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@Fenris123The story is acceptable now if you moved him down to a squad member of one of Sho's raider divisions but not as a captain. Sho's division leaders are typically the more experienced pilots with few exceptions. but I'd like to hear the others opinions on it. Likewise I'd like to tell you that your grammar is pretty poor at times. For example: you have sense, instead of since. That may be irritating to some. I can mind it as long as the posts are legible.

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@Fenris123If he would be fighting against the E.U. then I'm sure Sho would want nothing to do with him at that point due to his need for E.U. assistance, and he'd have no friends among W-1 at that point. If you move to Japan you should live as a police officer with no infractions that may lead to alienating the Japanese, and join Zero's Black Rebellion either after the JLF movement's is destroyed and they reveal themselves, or after the massacre incident and people join in mass. You should also include a reason why Japan is picked out of all places because as it stands you have an Irish, and Britannian heritage. Why would Japan be the place to go? Why not stay in Ireland, or go to the Britannian Homeland?

If you don't like either why not China? Let's look at my character for a second: Jack's father had close connections with Nagamasa from Japan and sent his son there to keep him safe because he trusted Azai more than his fellow E.U. bureaucrats. He went back for a bit after the JLF but before the Black Rebellion, and served there as a soldier for a short time period but under the sanction as a political tool since he was his father's son. He's in W-1 because of his piloting skills, and the fact that he's relateable to the Japanese due to Azai's tutoring of him while there.

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@Phase TransitAlright so you have Lancer? Also a master is needed for Archer would you mind taking that?

@Shadow DaedalusCool thanks for the info.

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@Fenris123 I'll take part of this as I haven't specified it clearly in the OP but Sho wasn't active until the BR itself in which he rejoined and was put in charge of a flank. His faction came into being about two months after parts of W-1 and the E.U. officially managed to give him control of a significant portion of the remaining black knights that were in southern Japan. How they managed to do this was a mix between Hirai's spy divsion allowing them to find the splinter factions in need of a leader, and the E.U.'s reinforcements via W-1 itself and some older Japanese soldiers who abandoned Japan shortly after the original war. As such unless you were directly placed under Sho during the time of the Black Rebellion you'd have been under a splinter faction of generic black knights for a month or so before being picked up by Sho's forces.

However I do take an issue with how long he's been with the Black Knights. According to the Cs it says he served as a spy when the Black Knights showed themselves to the world at the time. I'm not sure how'd that work as you are technically an honorary Britannian from another conquered nation, Ireland to be specific, which would lead to some major trust issues there more over you participated in the Shinjuku incident and were sparred by the rebels at the time meaning they know you participated in a full on assault on innocent civilians.

I would recommend rewriting it and trying to think of a new bio. I'm am not trying to bully you, or push you around. It's just as it stands it seems you're trying to keep your old story together but it is flawed in a way which makes very awkward at best trying to implement it into a story full of Ex-Black Knights, Japanese Liberation Force Soldiers, and European Black Ops.

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@IceHeartI agree with that assessment myself. As GM though I am in charge of neutrally grading a character. I personally would like to see some changes but it is his character however in spite of that I have already said to him in PM's that changes will be needed in terms of the E.U. part.

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@Fenris123If I'm understanding this correctly he defected to the black knights, left for the E.U. and pretty much returned to Japan immediately. More over he's a bit of a hypocrite.

More over I believe you copied something from my character sheet without asking. Literally word for word it is the same up until the words on what they can do to atone. The only difference is your character sheet says he is more forgiving.

yours

He utterly despises people who are racist no matter if they are Japanese, Britannian, or anyone else for that matter. He believes the mere act of thinking people are sub-human, or trash is disgusting. Even the most oppressive people in the world are still human in the inside and people should be judged not on their skin, or race but one's actions. He is more than willing to put behind someone's past actions if they are willing to do atone for them in time and follow the rules from that day forth.

Mine

He utterly despises people who are racist no matter if they are Japanese, Britannian, or anyone else for that matter. He believes the mere act of thinking people are sub-human, or trash is disgusting. Even the most oppressive people in the world are still human in the inside and people should be judged not on their skin, or race but one's actions. He is more than willing to put behind someone's past actions if they are willing to do something here and now unless they've been a part of something inexcusable to him in which case he flat out rejects them. In his opinion actions are more definitive than words ever can be.

That really makes me a bit questionable on your conduct as a roleplayer.

@Duoya@IceHeart What do you two think of his character?

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I'm not sure his background would be W-1. Those guys are European Elites whom are trusted by their government to go to Japan and fight. It would make more sense to be a black knight defecting around the time of the princess massacre event. At least then he would have a valid excuse to be with the group.

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@Fenris123 You're supposed to post it here first. Regardless you're character needs more info on his background, less of a large skill set, and I forgot how advanced the Akatsuki was at the time of the start of R2 I'd much rather you switch to another suit. Perhaps a Sutherland given his current background.

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@VilageidiotxTrees live longer with warm water. Mother was trying to get it warmer but fell asleep and let it boil which almost turn the pot into slag before I caught the smell of something going wrong downstairs.

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@VilageidiotxWe don't boil it often for no reason. usually I boil water only to make food as I eat a lot of pasta. My mother was probably doing it to water to the Christmas tree.