Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by Lady Seraphina
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Under my notes for all the CS's I have for your girl... "needs edits in Exp and BRIEF Bio"

Maximum experience in the RP is 90 days, and a month of that's been with Batman, and at least two weeks before that was with Matt before he was killed. As far as BRIEF Bio, I know people can get passionate about a character and I get it. However for a Casual level RP no more than three paragraphs. I've got five other CS's to go over again before taking another look at yours if you wanna make those couple of edits. Other than that I really liked the character.

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If you want it that brief I can certainly oblige. Though I must ask does that mean you want it cut down to three paragraphs of important events or you just want three paragraphs encompassing the most important moments and I can still include some lesser but still relevant past stuff as part of her character which goes unmentioned till the RP calls for it in IC?
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If you want it that brief I can certainly oblige. Though I must ask does that mean you want it cut down to three paragraphs of important events or you just want three paragraphs encompassing the most important moments and I can still include some lesser but still relevant past stuff as part of her character which goes unmentioned till the RP calls for it in IC?


Three paragraphs encompassing the most important moments and you can still include some lesser but still relevant past stuff as part of her character. Or you could just jot a couple notes down in the Notes section if you feel it's that important. But shorter bios are a must when I've got... eleven CS's now total to go back over. It's why I rarely stray to Advanced unless I'm just really feeling it.

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@Member 00492 Brevity is seriously not my strong suit but I did the best I could. All the really important stuff is in there though I do have significant elaborations on most of it.

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@Prince of Seraphs I understand that feeling. I had to really focus to get Carmelita to as short a bio as I did. I figured it said "BRIEF" in all caps for a reason. If I'd have done my usual, I'd have several pages of backstory up there.
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You see, with my bio if I took the time could be very long. However, I took the important stuff. A bullet per sentence and said "here. TL;DR" so it was just like 1 paragraph even though it started off longer and would have gone on for several pages if I could take the time to flesh out the narrative of him and his family lol
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@Member 00492 I made a female character. Which ever one works best you I'm fine playing either her or Alex.
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I'm typing up the OOC now, working on some edits to the Wonder Twins, and thinking pretty long and hard who's taking the fourth slot. There's only three silhouettes in my signature but I'm actually gonna accept four characters. Should have everything finished and posted between now and 9:30 am EST.

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I'm typing up the OOC now, working on some edits to the Wonder Twins, and thinking pretty long and hard who's taking the fourth slot. There's only three silhouettes in my signature but I'm actually gonna accept four characters. Should have everything finished and posted between now and 9:30 am EST.


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I think I know who the Prince is now. It seems kinda obvious now with the hint KL/492 gave.
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I think I know who the Prince is now. It seems kinda obvious now with the hint KL/492 gave.


You have to tell us now. *Pokes & prods*
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He's full of crap unless he knows more DC than I gave him credit! LOL

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He's full of crap unless he knows more DC than I gave him credit! LOL

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You know, I'm really starting to seconed guess myself now. I thought it might have been Damien before but now I'm not so sure.

Maybe it's that Geo-force guy? I vaguely remember him being a prince or something and he hung out with the Titans at one point (though I don't know about Batman.)
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I'm typing up the OOC now, working on some edits to the Wonder Twins, and thinking pretty long and hard who's taking the fourth slot. There's only three silhouettes in my signature but I'm actually gonna accept four characters. Should have everything finished and posted between now and 9:30 am EST.

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I hope you pick one of my characters
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I PM'ed everybody who made the cut. OOC is up. Thanks for the interest everybody!

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