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10 mos ago
Current Attn teeny boppers: You realize adbots aren't ppl, yes? They randomly generate login info, then execute pre-programmed posts. Your rage-spam goes unheard by the machine. And is equally annoying.
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10 mos ago
*Loads gun* I will instantly kill anyone who says "cream."
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10 mos ago
Thank you, completely unnecessary forced software update, for BREAKING FUCKING EVERYTHING I was doing.
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11 mos ago
If you're going by UK conventions of knighthood/nobility, yes. It also would be pronounced like the "dam" in "madame," rather than like a Dick Tracy "daym."
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11 mos ago
Me: "Goku, thank God you're here!" Goku: "I heard a really strong guy was here! Lemme at him!" Me: "He's right there!" *Points at my Writer's Block* Goku: "... Sorry bud you're on your own."
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On CST time, United States. Working from home now, so I can typically get at least one response out per week if not more depending on how things are flowing.

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Ah, so the use of Qi is limited to "superhuman feats" as opposed to "supernatural abilities," with exception of the Soulbinders and Naturalists? My bad then, I was under the assumption that human use of Qi would fall under typical anime/manga abilities. Should Dai Xin then pick some more specific kind of specialization? Would martial arts schools focus on specific methods (like focusing on only using kicks, instead of channeling throughout their entire body) to strengthen their techniques, since overall enhancement is common?

That PM will be on its way in a bit.
@Zeroth:
I don't see any problems with the form itself, but I should probably mention that self-based qi manipulation is standard for those who are able to use qi. I mean, there's nothing wrong with super-heavy specialization, though.

So yeah, accepted, since I see no issue here. Drop it in the Characters tab and stand by for now.


I suppose I should ask then what the "standard" is--like the route I wanted to go was "that one guy who can't shoot energy or manipulate the elements, but who can break down walls with his face." What kind of things could one expect to see from normal Qi enhancement as opposed to a specialist?

Also I did have some spins in mind to put on it, revolving around specific types of enhancement as opposed to just "overall faster and stronger." If I'd like to reveal things like "secret techniques," as we go along, should I PM you to get all of those cleared first?
Very interested, and I've got a character ready to submit for judgement if that's alright!



If anything's amiss or needs to be clarified just let me know, hopefully I have the idea of what you were intending with the usage of Qi correct.
Copy/pasting this interest check into the General Interest Checks section may help too, although you may have already thought of that.
Thanks for answering everything! It's obvious you've put a lot of thought into crafting this world, so I'm looking forward to it. How many people were you hoping to get interested?
Magestrava and Sepcarim are mutations in the population. The mutation is what allows them to be able to manipulate energy - basically, if you're not born one, then you can't be one.


Does this mean that there are bloodlines, clans, or families of Magestrava and being a magic user means being closely related to others, or can other members of the "lesser" population spontaneously produce offspring that have the mutation? I ask just because it seems like the kind of thing that would impact character backstories.

Also, since it's mentioned magic has a 5000 year history and you call it a mutation, does that mean that this world's setting/technology level is a little closer to modern than it is to the typical middle ages-style fantasy?
Not to jump on a bandwagon here but if his power is meant to be a reflection of manipulating the chemical signals in the nervous system that bounce back and forth between the brain and an injury to produce "pain," that doesn't tie into how memories function at all save for one specific instance I can think of--causing an amount of pain so great that it inflicts psychological trauma. Considering trauma is something normally accumulated over a period of time (like growing up in an abusive household for years) or the result of something so drastic it's usually considered a miracle one survives it at all, I would think having a memory related application would indeed be very overpowered.

As for the turning into liquid thing and phasing through what he touches when coated in that liquid, to me it seems like kind of a stretch to associate. The idea behind his power is to manipulate "Pain," right? Adjusting his own sense of it fits, and having to touch someone else fits because Pain's closely aligned with the touch sense and, otherwise, he wouldn't be able to use the power offensively, but being able to phase through things and splash a liquid and whatnot just doesn't seem like an intuitive application.

It seems to me like this power would be much better suited to adjusting, causing, and transferring "pain" --why not make it so that, in addition to determining how much pain he himself feels, he can "add" his own pain to his opponent's? For example, if he gets punched in the face and lets himself feel it, and then punches his opponent in the face, his opponent feels like they've been punched in the face twice because that pain was added back.

This adds a risk-reward system to the power: he can choose to shut off or diminish his own pain sensors, which helps his endurance, but decreases his ability to deal damage, OR he can use accumulated pain to deal higher counter-damage, at the risk of taking too much pain and being defeated before he can give it back.

If you want to do something with drugs, like the pills and whatnot, rather than have those come from the power why not have him develop those as part of his occupation as a psycho doctor, like Chopper's Rumble Balls?
Wow, both our characters are from Karate Island.


Oh neat. But given the age difference, would they have crossed paths?
Posted my Marines character; is there any specific place the two groups are supposed to meet up?
Appearance: Standing at 5'10" but with broad shoulders and still-growing muscle, Seiji's a young man right in the middle of his growing phase. His black hair is cut short and parted in the front, slight bangs framing his face. His eyes are a gray-blue hue that reminds one of polished steel. He wears a long sleeved black shirt under the traditional short sleeved white jacket of the Marines, which is left unbuttoned at the front and the blue neckerchief is instead tied around his right bicep. His Marine cap is turned backwards on his head most of the time, unless he needs to block something from getting in his eyes. Instead of full length pants he wears shorts hemmed slightly below the knee, and his black boots are only half-shin high. At first glance, a seemingly undisciplined recruit--but his personality and actions leave no doubt as to his passion.

Name: Seiji Shirogane

Gender: Male

Nicknames/Aliases: Not earned yet.

Epithet: N/A

Age: 16

Hometown: South Blue, Karate Island

Marine Rank: Seaman First Class

Role: Junior Officer - After completing basic training and a few simple assignments, low ranked Marines would of course need to learn from a real crew. Thus, Seiji has been assigned to his current crew with the intent of continuing his training and putting him to work in the field.

Abilities & Skills:
Fighting Style - Seiji's fighting style incorporates basic Marine-style martial arts, a few tidbits of other styles taught on his home island, and a brawling disposition. He is best described as an "in-fighter," closing his distance with an opponent before planting his feet and slugging it out.

Rokushiki - A style of martial arts consisting of superhuman training and techniques, normally taught only to CP9 or higher ranking Marines. Seiji learned a small amount of it from his grandfather, but currently is only capable of performing one of the six techniques.
1) Tekkai: Hardens the users' muscles to the level of iron, in order to nullify damage taken from attacks. However, it can be broken by strong enough forces. It can also be used to increase the power of an attack, but because it makes the user incapable of moving, they have to use Tekkai after they have already begun their movement, thus fully commiting to that action.

Equipment: None

Personality: Seiji is devoted to the idea of being "a true Hero," and thus seeks to do good to the best of his ability. He tries to be nice even to people he doesn't like, but has little mercy for those he sees as "true Evil." However, to be considered truly evil in Seiji's eyes is a rare thing. He is still young and naive about the ways of the world, and believes that people can change if given the chance. He is also a stickler for "the Law," and seeks to punish anyone who breaks it with a fair and equal sentence. But the surest way to invoke his rage is to have him catch you breaking the law red-handed. At that point, no court, trial, or jury is necessary; Seiji will become "Justice" himself.

While not fond of the idea of hurting people for no reason, Seiji is also eager to test himself and improve his skills, and thus he is fond of fighting and other physical tests of strength and ability. He is also a hard worker, eagerly training on his own and jumping to almost any task given by a superior.

Biography: Seiji's grandfather, Gintarou Shirogane, was once a Vice Admiral of the Marines known as the "Platinum Fist." Said to embody the true essence of what it meant to be a Marine, he defeated and captured not only pirates, but all sorts of criminals, and the sea routes his ship patrolled were known as safe waters even in the vicious territories of the Grand Line. However, when his own son (later to be Seiji's father) expressed wanting to enlist in the Marines, Gintarou expressly forbade him from doing so for unknown reasons. In his old age Gintarou retired to his home on Karate Island in the South Blue, and spent more time with his family, especially doting on his grandson. Yet Seiji, too, when he became older desired to emulate his grandfather and join the Marines. Again Gintarou forbid it...but Seiji had inheirited his iron will, and would not be swayed from "the path of Justice."

Eventually Gintarou gave in, and told Seiji that if he could defeat all the different dojos on Karate Island, that he would train him to become a Marine. Though it took a whole year--no, that is to say, it somehow only took a year--Seiji accomplished the task. He'd been beaten to a pulp many times along the way, but quoted his grandfather's old saying:

"To be a Marine is to have an iron will, an iron fist, and an iron heart."

Some time after that Seiji entered the ranks of the Marines, and through a combination of hard training and catching the eyes of superior officers as a descendant of the "Platinum Fist," was promoted from a recruit to Seaman First Class. Soon after, he was assigned to a crew, and set out to sea...

Theme Song: Untraveled Road

Other: Has an enormous appetite, but refuses to drink alcohol as he is a minor.
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