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@Heckno12@kitty should have everything balanced now, let me know if anything else needs modification

also he's older to match the photo


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@HeroicSociopath The premise of your character isn't exactly usable here. The Alcatraz is about the equivalent to the death penalty, basic drug dealing isn't going to get you sent into deep space like that. Second, while I think necromancy is a cool unique ability (you're reanimating corpses and you go to jail for dealing drugs?) it would a few tweaks. Maybe if it required fresh corpses that would be a tad more balanced? There's also how much mana that would probably take, and as a Tulak that would be even more of an issue. Your bio is also much too short, it just kind of seems like you just threw something onto there just to fill the field.

That's most of the issues rn anyway.
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@HeroicSociopath The premise of your character isn't exactly usable here. The Alcatraz is about the equivalent to the death penalty, basic drug dealing isn't going to get you sent into deep space like that. Second, while I think necromancy is a cool unique ability (you're reanimating corpses and you go to jail for dealing drugs?) it would a few tweaks. Maybe if it required fresh corpses that would be a tad more balanced? There's also how much mana that would probably take, and as a Tulak that would be even more of an issue. Your bio is also much too short, it just kind of seems like you just threw something onto there just to fill the field.

That's most of the issues rn anyway.

Okay, fair enough. He's more about animating stuff like wood and paper as opposed to corpses, cause that's kinda grody. Would scaling it down to one human body equivalent work? Or how about only plant matter?
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Okay, fair enough. He's more about animating stuff like wood and paper as opposed to corpses, cause that's kinda grody. Would scaling it down to one human body equivalent work?


wait wait, animating wood and paper? That's not how necromancy works... I'm just going to have to outright say no to that. I mean it would just sit there. Reanimated wood is.... well wood.... It really doesn't make sense.

Also, something Heck missed is your picture does not work at all for a Tulak. Tulaks are humans with horns. Not humanoid creatures.
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@KittyAh, sorry if I was unclear. Wood and paper is indeed organic matter that is no longer living. He would need to make joints in it. For paper he'd fold it like origami. For wood he'd have to carve hinges and the like, which would be very involved. He can do corpses, and he might if he feels he's pushed. But he's squeamish about it. He's not a hardened killer. He's just some dude in a bad situation.

And in that case I'll prolly go human then.
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@KittyAh, sorry if I was unclear. Wood and paper is indeed organic matter that is no longer living. He would need to make joints in it. For paper he'd fold it like origami. For wood he'd have to carve hinges and the like, which would be very involved. He can do corpses, and he might if he feels he's pushed. But he's squeamish about it. He's not a hardened killer. He's just some dude in a bad situation.

And in that case I'll prolly go human then.


So are you saying you want to make golems? Because you could do that another way perhaps via earth and life manipulation instead of necromancy under just life manipulation. It would make much more sense if that is what you wanted to do.
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@KittyDoes wood count as earth? And rock golems would be stronger than wood things anyways.
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@HeroicSociopath Not really, though I guess if you're so caught up with wooden constructs you could always just use the mud/dirt/etc as a way to control them. We're not saying this because we think your tree golem things are too strong or anything, that's not the issue here. The thing is, Life attunement is kind of a tough topic. It requires direct contact and living matter. No matter how you do golems, it's going to take a lot of mana because...you know...Dirt/wood constructs wouldn't have any muscle on their own.

All in all, alot of this is overshadowed by the fact that this kind of thing would burn straight through your character's mana. All of that object's strength would have to come from Rex's magic. I'm not saying it wouldn't be usable at all, it would just be pretty unsustainable.
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I'll think of something else, then.
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@HeroicSociopath Alright, just let us know when you're done.

@The Angry Goat You're good to go, I'll send you the Discord link in a bit.
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@Heckno12

Oh hey, this is back. Kinda always wanted to expound on Ahleya's personality more. Mind if I bounce back? Or are you guys full? Anyhow, I'll just repost her here.

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@Polaris North Hey, long time no see Polaris. Glad to have you back aboard. Naturally Kitty and Luna need to take a look as well, but that's still looking good.
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@Polaris North You're good to go, move her over to the CS tab whenever you want to.
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@Heckno12

Sweet. Thanks!
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Now it's just waiting for kickoff.

Really want to make another character though.
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@Irredeemable Funny you mention the second character thing, we've actually been discussing that. So, the consensus is that while a second character will be allowed...they won't have the same plot immunity that your original does. In all likelihood they will eventually be killed off. I can promise it won't be anywhere near the start of the RP, but if they get themselves into a bad enough situation they won't be deus ex machina'd out of it.

Long story short, A second character is not as equal as the first. No it will not be easily killed off BUT second characters will be killed off before other players first characters.

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I might throw in some sort of crazy dude who wants to be pointed in the direction of things to kill, but the likelyhood is low
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@The Angry Goat The same rules apply to your second character by the way. (Though we're likely to be much more lenient given their lack of longevity)
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I've been interested in this for a while, so I might write up a CS in a day or two (if this is still open, of course.)
Need to finish another CS first, though.

Edit: Also completely misread the character races, welp. Gotta throw away the character idea now >_<
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