Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Zelosse
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I'll detail powers and weaknesses thoroughly for you to decide on.
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It seems every power that is not canon is getting rejected.
So yeah, I'm out.
Good luck though.
Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by LemonZest1337
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CS is still heavily WIP.

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Yeah, I'm afraid I'm out too. I mean MHA has someone who can produce tape from their body, abstract powers are sort of it's bread and butter.
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@LemonZest1337 I'm fine with it while it is powerful it is also heavily dependent on directly contact. The whole thing is risk, and reward so I'll let it through. If you wanted more feedback on how you can change it, or what have you'll I'll try to think of something myself.

@Zelosse Alright while the name is clearly frightening since I know what exactly the power cosmic is in Marvel the actual quirk itself seems reasonable. Since he is pure energy is he capable of going through solid objects?
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@vancexentan no, he is still 'solid' in that sense.
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@ZelosseAlright I don't believe I have any other problems with this character's quirk. just tell me when its done i'll look it over.
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@vancexentan That's perfect. She's not intended for a large combat role, more a support who can hold her own if the fighting gets real close. I'll continue work on the rest of the CS.
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Well hopefully we can nab an actual combat oriented person soon because otherwise I'll have to bring in Captain East, and he's overpowered.
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That's funny actually, because I normally run some form of brute who just takes and dishes out damage. But this time I wanted to go for something different. Plus a doctor is always handy.
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@vancexentan

I have fully fleshed out his Quirk information, it's now in more in depth concept. I'll be working on history and personality now. But hopefully this clears up anything when I was confusingly trying to explain something without the fleshed out version.
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Ok I here is Aya Fumiko. I hope the backstory is acceptable now.

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@LemonZest1337The backstory is rather lack luster it doesn't explain how, and why she came to become a villain, or much about her old life in general. Did she try to become a hero? Did she just work as an every day surgeon with a quirk? Etc. Other than that I don't see any issues with her.
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I feel otherwise. Choosing to rebel against a system that is stifling a part of her as natural as breathing would be a giant slap in the face every single time a patient is lost because of restrictions to her person.
Over time that could absolutely break her willingness to participate from within a cage.

Thats probably the most sane reasoning to be a villain you can have.

Freedom.
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I'll make the story a little more in depth. And be sure to include more about how she ended up with the Villains, of that short version I had.




Ok the edit is done. Hopefully this backstory betters outlines why she's become a part of the dark tree. Also thank you Zelosse for giving me the ideas that went into the edit of her history.
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Hey @vancexentan, long time no RP. I'm throwing my hat into the ring. Please let me know if the following character is acceptable.

P.S. Hey, @Zelosse, glad to be in the same RP as you again (hopefully)

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I am just waiting for confirmation on what I defined.
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I'll accept the character under the assumption she can't absorb heroes who themselves are metallic in nature. Can't just let you eat a literal hero.
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@LemonZest1337I'll accept the character
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