Webmaster

Myriad Reality

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I rearranged it is that better?

@Blueflame

Yeah, I'd just use
Shade Weaver: Saying something here

Rather than

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Myriad Reality

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They know.. *shadows begin to darken around the hall as the shadows speak at a hushed volume* your like me.. Lost and a long way from home.. *others in the area appear unfazed as if they can't hear the voice as it picks up again still just out of veiw*
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*sits on the edge of the sink after having opened the small windows near the ceiling attempting and failing to light a smoke* Damn, really? *sighs* Ofcourse it can't be easy *attempts a second time at lighting the smoke keeping the door in veiw as Umbras presence is felt approaching the door*

@Blueflame

*Stops, sensing my being watched, and takes the opportunity to look around the graffiti-filled hall for anyone around*
You don't want to do this...

Myriad Reality

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You can kick it of as of the setting Dealers choice, be it one of the group noticing the encroaching darkness or hearing the hushed voices from within that darkness, almost familiar voices, almost your own voice

@Blueflame

Two formatting nits. Throw a newline between action symbols and dialogue for readability and you can change the speaker with

Speaker1: I'm talking!
Speaker2: I'm talking now!

Myriad Reality

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You can kick it of as of the setting Dealers choice, be it one of the group noticing the encroaching darkness or hearing the hushed voices from within that darkness, almost familiar voices, almost your own voice

@Blueflame

Alright, done. @'d you, but we'll use quotes from here on out.

Myriad Reality

@Blueflame

*Dances in a nightclub, when a visible chill down my spine freezes me in my tracks*
Ah, yeah, haha—otherworlders...
*Makes my way to the concrete-laden hall to the dimly-lit and grungy bathrooms, watching my back at every turn*

Myriad Reality

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"That sounds... interesting?"

@Sp00ki

Interesting is a good word for it. Not great. Not usually awful. Just interesting.

Myriad Reality

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"Oh... I guess that makes sense... So, what are you doing here, exactly?"

@Sp00ki

I'm watching random other-worlders pop into my life and wondering if it's a curse.

Myriad Reality

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"Yeah, pretty much... So, what is this place?"

@Sp00ki

Beats me. Some forest, I guess; nowhere important.

Myriad Reality

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"No... I mean everyone, everyone..."

@Sp00ki

Everyone’s pain, ever?