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Merry Christmas boyos, don't forget to, like, be a good person and stuff. Also start thinkin of a new years resolution you'll actually go through with.
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Status update: staying up all n8ght fuckin sucks and procrastination is a vile temptress.
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9 yrs ago
4 months into this hole 'being a responsible adult thing' and I've come to a conclusion: It sucks and I want to go back to the days where I didn't have to plan out my game time.
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9 yrs ago
Was supposed to be productive tonight. . . will try to be productive in the morning
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@BuddhaIf/When Shizuka gets accepted, what team is he most likely to be on?

Also, to address the review, Any ideas for weaknesses to add in? One i had in mind is that over-using his ability could lead to partial/total paralysis for Yūrei since the body isn't used to taking the full load of senjutsu chakra.

And should I conpletely rewrite the History to make more sense and be a little less edgy?
@RyoRyoRyokenThe latter. It keeps Yurei mostly docile and contained, though he can briefly gain control at times if Shizuka is agitated or under a lot of stress. Yūrei is a facet of Shizuka that was formed during him seeing his father get killed. His mind fractured, and all the anger and frustration that he'd been containing(both the murderous kind and the everyday anger and frustration that he kept locked up on a daily basis) formed into a separate personality.

He's tied to rage and anger, and only triggers when Shizuka loses control of his emotions, which happens whenever the eyepatch is removed. It'skinda like his version of a security blanket, and he gets super paranoiud and agitated without it, which often leads to Yūrei's release most of the time, and quickly.

Edit: Will get to Buddha's stuff when I'm off work.
@BuddhaEdited version, ready for judging

@McFazzerWas originally going to be Ravi,butthen I switched it because the powers had taken a more spiritual bend that i ultimately decided against. As for petrsonality/history, I didn't take the picture into much account, but did notice the similarities.

Edit: Any ideas for weaknesses I could employ? Would definitely appreciate it.
@BuddhaWell, I was wondering something about the fact that he's constantly venting Nature Chakra while wearing the seal. Could most people sense that, or just thus in-touch with senjutsu? It's been awhile since I last watch Naruto and I forget the specifics of the natural energy. In my mind, it just melds back into the terrain that surrounds him easily and mostly discreetly, but that could be changed to give Shizuka another weakness.

Another drawback could be intiated if the rules atround the Kekkei Genkai could be bent a little, namely him healing others using Cellular Regeneration Ejection. In the anime, Jugo could only seem to do this with Sasuke because of the curse seal, bjut I want to broaden that to others to further Shizuka's support role by enabling him to help either heal or at least stabalize people usung the technique. Of course, doing so means that, like Jugo, his physical state and appearance revert to that of his younger self until he's able to replace it, which he can only do as Yūrei.

Other than these two things, I'm kinda tapped out for what else can be done to weaken him.
@RyoRyoRyokenThat's what the Kekkei Genkai does though, since Jugo's clan can passively take in nature chakra. It's the source of their transformative power and their crazy bloodlust. It's not the same as Sage mode because it can't be properly controlled, which makes it closer to the Curse seals that spawned from it.

Edit: That being said, if it's not possible on any level with you guys, then I can drop it and just run with Shizuka
@hatakekuroI figured and I understand. Just felt like a little nudge was needed to remind you is all.
@Buddha@Hillan@RyoRyoRyokenOkay, my eyes are burning slightly, but I've finally finished my CS. I went with Genin because I think we could use more of them and was going with the thought in mind to limit Shizuku so he can grow into his own a bit more. Also took some liberties with the Kekkei Genkai, but over all, I think I did as reasonable a job as I could in terms of balance. Then again, not sure how much that says about me, considering how my first drafts usually go. Hope it's at the very least interesting.

Edit: Weakest part if this is probably how the story get's wrapped up, so if you could help me out with hashing that out, that'd be awesome.

Edit Edit: On closer inspection, there seems to be an even split of genin and chunin, so I could really go either way if I need to . . . huh.

@hatakekuroNeat! You thinking of posting anytime soon though? Ezekiel's been kinda stuck for awhile now.
@hatakekuroSup. How's life?
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