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@ColourlessKing what did it taste like?
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i'm in the mood to re-watch my lord of the rings dvds by this weekend.
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@ColourlessKing what did it taste like?


It does taste like chicken but the meats thinner and kinda more mild.
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I recently put up my first group rp in a while, but I am not getting my hopes up with it.
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Maybe actually try and improve your writing???
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@Majoras End
I have been practicing, and trying to get out of my comfort zone for a while now.
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Bit of critique, but lurking through your most active rps atm, I don't really see that. There's no plot. No substanance. If you need help trying to move things along, it doesnt hurt to plan things with other players/GMs. Other than that, your characters seem like the cookie cutter type with the whole sighing and lip biting for no reason. Atleast give a reason why. If they wanna break up with their respective partners, that can add some conflict. If they have problems with like, family or old friends for example, it can drive the plot forward.

Ya get it?
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@Majoras End
That's when the roleplays slow down, especially if it is down to only one or two roleplayers, maybe three if I am lucky.

anyway, if you want to give advice, can you look over this. I thought the plot is fine, but no one is biting:
roleplayerguild.com/topics/181880-the…

I could even make you a co-gm so you could have a say.
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@Vampiretwilight

Well, sometimes slowing down is a good thing. But if you tend to lose players, it might be best to plan ahead before then, or change what type of rp it is and adapt.

On the topic of your current one, you should make an interest check before moving to the real deal. Even if it's to keep your thread clean of bumps, it's a better chance at getting players.

And uh, I'm already in a bit of rps AND thinking of GMing my own again, so I might not have room for another;

Not to mention my ADHD making me lose focus alot.
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@Majoras End
um, alright..
And also...nix the vampires then? change it to something else?

cause the concept of the party was 'in an honor of the late queen' kind of thing as you can see so I kind of wanted to keep that. But I can change the species of the kingdom and its' royal family to something else if need be.

oh, um, ok. I didn't know that. anyway, I understand.
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That's up to you! Thought if you really want my thoughts, you can add more species besides vamps and werewolves.
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Well....I did put that the werewolves had allies, but that was left up to interpretation, meaning the species could have been anything.
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Ah, okay! Good to know!
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Yep. the line was
"The werewolf army and their allies" or something along those lines. :)
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Anytime I create a character that is blind I end up crying because of how sweet they are.
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Anytime I create a character that is blind I end up crying because of how sweet they are.


And then you think of a way to murder them.
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Recently, I watched the movie, "Fighting With my Family." It was much better than I expected. The young man, Zak Knight trained teenagers how to become wrestlers. One of whom was a blind kid. It was based on a true story and the blind kid ended up wrestling in a professional bout.
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And then you think of a way to murder them.


Hey! Not always! I always feel guilty when I do kill them though...
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Ya know the moments when you keep thinking of ways to put a character through Hell but only feel slightly guilty for it?
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Almost none of the characters I have written, none so far as I can remember, have had "good" outcomes in their lives. Some are better than others, just that nearly all have some terrible influence or impact upon them, tragic or not. I cannot begin to fathom a character who is happy and all who is quite well, what they would even do or why.
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