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This seems to be a solid sheet (though the name Ashley doesn't seem very Westerosi to me), so its going to take some time to review proper. I'm sure the Tully player might have some notes, too. But it looks good so far, review will be soon-ish.
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@Inkarnate Thanks! I'll be here if there are any things that need fixin'
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@Inkarnate Thanks! I'll be here if there are any things that need fixin'


As an aside I am shaping Walder Frey to be a builder. His prices would not be too outrageous. Since you did mention rebuilding...
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@AtomicNut I approve :3
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@Aufklarung I read through your CS/House Sheet, and like Inki-ark-natius of the GM Team of doom, Ashley doesn't seem to fit into the usual lore/historical names. The same goes for Ashley's twin, Jocelyn. I am bit biased in names due to my many hours sunk into CK2 and the Game of Throne's mod, those two names in particular stand out and don't feel like they fit.

Most of the other things I am not too picky about, as I will allow the GM to review first, before I say any more.

Good luck in the review process, and should you get approved, I will happily work alongside you in order to have our House Relations and other information properly reflect one another.

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As an aside I am shaping Walder Frey to be a builder. His prices would not be too outrageous. Since you did mention rebuilding...

And a heavily taxed Walder Frey has the stone, iron, and vision how exactly?

@Aufklarung I read through your CS/House Sheet, and like Inki-ark-natius of the GM Team of doom, Ashley doesn't seem to fit into the usual lore/historical names. The same goes for Ashley's twin, Jocelyn. I am bit biased in names due to my many hours sunk into CK2 and the Game of Throne's mod, those two names in particular stand out and don't feel like they fit.

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Jocelyn is a Westerosi name, actually.

There's a few precedents.
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<Snipped quote by AtomicNut>
And a heavily taxed Walder Frey has the stone, iron, and vision how exactly?

<Snipped quote by Abefroeman>
Jocelyn is a Westerosi name, actually.

There's a few precedents.


The vision is something he earned around the travels after losing his leg. Stone and Iron are paid by whoever owns the castle... coz if not, no mason would ever work.
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@Inkarnate I think I'm done, except for relations with houses, and maybe some stuff that involves the actual lore of the world at this period in time.

Possibly work on those. I'll get you in the next review cycle.
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I'mma go to bed since it's almost 3AM, but I'll likely hash out the rest of the sheet this week. Friday at the latest, but I'll see if I can get it done later. Already have stuff in mind for PoVs and Mormont history, though it's just a matter of putting it to paper.
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@Inkarnate @Abefroeman Yeah, given the lack of precedent, I've edited my CS and switched the "Ashley" for "Mychel" and "Jocelyn" for "Jacelyn".
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Posting this here now as WIP. Will start work on Character POVs after rest ^^.

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@Inkarnate

I apologize for flip-flopping and being wishy-washy, but I think that ultimately, I am going to drop this RP. The problem lies entirely with me and my lack of real dedication to ASOIAF lore. I've also made the classic mistake of over-committing to too many RP's at once. This is by no means a negative assessment of the players in this RP, who are objectively a fun bunch. Special shout out to @agentmanatee for reaching out to me to try to flesh out relationships. I hope my absence does not derail your plans at all (or anyone else's for that matter).
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No problem! If you change your mind we'll be here to help.
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So... there's a discord thingy? :P
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@Aufklarung yep, on @Inkarnate's server. A whole section of channels for the RP (there's a lot of memeing though lol).
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So... there's a discord thingy? :P

I can generate an invite code when I've eaten breakfast and written a post for one of my other RPs.
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@Inkarnate Neato :3
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Before I get to reviews I'd like to point out important GM plans have been put in place for House Merryweather and House Marbrand.
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