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New pic added. Although I also have the other one just for reference to the outfit.

Can I add her to the character tab?
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@tobiax *awkwardly prods*

Not that it particularly matters. But again assuming you have to even follow the character sheet basics. You still don't have a character quote for your digimon. (And of lesser importance/likely mistakenly.) You have the digimon hidden inside your character's hider, so they're not actually visibly separated.

Maybe someone else will tell you, but figured might as well give it a try. ^-^'
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@SleepingSilence I appreciate you mentioning it, but please let me and Hero handle the GMing comments/directives. Though, I don't know how I overlooked that.
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Also @Crimson Flame, everything looks good on my end. Feel free to move her over whenever you can.
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@Altered Tundra So I have a simple follow up question regarding the character's personality. This isn't meant to be anything other than curiosity. Since I've already changed it to something I'm still satisfied with, merely because I was able to fit everything in a more condensed space. I was told that my character's personality was considered too expansive. "Less is more" I was told, which seems to imply its not really about depth, more so the word count. My original word count was 318, a 10 words less than your own current word count. Presuming everyone is following the same rules. I know others may also have equal/longer word counts in future, since only a minimum was described in the CS, not a specific maximum.

I know (or at least have to good-faith assumption) that the intention was implying my mentally burdened character had "too much going on" though I do still intend for that character to display such quirkiness in various ways. I simply didn't bog down my personality sheet by needing to explain them. Etc etc. I don't believe I ever had a problem with repeating myself/using too similar descriptions for padding sake. I was merely focusing on detail, when it probably is better to just show it anyway. Because I still intend my character to behave strangely until the other character mellows them out a bit which will be a direct character arc I hope to achieve.

I was just curious on this, now that everyone has much more time to reflect on their character sheets.

I hope since one delay has already proven to be necessary, this doesn't come off in anyway other than curiosity for asking.

On the off-chance that somebody doesn't post their character sheet by that point. Are we moving forward regardless? (And just hoping those will eventually get around to it?) Will we wait/be put in hiatus for other (hopefully) more active participants? Etc.

Still looking forward to getting the show on the road. ^_^

Edit: And duly noted.
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@Altered Tundra So I have a simple follow up question regarding the character's personality. This isn't meant to be anything other than curiosity. Since I've already changed it to something I'm still satisfied with, merely because I was able to fit everything in a more condensed space. I was told that my character's personality was considered too expansive. "Less is more" I was told, which seems to imply its not really about depth, more so the word count. My original word count was 318, a 10 words less than your own current word count. Presuming everyone is following the same rules. I know others may also have equal/longer word counts in future, since only a minimum was described in the CS, not a specific maximum.

I know (or at least have to good-faith assumption) that the intention was implying my mentally burdened character had "too much going on" though I do still intend for that character to display such quirkiness in various ways. I simply didn't bog down my personality sheet by needing to explain them. Etc etc. I don't believe I ever had a problem with repeating myself/using too similar descriptions for padding sake. I was merely focusing on detail, when it probably is better to just show it anyway. Because I still intend my character to behave strangely until the other character mellows them out a bit which will be a direct character arc I hope to achieve.

I was just curious on this, now that everyone has much more time to reflect on their character sheets.

I hope since one delay has already proven to be necessary, this doesn't come off in anyway other than curiosity for asking.

On the off-chance that somebody doesn't post their character sheet by that point. Are we moving forward regardless? (And just hoping those will eventually get around to it?) Will we wait/be put in hiatus for other (hopefully) more active participants? Etc.

Still looking forward to getting the show on the road. ^_^

Edit: And duly noted.


In the case of Izzy's personality, as compared to the others, we felt that some of the bits you included in your first draft was pouring into other avenues that didn't seem like the first two paragraphs or really reflective into the kind of girl that Izzy is. And it's fine if you still plan on having her acting that kind of way. It's not breaking her character because it's stated in the sheet, if not in a less-specific way. As

As for Conrad's WC vs Izzy's, I felt the number of words I used was more than enough to explain Conrad's personality without going into either a, too much detail, or b, other characters' avenues. Though, I feel like our two characters are two totally different ones, so different strokes for different folks and all that.

Regarding the current amount of characters and the two that still need to be submitted, come the 23rd, that part of your question(s) will be answered. But, regardless if we have 6, 7, or 8 by that time comes, the RP will go ahead as planned (start date currently scheduled for the week of the 23rd).

a last note: never apologize for asking any questions. We welcome any and all questions. <3
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Heyo!

Currently working on a character. Just wanted to pop in and say hi.
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Heyo!

Currently working on a character. Just wanted to pop in and say hi.


Glad to have ya aboard! Which crest did you end up end up deciding on?
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Sincerity!
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@Stern Algorithm Roger that! I shall put down your reservation, then!
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Just stepping in to say I'm still interested...

I suppose both other people dropped out without public word/simply booted and the CO-GM's CS hasn't been updated/changed. (I'm assuming this is still apart of their break.)

If there's somehow anyway I could been of assistance, feel free to ask.
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@SleepingSilence Hero's been going through some IRL stuff, so there hasn't been a chance to get it done. So don't worry about it.

As for the other two, I haven't heard from them since they initially stated interest, so the decision was made to free up their slots.
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Viva la competition.
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( The lurker cometh!)

But real talk though, I've been spying this as a lurker for a while, and if the Crest of Hope is still free'd up, I'd be more than happy to
steal acquire take apply for it! I can get a sheet done fairly quickly so I'm not holding the rp up? Only if it hasn't been snatched up already!
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Here is my character submission. Please elt me know what you think.

I also wanted to ask, since I am trying to go for a more 'earth-elemental'-based Digimon I am a little put-off by the fact that the baby Tsubumon spits acid bubbles, and the Ultimate Brachimon is a 'plesiosaur-type' and has some water-based attacks. Weird. Would it be allowable if I tweak the attacks slightly to make them more earth-based, and can I add a few more level-appropriate attacks to the Ultimate or Mega forms, since my Digimon has never been featured as a main nor as a villain in any of the series/games?



EDIT: To better fit the Hard/Earth/Metal/Seismic elemental theme I'm going for, I made the following Digimon changes:
  • Replaced Tsubumon attack, "Acid Bubbles", with "Small Metal Beads"
  • Replaced Brachimon attack, "Brachio Bubble", with "Sand Shower"
  • Replaced Brachimon attack, "Aqua Shatter", with "Grave Bone"
  • Added Brachimon attack, "Guard Rock"
  • Added Cannondramon attack, "Ultimate Quake"
  • Added Cannondramon attack, "Gravity Press"
  • Added Cannondramon attack, "Destroyed Rush"
  • Added Cannondramon attack, "Light Barrier"
  • Added Cannondramon attack, "Spy Focus", taking some artistic liberties.

All attacks are taken from Digimon of the same or lower evolutionary stage.
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@Stern Algorithm Oh yes, that's perfectly fine by me. Change/add/remove whatever you need to fit the vision of your line. =)

( The lurker cometh!)

But real talk though, I've been spying this as a lurker for a while, and if the Crest of Hope is still free'd up, I'd be more than happy to
steal acquire take apply for it! I can get a sheet done fairly quickly so I'm not holding the rp up? Only if it hasn't been snatched up already!


There has been another interested party that contacted me recently, so hope you don't mind some competition.
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There has been another interested party that contacted me recently, so hope you don't mind some competition.


Oh gosh darn! If they're really feeling it then I don't mind giving the position to them!
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Oh gosh darn! If they're really feeling it then I don't mind giving the position to them!


That's totally up to you!
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Just gonna poke my head in here. You know me and how I feel bout digimon. So just uh.....checking it all out.
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@Kal-El Well, right now there's only one spot open and so far two people have expressed interest in it, so, yeah that's where we stand atm.
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