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The prodigal son has returned. All the way to the Character tab.
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So, I have to be honest with you on this one: I don’t really like this. At all.

I’ll be the first to admit personal bias, but considering the inspirations I’m working with, I’m uncomfortable with such a cynical character. Yes, I know there’s a gas attack in the backstory alone, but the tone of this tale is supposed to be more hopeful, if not necessarily upbeat. Reading your submission just made me feel... defeated.

I’m sorry, but I don’t think I can accept this, not in this state. I know you said you’re unfamiliar with Spider-Man lore in general, so it might not hurt to brush up on it more before trying again.

Thank you for your time.
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So I made some changes, let me know if I need to change anything. Also I took out the mutation because I didn't think it would be cool enough. I was thinking about him controlling or fusing metal to his body like armor. But I think that would be too much, unless one of those mutations would be okay.
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For metal fusion, I’m gonna call it a 25-point Mutation, just because of the increased versatility (I’d normally call it 30, but considering you’re literally a metal head, I’m inclined to be generous).

Which will give you 75/100 to spend on everything else. Just to reiterate, Mutation is not a separate, special category. If you want points in Mutation, you gotta spend them from your pool of 100. Sound good?
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So i made some changes, let me know if i need to make further changes.
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Only thing I ask is that you actually list the 25 points you put in Mutation, just to make it a little easier for me to add it all up. Other than that, the points all add up, the character looks decent, so...



Into the Character tab, hombre.
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Hi guys I just wanted to let you know that i will be taking a break from roleplaying. I apologize for any inconveniences this will cause you, Have a good day.
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Thanks for letting us know. If you’d like to come back to your character eventually, we’ll see about squeezing you in. For now, take care, and have a nice day. :)
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I would love to come back, but for the time being, I just need a break from roleplaying.
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I'm kind of unsure how to word the last part, if I could get advice that'd be lovely. Hope this is okay.


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The last part is essentially for opinions on other characters in the RP/Important characters in your character's life.

I usually format it with a name, then their connection to my character, then a written description of how my character views that person.



EDIT: Any other help you need, we can always chat on the discord server!

If you prefer to just use Guild though, I can help here too.
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The verdict is in:



...and so are you! CHARACTER TAB IT.
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hey saw this as I was scrolling through some rps to join. I was wondering if this is still open?
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@sly13 By all means!
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All right, let’s take it from the top, one more time…


What’s your name?
Alan Walker

How old are you?
19. I'm kinda in that weird time where you're no longer a kid but not quite an adult yet.

What do you look like?


What did you do before the Recluse incident?
I'll do my best not to sound like a whiner or that I'm milking sympathy but I'd be lying if I said life has been easy for me and my Mom. You see, when I was a kid, my Dad walked out the door on me and her and we never saw or heard from him again. No phone calls, no birthday cards, not even a paycheck for child care. Needless to say, I've never quite forgiven him.

Anyways, this forced my Mom to work some less-than-ideal jobs to make ends meet, not helped by the fact she herself had grown up in a rather dysfunctional family so outside help was a bit limited. I did my part to help, like working hard in school and learning to do certain menial tasks like cleaning and doing the dishes so she didn't have to do them the days she came home exhausted.

However, I'd be lying if I said I was some shining paragon as I did do some things I'm not entirely proud of. Like one time, a mugger tried to steal my mom's wallet and when he laid his hands on her...I snapped and broke his jaw with a few solid punches. The police said the only reason I wasn't doing juvie was cause the guy was a repeat offender and couldn't afford a lawyer.

That said, word of these situations got out and...let's just say I didn't have too many friends growing up and leave it at that.

Around the time of my high-school graduation though things were finally looking up. By some miracle, my Mom got a job in New York and we moved there to start over. It was quite a change but I like to think I handled it well enough.

However, that's when the Recluse Incident happened...


What happened after the incident?
Well, I recall falling very sick and waking up in the hospital several days later. Surprisingly, I didn't feel sick anymore. If anything, I felt...fine. Better than fine actually. I felt...powerful. I quickly realized I had perfect vision too, among other...benefits.

Somehow, I had managed the impossible...and gained actual superpowers.

What happens next? Well...I guess you'll just have to wait and see.

Super Strength: 10
Agility: 10
Durability: 10
Regeneration: 15
Spider-Sense: 15
Mutation: 40
Bio-Feedback: Alan has total control of his body and its functions, all the way down to the cellular level. Although he is only just starting to grasp how it works, it's clear it has a lot of untapped potential. He can control his metabolism, his own heartbeat, purge poisons and toxins from his system, numb his pain receptors, boost his self-healing and even alter his appearance to a degree.

Do you believe in aliens?
I love Sci-fi and we do live in but one tiny corner of a seemingly infinite cosmos. As such, I think it's ignorant of us to think we're the only intelligent life-forms in existence.

What are your goals for the future?
I've always wanted to be a superhero so I'm finally getting the chance to live the dream. Gonna use my new powers to try and find who set up that bomb and why. That said, I do also want to find my father and get some answers out of him...and I'm more than ready to use force if I have to.
You lived in New York for a while now, right? What do you think of the city?
I've only lived here a few months or so but I gotta say it's pretty nice so far. It definitely could do with some "cleaning up" here and there but I can think of much worse places to live.

How much technology do you use on a daily basis?
A fair amount. I try not to take it to a crazy extent but I do sometimes find people are more reasonable and open-minded in the online world than those you find in the real world.

What do you like?
-My Mom
-Computers
-Anime
-Comics
-Gaming
-Cleaning
-Cooking (I find this and Cleaning surprisingly calming)


What do you dislike?
-Corruption
-My deadbeat father
-Jokes In Poor Taste
-Tapioca Pudding
-The very concept of being "the best at any cost"


Do you think true evil exists?
I do. Although I'm aware that the line between right and wrong isn't always a clear one, there are certain things in this world that are so horrific they can only be the product of someone who only lives to make others suffer.
What’s your favorite color?
Blue. Not sure why you needed to know that but there ya go.

Favorite song?
Will Figure This Out Later.

Anything else to add?
I sometimes like to make little arts and crafts and sell them on the street corner. People also say I bake a mean batch of brownies too. Thinking of running my own bakery.

What are your thoughts on these people?

Alexander "Xander" Lee: Eaten at his grandparents chinese place a few times. It's good food and Xander seems like a decent guy. I wonder if I should ask him for a few self-defense lessons...

Lindy Audrum: Not gonna lie, that girl scares me sometimes. Seriously, she looks like she could make my head explode like a grape just by squeezing it. That said, her frequent stops to pick up goodies has led me to realize she's a good person who appreciates tasty treats.

Just goes to show you shouldn't judge a book by its cover.
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Pretty much done.



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Snoop! Do these character sheets meet our standards for acceptance?



Then they shall be added to the Character tab posthaste!
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So I'm back to get on the saddle, are we waiting for mor people to join?
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