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@SilverPawAll right, I'll put it up in the reserved list.

@MistoryThe character on its own is not bad at all but you forgot something very important about the personality, he's wrath, he should at least be a little hot headed. Other than that as I said the character is pretty good. I specially like his ability.

@Rune_AlchemistThat's actually perfect. You may add her to the roster, welcome to the group!
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I'll warn all present members, I'm an unexperient GM so...if my first introduction post comes out as a bit underwhelming, I appologize in advance. However, I'll do my best to make this roleplay a good experience for everyone. I do already have a lot planned for it and at least in my head, I feel like we're all gonna have a good time here. (I also commit some typos mainly because English ain't my first language jdekls)
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Ahaha, don't stress too much! I'm sure you'll do fine. I myself, am looking forward to the RP~
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Alright so I added to the personality abit. I hope that works. Sorry that had slipped my mind ^^
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@Mistory Still not very wrathful but seems fine. However mind if I give you a suggestion which can be actually quite nice? This is not the first time I run this rp actually, but the last one failed miserably because of inner drama, anyways. The Wrath we had back there, had this interesting plot where he actually fought against his anger and tried to supress it with all that he could. I imagined this could work for your character too, since he's mostly kind and all, he could be always holding himself or something like that. But of course, it's just a suggestion, if you want to keep as it is, it's perfectly fine.
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So, im not turning that down. But i got this idea i dont know hoe to word properly to sound good.
Alden is wrath. Good. Cool. But Why is he such a nice guy?
Alden is AFRAID of it. He becomes unpredictable, even to himself, and will do things he would never do on purpose. He will hurt, he will destroy, and he doesnt know if he can pull himself out of it before things get REALLY bad.
Anger is a spiral. Once your there your more likely to go deeper than to climb out, and with Aldens Strength...
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@MistoryHe can hurt someone with that! Yes, I like it! Holy hell, this can lead to so many plot points, nice one man!
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Finally done with my character.



I originally wanted to make her be able to cast all kinds of spells from her book but I figured that would probably be too broken.

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Nevermind, forgot her appearance lol.

Edit 2:
Done.
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Everyone's got really cool characters. :)
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@HammermanThe character is great, but just a minor nitpick, since people can't actually cast spells and the magic acessible to people is more technological, just change the name Magic University of Bartla to just University of Bartla. Otherwise it kinda sounds like they teach people magic, which is impossible.

Other than that as I said, wonderful character and she is more than welcome in this roleplay.
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Alright, finally got this written out. It ended up as a surprisingly long sheet, but I guess that's how it goes. Hopefully it should be okay; I had to take some liberty with Chastity since I couldn't think of anything better.

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I'm sensing a mix of badassery and niceness.

Could be half and half with this group
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I'll read everything once I'm home from university. Which is in about 2 hours.
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Also I might have an issue. When the virtues of kindness and charity come in, I might be one of the three stooges.

Should I give more detail to my character's personality and appearance.

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I'm sorry, but I'm going to drop out. I've lost interest, and I have a fair number of other RPs (mostly 1x1s) that already have my attention. I'm doing this so that I don't drive myself off the brink and drag everyone with me.

I apologize again for this.
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@GarlandDaHero Don't you worry about it, it happens to the best of us. Have a nice day, pal!
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@VocabI actually read your sheet when I was in university, but I had to take a moment to read through your ability again. At first I thought it was too overpowered, despite being really cool.

However, I took a moment to consider the character in general and how she is not very skilled in combat. So, with that in mind, I'll just add one limitation to it. If a magic effect being casted against her is superior to her own magical power, her ability will not work. Magic Items are by no means even close to a Guardian's power, but there are some Voidlings powerful enough to cast such power, same for cosmic entities. With that in mind, your character is approved with flying colors.

@SilverPawAl too is approved with flying colors.

And with this number of approved characters, ladies and gentlemen, we may start the party. I'll prepare the IC post right now.

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@Salvia Sounds like as good a limitation as any. I'll edit it in in just a moment.
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@Gareth ; @Jett Ryu ; @Wingwindz ; @Rune_Alchemist ; @Mistory ; @Hammerman ; @Vocab ; @SilverPaw

IC is finally up, go take a look whenever you can. Hopefully, the post is all right.
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