Armor class - what you need to roll on the dice (+ bonuses) to hit Hit points - your life
For armor class, everyone gets 10 + 1 for every power you have relating to dexterity (hand-eye coordination, agility, reflexes, and balance) + [d4 for SciTech and Comm grads, d6 for Operations] + [race (special cases)] + For hit points, everyone gets 10 + number of RP arcs you have completed + [race (special cases) - Asgardians roll a d6] [power (special cases) - Regen Healing rolls a d4, Enhanced Condition a d4, Dermal Armor is a +2)
Secret Warriors
Cass: HP 17, AC 18
HP Modifiers: Alucard Institute 1x1, X-Men Issue 1, X-Men Issue 2, AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, House of M, AoS Vol 3
AC Modifiers: Dermal Armor (2), Enhanced Condition (3), Communications (3)
Tinley: HP 14, AC 13
HP Modifiers: AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, House of M, AoS Vol 3
AC Modifiers: Force Field Generation, Operations (2)
Maria: HP 16, AC 14
HP Modifiers: AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, House of M, AoS Vol 3, Regenerative Healing (2)
AC Modifiers: Operations (4)
Sparky: HP 13, AC 15
HP Modifiers: AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, AoS Vol 3
AC Modifiers: Flight, Electricity Manipulation, Sci-Tech (3)
Tempest: HP 17, AC 13
HP Modifiers: AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, AoS Vol 3, Regenerative Healing Factor (4)
AC Modifiers: Communications (3)
Raynor: HP 17, AC 15
HP Modifiers: Asgardian (4), AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, AoS Vol 3
AC Modifiers: Asgardian, Light Manipulation, Operations (3)
Flynn: HP 14, AC 12
HP Modifiers: AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, House of M, AoS Vol 3
AC Modifiers: Fire Manipulation, Operations (1)
Bonnie: HP 14, AC 13
HP Modifiers: Alucard Institute 1x1, AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, AoS Vol 3
AC Modifiers: Sci-Tech (3)
Matt: HP 11, AC 13
HP Modifiers: AoS Vol 3
AC Modifiers: Weapon Proficiency, Operations (2)
Oliver: HP 11, AC 14
HP Modifiers: AoS Vol 3
AC Modifiers: Speedster, Sci-Tech (3)
Black Order To be revealed...
Hit Points: Base (10 for operations, 6 for sci tech and comm) + Number of RP Arcs Completed + Powers [variable] + Race [variable]
Armor Class: Base (10 for operations, 6 for sci-tech and comm) + Dex (+1 for each Dex skill) + Armor + Innate Armor (Powers)
Cassandra Reed: HP 13, AC 17
HP: 6 (Communications) + 7 (Alucard Institute 1x1, X-Men Issue 1, X-Men Issue 2, AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, House of M, AoS Vol 3)
AC: 6 (Communications) + 7 (Piloting, power tools, handguns, rifles, knives, hand to hand, acrobatics) + 2 (Armor) + 2 (Dermal Armor)
Tinley Abercrombie: HP 14, AC 18 (20 w/ shields)
HP: 10 (Operations) + AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, House of M, AoS Vol 3
AC: 10 (Operations) + 6 (Motorcycle Driving, Fencing, Hand to Hand, Baton, Pistols, and Acrobatics) + 2 (Armor) + [2 when using force fields]
Maria Novikova: HP 16 , AC 21
HP: 10 (Operations) + 4 (AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, House of M, AoS Vol 3) + 2 (Regenerative Healing)
AC: 10 (Operations) + 9 (Driving, Dancing, Archery, Hunting, Acrobatics, Hand to Hand, Stealth, Pistols, Grenades) + 2 (Armor)
Theresa Sparks: HP 9, AC 12
HP: 6 (Sci Tech) + 3 (AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, AoS Vol 3)
HP: 6 (Communications) + 3 (AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, AoS Vol 3) + 2 (Regenerative Healing Factor)
AC: 6 (Communications) + 4 (Driving, Hand Guns, Video Games, Leg Scissors) + 2 (armor)
Raynor Baldursen: HP 17, AC 18
HP: 10 (Operations) + 3 (AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, AoS Vol 3) + 4 (Asgardian)
AC: 10 (Operations) + 6 (Jack of All Trades (Guns), Jack of All Trades (Bladed Weapons), Jack of All Trades (Unarmed Combat), Jack of All Trades (Projectile Weapons), Stunt Driving, Aircraft) + 2 (Asgardian)
Frederick Flynn: HP 14, AC 16
HP: 10 (Operations) + 4 (AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, House of M, AoS Vol 3)
AC: 10 (Operations) + 4 (Driving, Jack of Trades (Guns), Jack of Trades (Unarmed), Pistols) + 2 (Armor)
Bonnie Chase: HP 10, AC 15
HP: 6 (SciTech) + 4 (Alucard Institute 1x1, AoS Vol 1, AoS Vol 2, AoS Vol 3)
AC: 6 (SciTech) + 7 (Drawing, Throwing Knives, Hand to Hand, Gymnastics, Pistols, Surgery, Autopsies) + 2 (Armor)
Matthew Moss: HP 11, AC 19
HP: 10 (Operations) + 1 (AoS Vol 3)
AC: 10 (Operations) + 7 (Driving, Driving, Ice Skating, Hand to Hand, Helicopter, Guns, Guns) + 2 (armor)
Attack Roll: d20 + [2 x # of skills used] Damage Roll (not powers): d6 (Operations) or d4 (SciTech/Comm) + [2 x # of skills used] Damage Roll (powers): d10 (Operations) or d8 (SciTech/Comm) + [2 x # of skills used]
Name: Kwassi Asokho Aliases: Sparrow Species: Humans Powers: None Age: 26 Nationality: African Birthday: June 20, 1994 Birth Place: Golden City,Wakanda Gender: Male S.H.I.E.L.D. Academy: Sci-Tech Qualification: PHD in Bio-Engineering Years in the Field: New Recruit into S.H.E.I.L.D.
Appearance
Height: 5'10 Weight: 175 lbs Build: Toned Eyes: Brown Hair: Black Skin Tone: Dark Tattoos/Scars/Piercings: 3 Tattoos. Two Flowers one the collarbones and a quote across the right pec. Personal Style: Kwassi prefers to wear loose clothing. Often times opting to have a few (or more) buttons undone to show off his body and allow for air to flow. The materials he wears are all light and breathable such as 100% cotton or linen. He wears bright colors that are sure to stand out within a crowd ranging from vibrant reds to deep teals and lush oranges. His style can be describe as fun, practical, and sophisticated to an extent.
Sexuality: Pansexual Relationship Status: Single Personality: Kwassi tends to be playful and intellectually curious. He has the habit of juggling his friends, passions, hobbies, and career all at once. He has been know to be a social butterfly in his group, being able to talk to just about anyone on anything. If ever a subject comes up that he doesn't know, his curiosity tends to pick up on it and he brings it forth later to study when alone so that the next time conversation is struck he will surely be able to follow along and add in his own opinion. This coupled with his dashing good looks makes him a center at almost any party and allows him to blend in easily in such social scenery.
His curiosity however comes with a bit of a price. As he is want to do, Kwassi can tend to lose interest in certain subjects fast and thus become bored. It is this boredom that helped him become who he is today, and who ue was in thr past as well. It strives him to move forward and learn new and exciting things to help keep his mind active as well as his body. These traits are often times boiled down by some as him being characteristically a Gemini through and through. He supposes that this 'two faced' sign can only be a boon now that he works in the field of espionage.
Habits: Whistling, Snapping Hobbies: Swimming, Tech building, and Chem work Fears:
Hornets
Snall Spaces
Lobotomie
Likes:
Ice Cream
Wildlife
Gaming
Running
Swimming
Iced Chais
Dislikes:
Boredom
Monotony
Chick Fil A
Drinking
Drugs
Pitch Darkness
Cards On The Table
General World Skills:
Photographic Memory
Driving a Car
Trivia Knowledge
Mixed Martial Arts
Acrobatics
Escrima
Bo Staff
Speciality Skills: Limit 7. These are skills that apply to your career path - see the suggested specialty skills box for your academy if you're stuck!
Bio-Engineering
Wakandan Tech
Jack of All Trades (Science)
Toxicology
Nano-Technology
Chemistry
Anatomy
What Is On Your Person: Limited to the spots provided. This is for things like your wallet, your phone, your SHIELD ID badge, your car keys, your lucky coin...If it isn't listed, you don't have it.
Two Hyper Magnetic Escrima sticks. (When combined together grow out to form a bo staff :Wakandan tech)
Wallet: Credit Cards, Cash, S.H.E.I.L.D. I.D.
Keys to Jeep wrangler
Phone
Empty throwing darts. (Chambers to be filled with toxins)
Portable Chem Kit with various ingredients.
Old Domino mask from Vigilante days
Electric Brass Knuckles
Possessions: Limited to the spots provided. Keep it simple! Focus more on things that are important to them - don't put in things that are a given, like a bed. But a special photo of them and their cat? Put that here! A stolen file on someone? Include it! If you're having trouble, think of the things you'd show to someone if they came over to your room - or maybe that you DEFINITELY would not want them to see....
Small lab with a wider range of chemicals to play with
Collection of books on various plant life and animals that secreet or create toxins and they applications.
Small Collapsable box full of electronics for working on tech
Collection of Games for every gaming station.
Gaming Stations with their controllers displayed before them. (2 of each controller for 2 player if need be)
History
Why did you want to become an Agent of S.H.I.E.L.D.?: After the invasion of New York it was clear to Kwassi that there was so much more for him to know. There was life beyond theirs and technology beyond that. Wakanda was already years ahead of the others on Earth but this new tech that the Chitari had brought appeared to rival even theirs. With his curiosity peaked and his boredom in need of being satisfied he decided to join S.H.I.E.L.D. in their mission.
General History: Kwassi Asohko grew up in Wakanda for some of his formative years. His parents helped created and engineer some of the tech used within the tribes. Repairing damage to the weapons and sheild tech that was developed by the Golden Tribe. They were brillant minds in their field and Kwassi adored to watch them work. His inquisitive mind asking questions as fast as he could think them about how and why each thing worked the way they did. His photpgraphic mind allowing him to visualise and recall the procedures that his parents did while at home or in the lab.
When he was Ten years old his parents had accepted a job out in the United States. Their genius was a gateway to many doors and it made for a wealthy and luxurious childhood for young Kwassi. He traveled across the world meeting gurus and other masters to train from a young age in the ways of martial arts. A choice he had made when hearing of the Vigilantes that littered America and his own stories of thr Black Panther from back home.
Training and developing both his mind and both he began to take courses in Bio-Engineering. The things that living beings were able to create in order for defense fascinanted him. He wanted to learn how to create the same reactions and use those to his advantage in combat if ever need be. He learned how to replicate and fix some Wakandan technology from his parents and used that to form a protective suit for fighting as well as to help measure any weaknesses in his form while studying martial arts.
Once he had graduated and was now twenty-two years of age, he took on to the streets and was known as The Sparrow. He flitted from roof to roof as a masked Vigilante, and used his skills to bring in crime that the police simply couldn't or wouldn't do. His knowledge of acids allowed him to dissolve away any locks that may hinder him, he created his own toxins to paralyze his prey and leave them behind for the authorities to take in. When he was particularly restless he would use his martial prowess to disable his opponents before tying them up and leaving them behind with a calling card of the Sparrow. Eventually he drew the eye of a S.H.I.E.L.D. operative who asked him to join their mission in safeguarding the world. The invitation he had been waiting for.
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Can i be lazy? Character Quote: Vendi, Vidi, Vici Theme Song:Immigrant Song Anything Else: Children's Crusade Demi post *By submitting this CS in its completion I am stating I have read all the rules for this Rp and am agreeing to follow them to the fullest with respect and courtesy. I acknowledge that I can and will be removed from the RP without warning if I break a rule or cause problems with my fellow Rpers or the GM.
Asgardian / Apprentice to Doctor Strange Claimed NPC Sheets
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@The Man Emperor Inhumans are completely fine, just no more mutants on the team. We do have a discord, but you'd have to submit your character first and get it approved.
Name: Astrad Lungren Aliases: Winterspell, Agent Lungren, Asty (the following are mostly joke names used on him by the other agents), Genderbent Elsa, the Ice King, Icebound Swede, Frozen Touch, Iceman's transcontinental twin, Arctic Man, Hopeless Romantic, and Warmest Winter Species: Inhuman Powers:
Cryogenesis: Astrad is capable of generating up to one metric ton of ice at any given time in any shape he wishes within four feet of himself; once this limit is reached, he has to make some of the ice that he previously made disappear in order to make room for more. His ice can be as brittle as glass or as hard as stainless steel; the more durable the ice, the more willpower and stamina required to generate it. He can also rapidly cool down objects upon physical contact; Astrad was able to cool down a heated steam pipe in moments.
Cryokinesis: Astrad is also capable of controlling and manipulating the ice that he generates with extreme precision; it would be as if he had telekinesis, though this only extends to the ice that he creates. Age: 31 Nationality: Swedish Birthday: January 2, 1990 Birth Place: Stockholm, Sweden Gender: Male S.H.I.E.L.D. Academy: Operations Qualification: Astrad was an exemplary sniper and detective for the Swedish police. Years in the Field: 3 years
Appearance
Height: 5'8" Weight: 75 kilograms Build: Lean Eyes: Dark Blue Hair: Brown Skin Tone: White Tattoos/Scars/Piercings: None Personal Style: Astrad usually black clothing when on the job, sometimes grey if he is in a very festive mood. Some agents say that he is emulating the former Director Fury in his attire choices, as Astrad usually puts on a trench coat as well. He likes wearing a hat, usually a bonnet. When out of duty, he usually has a shirt, and then a polo, and then a hoodie.
Sexuality: Straight Relationship Status: Single Personality: Astrad is, for the lack of a better word, warm. In stark contrast to his powers of cold and frost, he has a very swell personality and a penchant for being casual in speech and address to the other agents, especially those that he had already known for a long time. He does know where to draw the line though, and is very respectful towards the likes of Victoria Hand, Maria Hill, Phil Coulson, and Nick Fury.
Agent Lungren, as he is often called, has a well honed approach towards missions: adaptation. It is his firm belief that no plan survives first contact with the enemy, so he usually improvises and shifts techniques in the middle of operations should new problems rear their ugly heads. It is thus said that those who would be under his command someday can expect to change course midflight and so on. He is also highly principled, refusing to leave even a single agent to harm's way unless if it is utterly, absolutely, and totally impossible to extract them without exposing the rest of the team to unparalleled risk.
Astrad Lungren is also a religious man, praying at the beginning of every mission either with just himself or with anyone that shares the same beliefs. He believes that his powers are a tool gifted from above (it doesn't matter if Inhumans are a product of Kree experiments) to protect those who do not have the benefit of superpowers or metal suits.
Habits: Astrad has a habit of making snow drifts around him when bored, as well as biting his friends on the shoulder when they are being relaxed. Hobbies: Ice skating and playing video games Fears:
Communism
Sharks
Large Spiders
Likes:
Pizza
Cute, fluffy animals
Lasagna
The power of friendship
Kids
History
Dislikes:
Pineapple on Pizza
Communists
Flat Earth Theorists
Conspiracy Theorists
Black Widow and Quake shippers
Anyone that ships any of the Avengers, X-Men, and Fantastic 4 in the internet
Cards On The Table
General World Skills:
Driving
Patient Listener
Photographic Memory
Excellent cook
Fluent in Swedish
Speciality Skills:
(Jack of all Trades) Unarmed Combat
(Jack of all Trades) Guns
Foreign Language Proficiency (German)
Infiltration
Criminology
Foreign Language Proficiency (Spanish)
Foreign Language Proficiency (Russian)
Medical Issues/Injuries: N/A
What Is On Your Person:
SHIELD issued sat-phone
Personal smart phone
Car Keys
Wallet (and everything within)
Clothes (SHIELD issued jacket with the logo on the shoulder, black undershirt, black pants, and a grey ushanka.
SHIELD ID
A necklace with the Cross of Lorraine
Notebook and pen
Possessions:
A picture frame of him and his family (parents, siblings, and the cat)
A music box
A guitar that his mom brought for his 25th birthday. She had the SHIELD logo put on it for good measure.
All of the Harry Potter books in Swedish.
A special Ikea foldable chair.
A picture of some other agent that he happens to like. No one can know.
A high end laptop, could either be used for gaming or a Sci-Tech person can use it to hack.
A compass.
A box of Hershey's Kisses that he always refills as other people can freely take from it.
History
Why did you want to become an Agent of S.H.I.E.L.D.?: Astrad Lungren originally saw SHIELD as a prestigious organization of spies and protectors of the Earth, and when they asked him to join their group, he didn't turn it down. He was a brave agent, and when the Terrigen Bomb hit, he was still determined to fulfill the oath that SHIELD agents take upon their initiation: protect the world from the wierd world.
General History: Astrad Lungren was born in Stockholm, Sweden, to a pastor father and a surgeon mother. Though he had been born in an increasingly secularized country, he was brought up to be a devout Lutheran Christian by his parents, instructing him that every prayer must be supplemented with conscious and hard effort from his own part. Astrad was also the middle child out of three siblings; thus, he was never favoured like his older brother or younger sister, and thus was the most independent out of them. When he was 15, his family moved to near the more wooded areas of central Sweden, where he would eventually be taught by his rather experienced father on how to hunt game (with a licence of course) using a rifle. He eventually got very good at using hunting rifles at hitting even fast moving targets, such as running deer and wolves. He got so good at shooting by the time he was 20 that his father became concerned that maybe he was enjoying it a little too much. However, his son assured him that he'll use his skills for the better.
At the age of 21, Astrad graduated from the University of Stockholm as a Bachelor of Arts in Criminology, and was soon in the Swedish police as a detective and at the same time, a sniper for their SWAT teams in Stockholm. These two factors eventually led the branch of SHIELD in their base in St. Petersburg to call him, citing that they were impressed with his talents, and said that he would make a great agent. He wouldn't pass up the opportunity of being part of such a renowned organization, and thus immediately accepted the offer of being an agent of SHIELD. He was already a good detective and a sniper, but that wasn't exactly enough. Astrad would later be trained in unarmed combat and other forms of firearms (pistols and assault rifles), and would be fairly competent in both aspects.
Once deemed ready to go out in the field, he would be deployed in operations across Russia, the Baltic States, the Nordic Nations, and Central Europe, over a period of three years. He was an Operations Agent, thus, he often fought alone, if not with a partner. It was said that Astrad Lungren was a skilled agent that maybe worked too hard, and had to be persuaded to take vacations. He did relish his vacations though, as these were times that he was able to reconnect with the people of his life that weren't fellow agents.
One day, however, his whole life was twisted, either for better or worse. In February 2021, the Terrigen Bomb detonated in the Earth's atmosphere, triggering Terrigenesis in a titanic amount of dormant Inhumans. Amongst them, it would turn out, was Astrad Lungren, a man who was already an agent of SHIELD. Afraid of hurting others, he isolated himself and did not return calls from other SHIELD agents. This was a mistake, however, as HYDRA operatives stormed his apartment, seeking to take him in as a brainwashed asset via the Faustus Program. As a trained agent, he managed to fight the initial attackers off, but he knew that he can't them on all at once, as he wasn't able to fully control his Inhuman powers either way.
It was here that other SHIELD agents came and removed HYDRA's grunts from the scene, either gunning them down or forcing them to escape. When asked why didn't he answer, he said that he was also affected by the mists, and didn't want to accidentally freeze anyone to death. Fortunately, though, SHIELD had just the right persons for the job of making him learn to control his powers…
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Character Quote: "I believe we have been given these powers to protect those without." Theme Song:Winterspell by Thomas Bergesen Anything Else: I liked the Framework and Infinity Saga storylines best. And example post be:
Nikolay Andreevich Ivushkin
As always, Nikolay had taken a lot of notes, applying just about every color in the rainbow when it came to his highlights on important words and terminology out of all the things that the teacher had taught. He usually wrote his notes in his native Russian Cyrillic, translating his thoughts from English to his mother tongue before jotting them down. He did this on purpose; these were, after all, his personal notes, and he wasn't at all the type that let others copied from his work, as it was his firm belief that everyone should learn independence when it came to studying properly. There weren't a lot of other Russians in the school anyway, and it wasn't like he would actively let them copy either.
Nikolay licked his lips as he looked upon the food that was being served to him in the cafeteria. He wasn't sure what this was called, but it has been the stuff that he has been buying for the last few days that he has been here. It was probably called zinikang... or something. It was much better when rice is added, too.
He bowed to the lady over the counter in an attempt to give his thanks... only for him to remember that this was the Philippines, not China or Korea. The small minority of Koreans in Sakhalin were the only Asians that he had interacted for most of his life, so he kind of assumed that they were all similar... only they weren't at all. Embarassed, he simply managed to say 'salamat po' (thank you), though with a heavily accented tone. He need more practice...
Nikolay proceeded to look for people that he already knew; those he already considered to be somewhat familiar or amicable to him in this school of magical warriors. Thankfully, he found Jiem and Pablo. Together as always...
"Eyo, privet.", Nikolay said to the two. "Do you mind having a third wheel?"
*By submitting this CS in its completion I am stating I have read all the rules for this Rp and am agreeing to follow them to the fullest with respect and courtesy. I acknowledge that I can and will be removed from the RP without warning if I break a rule or cause problems with my fellow Rpers or the GM.
The color code you picked is either currently in use / very close to Cassandra's color code, so it'll need to be changed
You have too many powers for him. I'm willing to let you start with 1-2 powers, with the option to potentially unlock more later on, so pick which ones you want to keep.
So your skills need to be broken up. Each language needs its own skill slot. (Jack of all Trades) Marksmanship is too broad, you should break it up into separate skills like (Jack of All Trades) Guns, (Jack of All Trades) Bows, etc etc.
Oh and this is just a note for you, the Terrigen Bomb has happened so if you're struggling with a time for his powers to come out basically, February 14 2021 a ton of inhumans on Earth got powers.
The color code you picked is either currently in use / very close to Cassandra's color code, so it'll need to be changed
You have too many powers for him. I'm willing to let you start with 1-2 powers, with the option to potentially unlock more later on, so pick which ones you want to keep.
So your skills need to be broken up. Each language needs its own skill slot. (Jack of all Trades) Marksmanship is too broad, you should break it up into separate skills like (Jack of All Trades) Guns, (Jack of All Trades) Bows, etc etc.
Oh and this is just a note for you, the Terrigen Bomb has happened so if you're struggling with a time for his powers to come out basically, February 14 2021 a ton of inhumans on Earth got powers.
The color code is hard for me to read, so try to find something more legible
In the personal style section, this needs to be edited - "Because of his body's ability to practically ignore external temperature changes, he uses clothing that would have caused other people to sweat an ocean should they be placed in a place like the Middle East or the tropics."
In the personality section, this needs to be edited. Fury is no longer Director - Maria Hill is. "He does know where to draw the line though, and is very respectful towards the likes of Victoria Hand, Maria Hill, Phil Coulson, and Director Fury."
For his fears, they need to be in the bullet point format.
Under his General Skills, you ought to list Swedish - this isn't considered a specialty skill since he was born and raised in Sweden.
In the What Is On Your Person section, list his usual clothing for when on the job
Since he has a bachelor's degree in Criminology, I definitely recommend listing Criminology for one of his skills - this one would be Specialty
I'm fine with you using the Faustus Program in your backstory, that's a neat angle. ^^
Sorry for the delay with these, yesterday was my little brother's birthday.
