I don't know where to start since I have to change my character now...Dammit!
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I don't know!!
I'll see if I can help as I get caught up on ic.
I hate trying to prove my point and stuff like that when others make much more validated truths that overcome mine!!! Idon'tkowhowesletoexpressmy fucking anger!!!
Whoa whoa calm calm. Momentai bro. Momentai. Let your anger out however you can, it doesn't matter if you express it well, just get it out. Then when you're calm, plot out your point bit by bit and we can try to help put it together into a way that can be convincing. Okay?
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There is so much stuff I want to say, but i don't know how to put it down in a way that would make sense to you all!!
Welcome to my world.
David, You're an amazing friend, but I feel like a complete dumbass when your chars are around. Actually, that is towards anyone. You guys make these really smart explanations and talk about these topic and I am just sitting over here not knowing how to fucking get in it or make a statement I don't like about it. Some characters make statements that mine, in reality, would go against that. But i don't know how do do that. Instead I either fuck it up or just let it go and become something i don't want. Because in writing I am fucking horrible. I have many great ideas, but I can't properly put it down in a way i like. And just when I think that my char isn't able to get hurt or is going to be right, he/she gets shut down. With a bigger truth that makes me realise, I know nothing. Combat in hand to hand. It doesn't make sense with you, David! You too Whizz and Soul! I have to precicely and so explanitoryly say what my char is doing that it would with push away or open up something. Instead, you guys nerf his/her strength down to a level it's like my char is a kid fighting hulk. There are points that can be hit on the body that is hard to really recover from! If that isn't me trying to be fucking realistic, hell, I don't know what is!! Whizz, I would like you to sometimes stop throwing religion to a lot of things. This a past thing that has probably aleeady been done with, but i didn't say anything because I didn't want you to give me a lot of crap. I go to church when i am able to, and I pray everyday and night. But please, you do not need to be that person who shoves religion down our throats. Soul, your characters sometimes annoy me greatly. Espcially shinji. Just, what the fuck? He has had so many changes that I do not kno how he is that powerful as well as with the oP ness that you thrown him in. Tone down the power a bit. It is really annoying. Maddie Fucking Hatter. The most annoying thing that I have ever seen. Like, when ever she is out, I nearly always get pissed off. Her ability is way too out of hand for me to be able to do things straight. I have had to curveball a lot of the plot moments when she was apart of them Ruby. I am fine with. Over her. Got it. Maddie, I probably won't ever get over. I am deeply sorry Whizz. I know you love being her, but please tone down the annoyingness. Especially her ability to interact with beings whom are NOT supposed to be interacted with. The teacup thing is the worst!! I do not allow that! Like why? Dark. Dark, Dark, Dark. I love ya man. But I just ask that you at least, I don know, and this was probably already settled too, but just stop with the bantering with david? No. Arguments in general. I hate them. So much. No matter if they are playful or not. I hate them. That goes to the first things i said...that's enough for now...Sorry.
I can promise to try. At the very least I'll try to keep stuff that isn't related to everyone on kik so it doesn't bother you. Though I've found that I disagree on what constitutes an argument, but I'll try to work on that, too.
There's some stuff that hopefully will help from off the top of my head. I've not looked into if they're any good, but hopefully. If you feel out of your dept, it's always okay to tell us OOC. I'm sure everyone will be happy to explain stuff. Last thing I've got to say is to remember that not everyone has human biology, so aiming for critical points on humans might not work IC. Just to keep in mind.
Thank you. I'm really sorry for doing that; I just want you to know that you're not a bad writer—you just have a different style. Thank you for letting us know.
Blitz, ifthere is anything I can do to help. Let me know. If you find anything too OP or otherwise not OP enough, let me know. I do not wish to halt progress, only help it flow better.
