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Guess I'll slide over to lust
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Working on a CS for envy!
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Skylar Altzam

They tell their children about the lost boy. The boy with no happiness. The boy with no family. The boy who will take it all from you.

Age: Seems age 11, actually 159.
Sin: Envy
Height: 4'11
Weight: 90lbs
Hair Color: Jet black
Eye Color: Emerald
Gender: Male

Written Appearance: To most, Skylar looks like a street urchin, gaunt and dirty. His hair is always messy and dirt stains his pale skin despite repeated baths. His expression and posture vary based on his victims but becomes vacant and empty if he fails to maintain his hunt. Any clothes he wears seem to start aging rapidly, becoming threadbare and torn after a few measly minutes. Only the blood red scarf around his neck seems impervious to the curse.

Brand Appearance: Above his heart, seemingly ink in bright red a hand holds a bleeding heart. Cursed to always feel empty, Envy craves any emotion and takes all of it.

Personality: Skylar's personality changes based on his victim. Lacking emotion himself, he mirrors the strongest trait of his most recent kill's personality. If he goes too long without draining someone, he turns into an apathetic killer.

Background: -

Current Story: Skylar only remembers wandering. As far back as he remembers. He remembers a flare of something, later he reconized it as happiness, and the delegation to steal it. So he did. With a hug and a glance. He felt elation and excitement. Then it disappeared and he did it again. And again. And again, wandering from town to town.

Weapon: None. He likes to leave the victims to their own devices afterwards. They no longer serve a purpose.

Ability: Catharsis: Skylar's ability allows him to devour an individual's memories and emotions through the gateway to the soul: the eyes. He aborbs their memories and emotions while they stand paralyzed. Although still living, the victim forgets all their memories and loses all emotion while Skylar feels all their emotions and remembers everything they knew. It doesn't transfer muscle memory and he can't replicate anything they could do before. The memories and emotions will fade after a day so must hunt regularly.
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Guys, continue to work on your CSes because a good majority of these characters are bland. I don't know if you guys had an idea before you made the CS or you are trying to make the character as you build the CS. Basic grammar and spelling; and I mean basic. Periods. Capitals.

To everyone else looking over this game, we are still open to more interest. I am looking for characters with some life and personality that can fit this concept. So far, the only one I would outright approve is The Girl and it is not because of her CS design. I can just see the character she is trying to make.

Even though the Background area is empty for this initial segment. Try to have an idea of what you want to fill in there and maybe that will help develop it more. I am not looking for dissertations. I am just looking for life. I don't know how else to explain it. But a lot of these characters are just empty.
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I be interested, though I'm not sure what character I should make. Seems to me that you have six other sins and girl; I'd hate to steel a spot. But I might lurk regardless.
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@Holy Soldier
I had already had an idea for my character, I am just fleshing it out now with edits
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@Aether SpawnIt's not about stealing a spot. It's about this being a long-term role playing game where I am only accepting people who are dedicated, excited, and wanting to actually write here. Not just joining a game to join it, expecting it to die off next week. That's why I'm pretty big on getting people to send me some well-thought-out characters and not some run-of-the-mill, blah blah blah I finished my CS.
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@Holy Soldier Well, I'll give a character a shot. Not like I have any roleplays in the works at the moment. I'll see what I can do today.
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Here's my Wrath CS, approved through PMs.

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@GreenGoat I like her already
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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by DeathXtheXTree
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DeathXtheXTree Ignore this Tree

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@Holy Soldier why didn't you tell me about this?!? I so want to join but most of Sin have been taken. t.t this Tree is sad.
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@DeathXtheXTreeNothing is taken unless they're in the Approved Section, so majority of the roles are actually free. You'll just be competing with those who have already submitted a CS. It's also good to tell me what Sin you would want before working on it, so I don't go approving that particular profile because then you would have done all that work for no reason. I'm only picking the characters who I think will work best for the story, so it doesn't really matter who submitted a CS for what role. I'm picking them on a case-by-case.
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@Holy Soldier I have one in particular, will send a PM of what it is so you don't go approving it yet. XD
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So right now. There are just 4 roles left unapproved at this time.
Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by The ghost in black
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Now introducing the completed sin of Greed
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Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Aether Spawn
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>.> Mmmk, so I have a few ideas for a couple of different sins, though I'm not going to double character unless we really need to (doesn't look the case). I'll just throw them up one at a time as I'm more or less satisfied with it until one sticks or receives special notice for reworking. So, without further ado:

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@Aether SpawnWell, Pride has 3 contestors. Death being the unmentioned third. I think she had wanted to keep it a secret lol. But...yes, I must wait for her CS before I look at all three and make a final verdict.
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@Aether Spawn@Masaki Haruna@DeathXtheXTreeHonestly, we may be waiting awhile. I noticed that Masaki hasn't had a chance to finish her CS yet. I give everyone 7 days from when they first mention interest so she has 6 days left.
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I know there's a lot of people making CSs for Pride, but I think I might be interested in making a character for that sin, if that's all right.
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I'll just leave this here... XD but I'll remake it if I'm not chosen for said Sin.
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