Hidden 5 yrs ago 5 yrs ago Post by unicorgi
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unicorgi I don’t have discord

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I got the hider to work!
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unicorgi I don’t have discord

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Somebody mind telling me how hiders work?
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Supermaxx dumbass

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Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by unicorgi
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unicorgi I don’t have discord

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I know
I can’t figure out how I went wrong
Hidden 5 yrs ago 5 yrs ago Post by mickilennial
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Somebody mind telling me how hiders work?

Your code is probably just broken due to some interference of some sort. Not sure where it falls apart, but I'll take a look at the RAW.
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Supermaxx dumbass

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Retype the [ ] on the ends of each and it'll prolly fix the code.
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unicorgi I don’t have discord

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Nope didn’t work
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@unicorgi

Fixed, there were two HR tags and a unfinished indent tag.


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@unicorgi That site for making avatars i would like. the info for me is a bit much but i am concerned with how to adjust to something like this with a lot of promise detail wise.
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unicorgi I don’t have discord

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Escuse me while i try and fix this (I might have possibly made it worse so ima retype the whole thing into a private convo with myself)

It’s missangestgames.com
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@Ruler Inc

I may have a character concept down the road, but right now I'm catching up on my RPs after a fortnight of an annoying flu that kept me from RPing consistently. Keep me posted on how things develop.
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@unicorgi This character's gonna need some work. I'm not going to be super strict about details for the RP, but I think; I think I want a bit more meat in her sheet. I mean, I left the sheet barebones for a reason but at least give me a two paragraph backstory.

Since the backstory is the most developed part of the character let me delve into that. For starters, I can say that Mariana has the potential to be a pretty interesting character, but you didn't really... develop her? You say that she's a gang member, but you don't explain anything about the gang. Like their name, size numbers, what they do, or even how she joined the gang (I mean, you can reasonably infer that she fell in line with them because of her poorer socioeconomic status). Though I honestly can't see a fifteen-year-old participating in a life of crime, child services would be all over that shit. lol

Though, I kind of get the impression she's more of a punk/rebel girl than an actual gang member (imma be real here; what gangster runs with the name Unicorgi? lol). But sure, let's go with a gang member, I guess the drawback would be that she would have a very piss-poor education. People in poor areas always get the short end of the stick education wise, and I don't see someone like Mariana would be hitting the books. Even though you were sparse with the details, you did lay a good groundwork... it just need some filling such as how and when she got her powers and maybe more information on what type of gang this is. When she got her power is probably the more important part because of how powers work in the setting (and the fact you went with Chromatic), this stuff has to be reasonably explained.

Now, onto her power... yeah that's not going to fly. You're going have to explain her power's capabilities a lot more in order for me to think about it or else she'd basically be able to do anything. I'm okay with a combo-platter power long as it's explained, but time powers are forbidden. Just look at the powers for the characters I made and try to see what I mean.

And adjust her formatting.
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unicorgi I don’t have discord

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Ok
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Supermaxx dumbass

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@unicorgi You'll wanna take the spaces out of the [hr ] to make those work.
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@Ruler Inc lmk if i gotta change anything

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Afro Samurai Like a Raisin in the Sun

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@ayzrules She's not thicc enough, rejected. Even though you ruined my glorious power, I think you should make some more edits to it to reflect that it's limited to beauty products. I know it's a tiny nitpick. Because the whole "lel who knows what could happen??11!!!!1?" part isn't really that clear imo.

@Afro Samurai I like Malik, I just want a more clearly explained reason as to how he was exposed to three different types of the Delta energy (I'm kinda wondering how he's a yellow when, at most, he's a red-blue). Also, logically, shouldn't his power blind him when he uses it?
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@ayzrules She's not thicc enough, rejected. Even though you ruined my glorious power, I think you should make some more edits to it to reflect that it's limited to beauty products. I know it's a tiny nitpick. Because the whole "lel who knows what could happen??11!!!!1?" part isn't really that clear imo.


wow racist BLOCKED and REPORTED

(also I added in a sentence in the powers section, lmk if all is okay)
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@Goldmarble I like him. Accepted.

@ayzrules Is it because she's asian????

Fyi, scrublord, there are thicc asians
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