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@Angry Player@pandapolio

Alright, I'm going to try and word this nicely. I apologize in advance if I cause offense, as that's not what I'm intending.

Now, I'm going to be blunt. Incredibly blunt.

Those submissions are outright denied.


  • There's no history section.
  • There's no proper descriptions of what you've got as is.
  • If you're going to use an image, please tag it under the proper coding, which I'll include below.
  • All in all, there's like 32 lines in there. That's way too short for me to even consider accepting.
  • I'm going to have to axe the duplicate powers, unless Reg overrides me. Similar is fine, but the exact same isn't.
  • Weaknesses are... I'll let Reg talk on that.
  • The mutation is probably going to have to go, in all honesty, but Reg will need to decide that.
  • I can tell you right now, the Clairvoyant would utterly demolish these characters over their abilities alone, which I can't exactly say much on because there's almost no information to figure out what exactly they do.



So, all in all, there's just so much missing and lacking... They need a lot of work as it stands.

I'm not sure if you all looked into the OP, but a lot of information and all can be found there on page one and in the 0th post.
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@Old AmsterdamI changed it. I hope this is better. I will add more if still needed, but I completely changed my character from what it was earlier. Also thank you about the image tip thing, I've been trying to post images on multiple rps. I don't know what my friend will do, I haven't talked to him yet. Please tell me if something is lacking in the character sheet. Didn't know how to explain my power anymore....pretty basic and boring. I just thought about using a character that had some special ability, but is still weaker. I admit I also want to use goons.
sorry
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@pandapolio, alright, I have issues with editing, but that's relatively minor. However, I do need explain that a weakness is something that nullifies your powers, like kryptonite to Superman, not a logical weakness like EMPs to Iron Man.

Otherwise I'm still reading it over. I'd ideally like to see both revamped before I make a decision.
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@Regitnuiok thanks I'll sleep on that. And I don't know why but after reading the weakness thing I immediately thought butter. Don't know why I'm saying this and I won't do it but..........butter. I'm too tired.
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you guys looking for villains still or would you be fine with hero characters now
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@Ebonsquire, still looking for villains, though you could play a normal.
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Sorry it took so long to get a response up! Been kinda busy these days.
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@TheHangedMan, understood. Expect the plot to advance soon.
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@Regitnui I love that name... but naughtiness needs to change to nefariousness.

@thewizardguy I could easily see that happening. With some work I'll see about PMING you details so we can bring the NEW Love Muffin to the height of power, so that we may rule over the world with and iron fist... yet soft and moist interior...

Also sorry about being MIA for so long life was being a butt. But on a positive note the new IT movie is legit.
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lol all these crzy people, wtf even amirite
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@Mercenary Lord, Welcome to the world. We're all crazy here.

Well, actually, I'm crazy and this is all in my head.
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@Mercenary Lord
Just wait. It gets better. (Worse?)

I've got an entire story line created for this, and several character arcs planned that directly tie into everything that's going on.

Ideally I'd like to get everyone a personal Arc going for this, but... That's been pricing difficult.
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Which kind of arcs are you talking about
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@Mercenary Lord
Finch, Ace, Dragon and Spectrum kinda, soon Magus... They all are involved individually with things that connect on a greater whole.
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I'd want to try and join in but all my finals are due soon, sorry guys ;_;
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@RoflsMazoy
It's quite alright. We'll pick you back up when you've got time snail.^^
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think ill go ahead and make myself a villain epic, if that'd be a-ok
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@Ebonsquire
Looking forward to it.
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@RegitnuiMy friend is being a flake and says he is too busy to make a character sheet, so I was wondering if I could join by myself once I figure out a weakness. I am thinking maybe silver could be his weakness.
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btw i am still working on bombard and am still involved, i just am tryin not to die in school yanno
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