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@Legion-114I think you need to tone down some aspects a wee bit. First, I thought your race is more like a bunch of dispersed packs rather than an united society, that could have been one way you would be at many places without that becoming overbearing. As of now it seems to be more of an isolated empire of weird biomachines. You don't get much chance to do your thing this way. Speaking of things I specified in the OOC that grey goo style species are restricted. I am fully willing to work out an acceptable variant with you but for example you might better nix the "recovers if just a single nanomachine is left). Lastly the Dyson Sphere is likely too much, even moreso if we consider that you built it around a supergiant main sequence star. Dyson swarm would be probably enough for what you have in mind. Good luck for the edits and if you have further questions do it in the PM.

@eemmttYour sheet looks good so far albeit incomplete for now. Looking forward to it!

@KeyguypersonIf you finish your military you're approved. Your sheet is decent so far and I trust you as a player.

@ProngsYour sheet has all the essentials while I don't have much to pick about it. Welcome to the roleplay, you are approved!

@Star LordYour sheet looks fine so far. Maybe your history could mention how much time has passed since WW3 and such. Some elements seems to imply hundreds of years but this isn't obvious. Keep on the good work with your sheet!

@KlomsterInteresting faction. For some reason they remind me of Homeworld's Bentusi. At first glance some of their stuff may seem OP but I think you balanced it well enough. Near-infinite source of Eltreum? It's a secret sanctuary which kills more people in it than it'd worth. Exotic and powerful weapons? Bellakee don't have a proper military and the hyperspace manipulating properties are likely consuming Eltreum which is something nobody else can afford. Your tech is likely also weak against FTL jammers. Anyways, the only thing you need to look out for is that with so much Eltreum you need to invent reasons why you can't just casually supply everyone else to their heart's content. I do trust you can solve this. As such your sheet is approved. You can post it in the CS if you want, do the final touches perhaps over there.

@ArawakI think you were worried over nothing. Your reworked sheet is fine. Approved.
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@Willy Vereb The reason they don't have a massive supply is that they don't produce much.
And I was thinking their personality might solve that a bit.

*Bellakee arrives in system*
-"Hello locals, we are here to trade. We can offer a multitude of things but our most popular is our ultra-fine Eltreum."
-"Ah, we have these awesome weapons and rare ores."
-"That's nice, now what do you offer for the Eltreum?"
-"Errrr, we want to sell you weapons..."
-"Oh, well you see weapons don't hold much value. Do you know anything of the Builders?"
-"Errr, we don't think so."
-"Too bad."
*Leaves*
*Bellakee arrives in neighbour system*
-"Wassup Bellakee, we found a satellite which might have been a Builder satellite, we also want to sell you some really shitty art and poetry."
-"Oh, very interesting, we will trade you [unexpectedly much Eltreum] for that."
*Leaves, while the first place thinks WTF???!?!*

Sure, my dudes could sell weapons to the next nation they come across, but it'd be a hassle. Since they'd see little value in it and it takes a bunch of space.
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@ProngsYou forgot an "r" at the end of your hider tag. It reads as [/hide] instead of [/hider].
That's why the format is messed up.
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Posting my sheet here for now. I probably add it to the characters tab soon. There a few sections I might fill out later but I guess I've got most of the essentials down
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My NS is about half done, but I think I'll put it on hold until the IC starts, juggling a few things right meow.
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@eemmttYour sheet is approved. Feel free to post it in the characters sheet.
Although I'd suggest fixing the typos but it isn't essential. It's 99% readable even in this form.
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Are you still accepting applications? I've been in a Star Trek-ey kinda mood lately and this looks like it'd work nicely. :D
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We haven't really gotten going, but i'm sure it's just to pop in on the discord and ask.

If you don't use discord someone will probably get to you eventually.
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Is this coming back?
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Yeah.
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Yaldie! So who's all here?
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I'm not sure specifically who's here, but there are a good amount. I'd say check the discord.
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Oh woof I just saw the last ooc post was a while ago, my mistake >.<
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It's mostly been people on discord talking of how much they don't have time for stuff.

But a discord usually makes the OOC very quiet.
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And that's the problem. Quiet OOC's make people think the place is dead
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Yup.

It's sort of a blessing and a curse.
Discord gives a good overview of who is online, one can easily PM and even voice-chat with people.
Downside is that the OOC seems dead, therefore the thread seems dead and few new players feel any need to join.
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To be fair the OOC activity of the past gave only a faux sense of activity. The true activity are sheets and especially IC posts.
In that aspect we indeed need to be more alive. Though yeah, not so dead here.
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So if this is A) still alive B)has space available, I may throw up a NS if that's cool.
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Sure, go ahead.

Anyways, I have finals coming up, so I will likely be unable to post until after they are done.
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