfolded metal baton and beaned the teleporter across the left shoulder before skidding back. He took a second to catch his breath, recompose himself, and fold up his baton. "Apologies, you just startled me. Considering the day I've had so far, what with Sonika, people being thrown from rooftops, and whatever... That giant snake thing is, I'm on edge. You're... Jaunt, right? I've read the parahuman wikis about you." Furnace's apology seemed genuine, but he also kept Jaunt at arm's length, something in his tone not entirely trusting of the man.

Once that had been done, Artificer had his own reaction, while Celia simply asked him his business there as though it were as simple as inquiring about the weather. She was definitely a bizarre one, Furnace mentally noted. She'd just nearly been killed, yet had no real reaction to the situation, neither did the giant beast have any strong impact on her. Her trigger might have deadened her emotions. It wasn't entirely unheard of.

"I'd be interested in knowing that as well," he posited. "From what I can tell, you're a mercenary. A soldier of fortune. If there's someone on this rooftop that you've been hired to take out, then I am afraid you'd need to go through me fir-" Furnace stopped suddenly, his eyes focusing on something else entirely, not that anybody could see them behind his helmet. The large creature, the big snake-like thing had returned, lowering itself to the top of a nearby building. It was... Staring at them. Oh dear oh dear, this did not bode well, did it?

"Attention creature!" Furnace called out in a loud, authoritative voice. "If you are capable of speech, communicate your intentions now, but know that if you intent is to cause harm, this entire city is under my protection. If you can, please, identify yourself!" To emphasize his point the hero took a few steps forward, pulling out both of his telescopic batons and stepping one leg up on the ledge of the rooftop in a position that could only be compared to the Captain Morgan pose.

"Pleeease don't be a new Endbringer, for the love of god don't be an Endbringer," he muttered weakly to himself and any near enough to hear.


As the Wards began to celebrate, each in their own little way, a familiar voice emanated from the meeting room's loudspeaker to answer Messiah's cries of joy. "I read you, Wards. It's wonderful news indeed. I'll even give you one better. Ira, I was able to get authorization from Inkscape to provide you with Collin's training files under Hero. We have limited access, but it's something else we can work off of." Decoy's voice, normally very matter of fact in tone and lacking emotion through his thick Japanese accent, clearly couldn't hold back how exuberant this situation made him feel. "We'll work together on this during all of your scheduled free time. That's an order Ira, though not one I think you'll argue with."

The rest of the evening passed by with a great deal of emotional turbulence, though not much was actually accomplished. Upon hearing the news, Director Kens immediately ordered that Ira and Decoy begin research together in designing a personal, long-lasting version of the nullification field that could be used on Collin. He wouldn't be Sonar anymore, couldn't ever be in the field with his power nullified, but he'd be functional and sane. As far as the director was concerned, that was a win unto itself. The rest of the Wards were free to spend the rest of the night however they desired, with the understanding that due to such a magnificently botched mission they had to attend training first thing in the morning. Normally it was Captain Morales that oversaw their training, but he was currently en route to a mission as a prison transport escort. As such, the next morning's training would fall upon the Protectorate's resident layabout lazy man: Protean.





7:00 a.m. sharp the Wards were each expected to be in the PRT gymnasium for training. Most of the exercise equipment had been moved to the side, or taken out entirely, in favor of a large sparring mat across the floor. Well, a large sparring mat plus one hammock setup between two punching bags. Lying upon the hammock, gently swinging side to side was Protean, wearing a completely different face than what he had the last time the Wards had seen him. It was strange, he claimed that his shapeshifting was limited to morphing various body parts to resemble different animals, yet even he couldn't explain how he always appeared different as a normal human.

One by one the Wards arrived for their morning training session. Messiah, Margrave, Epsilon, and Tulpa. Each one assembled and was ready to go, but something was wrong. Someone was missing. Where was Martyr, the newly appointed second in command? Once each of the four had arrived, Protean sat up on his hammock, displaying an excellent sense of balance as the sway shifted in unpredictable ways thanks to the objects it had been secured to. "Good to have you all here. Unfortunately I've got to start us off with some bad news, dudes. It's hard to say, but..." The senior hero scratched at the back of his head, a bit unsure of how to approach what was clearly a touchy subject. "Well, Dean is... Not gonna be here anymore. What I mean to say is... He... Resigned last night."

After he gave a second of pause to let that sink in, Protean continued to explain the situation. "He left a note in his bedroom, and baby-cakes, er, sorry, Decoy found it while scanning his quarters when we noticed he wasn't there anymore. Now I'm under direct orders from Ink and the director not to tell you what it says, but I say 'fuck that.' You're his team and friends, so you deserve to know, right? That's how I see it." Their senior hero slid off of his hammock, slipped a hand into his back pocket, then pulled out a piece of lined paper that had been torn out of a notebook and folded far too many times. After clearing his throat, he began to read. "I'm sorry, but I can't take it anymore. Nobody is supposed to get hurt, but me. If I can't do the one job I deserve, then why am I here? I was never supposed to be here. I am a liar, and a fraud, and when it comes down to it I can't even die for my friends. I'm sorry, but I have to try to find a way home. Signed, not the Dean you knew."

Protean folded the paper back up, then tossed it over to the Wards like a frisbee for their own reading pleasure. He'd give them a few minutes to realize the situation, to decompress over it, before speaking up again. "Shit sucks, I know. But please, we need to focus on what's important. The Protectorate and its Wards need to be at our very best to take on such horrible criminals as the Community. We protect the people. It's our duty, and if you ask me it's a hell of a lotta fun. So let's reinvigorate our determination for the cause and get down to brass tacks, shall we? I want us to start with five laps around the gym, no power assistance. Got it? Let's go!"







With everything off to such a big bang, it looked as though the Jacks couldn't be stopped. Though the PRT soldiers were aware of and on the lookout for a sniper, none of them realized Headhunter's position before he got his shots off. First the man covered behind the interstate median. The assault rifle's round penetrated exactly where Headhunter's power said it would and completed disabled his ability to shoot. The bullet wove perfectly between fibers of armor, through the bone, and without damaging any major blood vessels. He let out a cry of pain, but he wouldn't be dying today, not even from prolonged blood loss. Next was the man in cover, firing heavily at Sofia and Love Craft. A significantly easier target even discounting his perfect aim ability, the bullet blasted forth from the barrel of the gun and had the exact same results. The soldier man dropped to his knees, releasing his own weapon.

While Arsenal unleashed a hail of bullets upon the remaining soldiers, and a conversation of strategy was held between Sofia and Chatterbox, the injured soldiers seemed to get a second wind. Pulling out their side arms and using their left hands, they once again began to press the attack, one even diving behind cover to go directly after Arsenal from behind. They had been down and out, where was this confidence coming from? Next a grenade of tear gas tossed out from the remains of one of the vans, landing right between Chatterbox and Sofia. In the same instance, smoke billowed out from the crashed escort vehicle granting concealment as a figure rose up into the air. She wore an all white costume with artistic bubbles embroidered all over it, with a white face mask to match. On her belt were two pistols holstered, as well as numerous canisters of... Something.

While attention had been drawn to the beautiful woman floating high up in the air, someone else took advantage of the distraction. A man dressed in full commando gear with the Mexican national flag proudly emblazoned across his chest rushed through the smokescreen holding what appeared to be, for all intents and purposes, a god damn grenade launcher in his hands. He rushed straight behind cover, then took aim for Headhunter's position. There was no question about who they were facing now. It was Noble, second in command of the local Protectorate, and Captain Morales, their field commander and spec ops. Such opponents would normally be enough to make any villain flee to fight another day, but the Jacks felt different. They felt... Confident. Overwhelmingly confident. This was such a sure thing, how could they possibly lose? Hell, maybe fancy tricks or tactics wouldn't even be necessary, clearly they were the most superior force here! Wait, why were they thinking like this?

Overcome by what could only be described as suicidal overconfidence, Love Craft charged straight for Captain Morales as the hero readied a grenade strike on their sniper, completely forgetting about the hero with the high ground advantage. In response, Noble fired one of the canisters from her right pistol, which struck Love Craft dead on in the back, and exploded into an instantly expanding containment foam. The white substance enveloped the shapeshifter completely, restricting their movement and preventing any use of powers, while still allowing them to breathe. There wouldn't be any time to get their ally out, even if they took out all the soldiers and both heroes surely there would be reinforcements on the way before Love Craft could be dug out, and Headhunter's power informed him there was no way to shoot the foam off without causing massive bodily harm.
Hey guys, I'm really really sorry that I didn't update when I promised. I feel really bad about it. A lot has happened and come up in that time, from the continued trials and tribulations of preparing to move my girlfriend into my home, becoming a father, and unfortunately some unsavory family drama. It has caused an unnecessary delay that I need to apologize for. I'll get those updates out ASAP. Hopefully I can work on some of it during lunch today, then finish it up at home tonight.
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