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But I can get you drugs! That makes me valuable.

Ok, technically I can get you added to the "drug rehab" list so that the doctors will give you Methadone injections once a day, or get you upgraded from Ibuprofen to Morphine the next time you get your ass kicked in the arena, but it's the same thing.


Hah, like Gloria would let her ass get kicked in the arena.
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@Prince of Seraphs is my faction alright?
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If accepted, I would also like to make my own faction, that is if there are enough members to join it.
Also, when and where is this Rp starting? Has it started already?

EDIT: Alright, I'm just dumb. I see now. I will update my stuff and join when accepted. I am new to this site (but not to Rping) so it may take me a bit to catch up.


A basic rule is that you don't add your cs to the character page until the gm has approved it.
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A basic rule is that you don't add your cs to the character page until the gm has approved it.


oh, oops. Good to know for the future.
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Firstly, it's considered rather rude and presumptuous to post your CS to the character tab before it's been approved. That Tab is for approved characters.

But forgetting about that for a moment:
The power looks interesting and the rather unique name Bleeders seem to suggest it's from something. I'll give you props for being unique but I'm going to have to ask you to chose another ability. The most prominent reason is that functionally speaking your character's power is specifically designed to be PvP. It attacks humans directly with very little application outside of combat. I'm not going to say that's a bad thing, many of our players have combat oriented abilities but in an RP where Player Vs Player situations are not just likely be expected I can't allow there to be powers that target a person in such a specific and nearly unblockable way.

Secondly and this had less bearing but you mentioned a synthetic material implanted in her eye. That would suggest she had some awareness of her abilities at a young enough age to avoid injuring herself with them and went to some sort of surgeon. This wasn't in the first post and now that I think of it I may have forgotten to mention it in the OOC but while being a meta isn't illegal (at least in the states and Canada) metas are required to register with the government (not many do for obvious reason). A procedure like that would be very specific and the surgeon would have to realize that the person he was operating on was a meta. He would then be required to report her to the government or risk losing his license to practice. Once she was on a government list the Corporation would be able to find her a lot easier and much sooner than what looked like about twelve years.

But as the power isn't approved that's not really an issue.



You keep making references to accepting non metas and the Crusaders and Saints not all being metahumans or all having to be metas. The fact is the only non meta humans present in the Center are the guards (most of them anyways) and they don't join prison factions.

With regards to the age I'd prefer you actually listed how long the group has been around. I don't want to have to hunt down random facts in your CS to discover certain information.

What exactly do you mean by "Progressives"?

I'm not going to say that Sam can't be the Leader of the Cross but bear in mind that when the escape comes to pass Edmund and Gloria are going to teleport out as many people in close proximity to them as possible and the likelihood of several different faction leaders being near one another is not altogether likely. If you really want Sam to be the leader of the Cross you are more than welcome to but I would suggest creating an NPC for the job.
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@Prince of Seraphs
AS I said in the last post, i'm new to the site and did not know, so again I apologize.

As for the power, what you say makes sense. I will change it and try to come up with something equally creative but justifiable. I will edit the form in the ooc and let you know when it's done.
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Oh hey. Would it be fine if I introduce another character inside of the RP? I don't know your policy on two PCs with one user. However, I do have to say that he is pretty interesting. Well, it isn't exactly original, but I like the idea of Voice Replication.
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<Snipped quote by Nafasi>

Firstly, it's considered rather rude and presumptuous to post your CS to the character tab before it's been approved. That Tab is for approved characters.

But forgetting about that for a moment:
The power looks interesting and the rather unique name Bleeders seem to suggest it's from something. I'll give you props for being unique but I'm going to have to ask you to chose another ability. The most prominent reason is that functionally speaking your character's power is specifically designed to be PvP. It attacks humans directly with very little application outside of combat. I'm not going to say that's a bad thing, many of our players have combat oriented abilities but in an RP where Player Vs Player situations are not just likely be expected I can't allow there to be powers that target a person in such a specific and nearly unblockable way.

Secondly and this had less bearing but you mentioned a synthetic material implanted in her eye. That would suggest she had some awareness of her abilities at a young enough age to avoid injuring herself with them and went to some sort of surgeon. This wasn't in the first post and now that I think of it I may have forgotten to mention it in the OOC but while being a meta isn't illegal (at least in the states and Canada) metas are required to register with the government (not many do for obvious reason). A procedure like that would be very specific and the surgeon would have to realize that the person he was operating on was a meta. He would then be required to report her to the government or risk losing his license to practice. Once she was on a government list the Corporation would be able to find her a lot easier and much sooner than what looked like about twelve years.

But as the power isn't approved that's not really an issue.

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You keep making references to accepting non metas and the Crusaders and Saints not all being metahumans or all having to be metas. The fact is the only non meta humans present in the Center are the guards (most of them anyways) and they don't join prison factions.

With regards to the age I'd prefer you actually listed how long the group has been around. I don't want to have to hunt down random facts in your CS to discover certain information.

What exactly do you mean by "Progressives"?

I'm not going to say that Sam can't be the Leader of the Cross but bear in mind that when the escape comes to pass Edmund and Gloria are going to teleport out as many people in close proximity to them as possible and the likelihood of several different faction leaders being near one another is not altogether likely. If you really want Sam to be the leader of the Cross you are more than welcome to but I would suggest creating an NPC for the job.


I was more or less going for what they would do when they escaped the prison, as in the faction would still be around after the escape. As for progressive I mean non left-wing politics, Sam is described as a traditionalist and his faction wouldn't allow liberals or communists in their ranks, that's what he is getting at.
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@Prince of Seraphs
AS I said in the last post, i'm new to the site and did not know, so again I apologize.

As for the power, what you say makes sense. I will change it and try to come up with something equally creative but justifiable. I will edit the form in the ooc and let you know when it's done.


I had a bit of trouble coming up with a power, but if u want a sounding board im around, and welcome to the site, think there is a rules and advice post somewhere in the top section of the forum :)

Users guide: roleplayerguild.com/topics/4958-a-new-..

Rules: roleplayerguild.com/topics/531-fundame..

Hope this helps Nafasi :)
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<Snipped quote by Prince of Seraphs>

I was more or less going for what they would do when they escaped the prison, as in the faction would still be around after the escape. As for progressive I mean non left-wing politics, Sam is described as a traditionalist and his faction wouldn't allow liberals or communists in their ranks, that's what he is getting at.


Isn't that kind of the opposite of the meaning of "progressive"? Progressive generally refers to left-wing political parties, and Liberal can refer to either left or right depending on the country. In the US Liberal is generally considered the same as Progressive, and in Europe Liberal generally means Libertarian.
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Here is Jason Reed and the faction SITE

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I'm just going to put this here. See what happens.


Oh, and Clovis will be joining SOUL.
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@Vetis Thank you for that, it should help me get better aquainted with the site and how it works.

@Prince of Seraphs I edited my form to change the abilities and such. Please let me know if this works better for the story.



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@Nafasi if that is accepted please feel free to claim a space in SIGN.

Edit: never mind, I can't read xD
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I'm American and liberal ain't right wing here
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I'm American and liberal ain't right wing here


I was referring to Classical Liberal, which is what several of the US's founders were.
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@Nafasi if that is accepted please feel free to claim a space in SIGN.

Edit: never mind, I can't read xD


I still may consider it instead. What rank in the hierarchy would I be? How is that determined?
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I still may consider it instead. What rank in the hierarchy would I be? How is that determined?


I would place you around Trojan level. You would likely be used for espionage where detection from electronic means would be a problem. In the prison you would likely be used for stealing supplies from under the cameras noses, and outside you would be stealing anything from anywhere that had cameras, detectors, anything.
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I would place you around Trojan level. You would likely be used for espionage where detection from electronic means would be a problem. In the prison you would likely be used for stealing supplies from under the cameras noses, and outside you would be stealing anything from anywhere that had cameras, detectors, anything.


but their powers wouldn't work most places, and there are sure to be guards in the places they will work.

Interestingly, she'll finally get to use a telephone. Not sure if she could use the internet yet.
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but their powers wouldn't work most places, and there are sure to be guards in the places they will work.

Interestingly, she'll finally get to use a telephone. Not sure if she could use the internet yet.


I never mentioned this is Jason's CS, but his phone isn't limited to changing the form of just himself. If necessary, he can use it to make any other person resistant to the ability dampening field. Of course, it is only temporary and you can only use about half your full power, but yeah. That.
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