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10 mos ago
Current Attn teeny boppers: You realize adbots aren't ppl, yes? They randomly generate login info, then execute pre-programmed posts. Your rage-spam goes unheard by the machine. And is equally annoying.
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10 mos ago
*Loads gun* I will instantly kill anyone who says "cream."
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10 mos ago
Thank you, completely unnecessary forced software update, for BREAKING FUCKING EVERYTHING I was doing.
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11 mos ago
If you're going by UK conventions of knighthood/nobility, yes. It also would be pronounced like the "dam" in "madame," rather than like a Dick Tracy "daym."
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11 mos ago
Me: "Goku, thank God you're here!" Goku: "I heard a really strong guy was here! Lemme at him!" Me: "He's right there!" *Points at my Writer's Block* Goku: "... Sorry bud you're on your own."
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On CST time, United States. Working from home now, so I can typically get at least one response out per week if not more depending on how things are flowing.

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Just so you guys know, NPC's aren't necessarily exclusively mine to control. You need Gerik to bark an order to get your character's ass in gear? Go right ahead. As long as you aren't going overboard with it or just flat out killing them off then I don't mind you guys manipulating some of the NPC's to move your posts forward. My posts are mainly for big story moments or battle scenarios.


I used Rath and his cohorts a little bit in my last post, let me know if I need to change anything.
The Stalfos' sword rang on his shield, and he feinted to make it raise its own. Then he spun and ducked, his blade sweeping through the beast's leg and shattering everything below the knee as if it were made of dust. But in the process, his own blade, already chipped, snapped near its middle. He paid it no heed; as the Stalfos fell down he surged up, driving the makeshift dagger under and through its chin, all the way to the hilt. The broken blade burst through the top of the leering skull, and the unholy light in its eyes died away. He couldn't wrench his blade back out, and let it fall with the monster.

"Sir!" the voice rang out, and he turned. But the sun's glare was strong, as strong as it might be in the desert lands--fitting--and his face was hidden by the flare as the younger knight looked up at him.

"He's heading for the Temple of Time, sir! We have to stop him!"

"We will." A voice that he couldn't place, his own. "Stand strong--we'll regroup in the square, and make a push towards the temple!"




"Ugh, he's heavy..." said one of the two Shiekah following Rath. It was rare for them to ever complain, but it had finally happened after carrying the Knight's unconscious form betwixt them all the way from the Colossus to Oasis. Though he still gripped the ReDead Knight's sword like a vice, the rest of him had gone limp as a rag, and combined with the weight of his powerful form and the armor over it, it made him a burdensome load indeed.

"Oasis is just over the next dune. Careful--if he gets near one of the other fragment bearers, the resonance may wake him. We don't know how he'll react yet." Rath instructed them. Wearily the other two readjusted their grip and heaved the Knight up once more, his black armor growing hot on their hands in the sun.

They entered Oasis now, and headed straight for the headquarters. The refugees and rebels out and about on the business of their daily life stopped to stare at the black clad figure. What manner of monster corpse had Rath brought back? But then, someone saw the crest of Hyrule emblazoned upon the armor, and realized of course that it was armor, and not scales or hard skin. A Knight of Hyrule? But with armor so black, and an appearance so tattered, and the other Knights all dead or fled...could it really be? The rumor mill began to grind, but Rath paid little attention to it. Instead he approached the headquarters, taking note of a second knight--this one of a foreign land, Labyrnna. If Rath recalled, he was one of the few who held another piece of the Triforce Fragments. The Shiekah held out his arm to stop the other two in their tracks, but it was too late.

The Knight's right hand began to glow. So did the crystal shard hanging around Sigurd's neck.

The Knight, splayed on his back across the backs of the two Shiekah, did not move at first. His visor, gone dark, simply stared up at the sun. Then the fearsome red light from within awakened, flaring up like a fire brought back to life from blackened coals.

"ARRRHH!"

He suddenly kicked out, and pushed on the backs of those holding him at the same time. As they stumbled forward he vaulted to the sand, sinking and stumbling at first as his feet met the unexpected surface. He turned in circles, head making wide sweeps, as he took in his surroundings. The desert? Gerudo?! HIS people!?

"GAAAANNOOOOOOOOON!!" The first intelligible word, yet it too came as a roar of rage and hatred so intense it shook his own armored plates.
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Still here. I could go ahead and post again, I suppose, since @Fabricant451 hasn't been online for nearly a week.
Head count: Who's still with us?


Still here.

In --- 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
As the ninja explained himself, and stated that he didn't intend to kill the thugs, Zehst finally seemed to fully relax again. True, the explosions hadn't been super huge...and they seemed to be mostly light and show, if the force behind them was only enough to knock the bad guys out.

"Well...if my parents didn't make it, and you're careful about how you use it...then I guess that's your freedom, huh?" he said, before nodding to himself. "Sorry about hitting you, then. I just...have a thing about weapons of mass destruction." He rubbed the back of his neck and smiled bashfully. "I'm Zehst, Zehst Messerschmitt, by the way. I ate the Roke-Roke Fruit, so now I'm a Rocket Man!" A small set of turbines opened up in the hollows of his ears, spitting flame to emphasize his point, before with a "shwoop" they withdrew.

The old man they had inadvertently helped offered to feed them, at which Zehst's stomach rumbled like a B52 jet. He nodded heartily to the geezer, but then the cool giant mantis said, in a surprisingly girly voice, that she had to change first. The mantis spun and shrank, mandibles and arm-blades disappearing as chitin became skin, and in its place soon stood a lovely young lady, who introduced herself by name. Zehst pointed, his jaw dropping and eyes bugging out.

"Ah, cool-outfit-guy! The giant mantis can turn into a pretty girl! How're we supposed to catch her now!? I'm no good with girls!" he said, his voice rising an octave higher. Because he'd been cooped up in his mansion with only his parents and his tutors and a babysitter for company, he'd never really interacted much with kids his own age. Now he was older, certainly, but he still hadn't gained any of the experience needed for proper social interaction. Especially not with girls, who were destined to be an enigma to even the most experienced of fellows.
In --- 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
"Because of that weapon!" Zehst growled, shaking his fist at the ninja. His happy-go-lucky attitude had changed in seemingly the blink of an eye, once he had seen the explosions. Unbeknownst to anyone else, his mind immediately went back to that day on the beach. The day so many people had lost their homes, and their lives, because of something his parents had created. And now here was someone using something just as dangerous with reckless abandon. "If that was designed by Messerschmitt Industries, you'd better tell me right now! Or else I'm gonna...I'm gonna..."

Zehst paused mid threat to turn his head, ever so slowly, to take in the giant praying mantis now looming over the two of them.

"Whoa..." he said, just before his eyes lit up. The happy-go-lucky seemed to be back. Then he pointed at the ninja with a serious expression. "YOU! If you have a net we can use to catch this cool huge bug thing, I'll forgive you for misusing that weapon just this once!"

Then someone else entered the fray, with the intent to calm rather than amplify the chaos. He encouraged everyone to stop fighting, so as to keep the Marines from coming.

"The Marines!?" Zehst yelled, before looking back at the ninja. "You better not be working for the marines, cool-outfit-guy! They shouldn't have those weapons either!" Then he suddenly pointed at the man in the fur coat with an equally serious expression. "And YOU'd better not be just trying to get us to leave so you can steal the huge bug thing for yourself!"
In --- 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Zehst smirked as he punched the guy with the nose ring through the wall. That'd teach him to be a weird pokey person. The young man listened to the exclamations of the two henchmen with a raised eyebrow. Hitman? What was that? Well, he had hit the guy...and he was definitely a man, last he checked...Zehst nodded to himself. He probably was a hitman! Then the crate next to him burst open, as a mysterious voice told Zehst where he could find a new boat. Who was this mysterious individual, who brought the good news of new dinghies to those who had no dinghies left?! It was...it was...

Zehst honestly had no idea who it was, but his outfit looked neat.

The thugs must not have thought so, though, because they turned their weapons on the new guy too. Zehst frowned. He had no idea where the Arms Shop or the Execution Platform was, so he would probably have to ask for directions. But he couldn't do that if these guys used their weapons on the new guy to chop him up! He would have to--

"WHAT IS THAT GODAWFUL NOISE!?" The rocketman suddenly shouted, clapping his hands over his ears. Someone was walking towards the shop, someone who was...emitting some kind of sonic weapon from his mouth! Zehst's eyes bugged out of his head. Who was capable of such destruction?! Even the weapons his parents invented hadn't been so...so...

Annoying!

The guy grabbed Nose Ring by the...nose ring...and said something, but Zehst didn't hear it because he still had his hands over his ears. When he noted that the strange reverberations threatening to break his brain had stopped, however, he let his hands drop back to his sides. Suddenly there was a lot of commotion as the old man told them all to leave the store, but the other guys weren't having any of that. In fact, more of them came in, and things were starting to get really violent.

"Well, this looks like fun!" he said. The fellow in the cool outfit seemed to agree, and promptly proclaimed his Ninja Arts before leaping into the air. He stepped on Zehst's head, prompting an "oof!" from the rocket man before he repeated the process with several more heads, leaping out of the store.

"Hey, you--" Zehst started. Then there was a big boom. As Zehst stood there, a horrified expression growing on his face, a white light seemed to envelop everything around him, reducing his surroundings to black lines like they were in a manga or something. Seconds later all the color came back, but the explosion had wiped several of the Spice Boys out.

"Stinger Strike!"

With the by-now familiar sound, a metal funnel shape blossomed from Zehst's left shoulder like a flower bud, and within it a fire bloomed before he was rocket propelled out of the shop, his feet sliding on the ground as his right arm pointed his elbow at his target. It looked a lot like some kind of martial arts strike, but really Zehst had just naturally felt like this was the best movement for what he had intended to do when he first practiced this move.

He surged forward, attacking--not the Spice Boys, but the mysterious man!

"What weapon did you use just now!?" He demanded. "Who designed it!?"
In --- 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
I think coming up with moves on the fly is fine, depending on the character.

Luffy's techs pretty much amount to him hitting things, or him hitting things with a power up. Him pulling out something like Balloon or Axe or Storm for the first time isn't egregious because it's still within his known limits, while the Gears are a bigger deal because they change those limits.

I think the issues might come from characters suddenly being capable of things they haven't been established doing, or suddenly being capable of it. Usually One Piece handles it pretty well though. Usopp brings out new stuff every so often but pre-timeskip it's been dials with already established effects or gear made of store bought tools, while with Franky a lot of time was spent on Water 7 (and the Puffing Tom) establishing his capabilities, then again on Fishman Island. I forget the last time Usopp brought out a new Pop Green too for that matter.

I think characters like Scab and TJ are going to be less likely to pull out something weird compared to some of the more gear/tech oriented characters like Giko and Tenmon, but as long as we're aware of it I don't see that happening.


I pretty much agree with this. With some characters like Zoro, they're often shown in the background or during in-between segments on the ship doing things like lifting weights. I think there have been scenes of Usopp and Franky tinkering with stuff too, that justify some of their "I suddenly invented this new thing!" moments. And even though Luffy isn't shown training before introducing his first two gears, he does take notice of the Soru and Geppou techniques being used in an earlier confrontation, and his opponent I believe comments on how Gear Second is basically using Soru to create those bulges in his legs that act as the blood pump.

I think introducing techniques that are simple punches, kicks, or otherwise "normal" moves on the fly is fine, but introducing something that makes specific use of a Devil Fruit power's properties--for instance, Zehst working his way up to iron-man style sustained flight--is something that they should be shown developing over time before using in battle.
In --- 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Zehst's expression changed from a bashful smile to a quizzical stare as Nose Ring stomped over towards him and demanded to know why he'd interrupted them. But before Zehst could answer, the man poked him, none too gently, with each shouted word. At first he pushed the man's hand aside.

"Stop that." he said, chuckling. It kind of tickled. The next poke was harder, and Zehst's eyes narrowed. "Stoppit." He lightly slapped Nose Ring's hand away. A harder poke. "STAHP." With the childish exclamation he grabbed Nose Ring's hand and actually pushed it away. But then here it came again, another pointing finger headed for his chest--

"I NEED AN ADULT!"

With a "shoop" sound, a metal cylinder suddenly just grew out of the young man's elbow, at an angle to the rest of his arm as he drew it back. As his fist clenched tightly, the rocket flared to life, sputtering just once before sprouting a bright orange-white flame from its end.

"CRUISE KNUCKLE!"

At high speed and with considerable force behind it, the rocket powered punch headed right for Nose Ring's gut. Zehst was even leaning in, putting all of his shoulder and body weight into the blow. It most certainly would not be a cruise, but then it was named for the cruiser missile, not the popular vacation transport.
Anyone around? This was doing so well and then all of a sudden dropped off like a rock. Don't let it end before the adventure at least gets started!
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