Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by YummyYummy
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Alright! I've got this character up. I've went for a very different style than I usually do, and I still have the personality section to fill. I do feel like the CS itself covers the character's personality in many different ways, but I'm thinking of how to make it interesting. I've also tried to take an interesting take as a fighter despite being more 'scholarly'. The CS should be read as a sort of 'case file', while the abilities section are Tamako's own recordings kept to herself (She wouldn't want everyone to know all her tricks!).

EDIT: I hope I didn't over-do it with some stuff, such as the talents. I feel like the concoctions are more so 'tools' she can use born from her expertise in bio-engineering and medicine. There isn't much skill to just ... Throwing gas bottles.

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Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by RoflsMazoy
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@YummyYummy Oh yeah, the Vile Concoctions part is great. It still fits great with the a Fighter's style of being fairly direct with applications of 'force', and in this instance force just happens to be alchemical concoctions.

The character sheet is just great overall too! I've done the sort of case file character sheet but never to this kind of an extent. I wonder how long it took you to do it all, since it's very thorough and nicely organized.

I do got a couple questions but it's a little bit of stuff about background so I'll probably PM it to you.
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Oh lord I put off reading character sheets for 3 whole hours and I missed yours @OwO. I gotta sleep soon so I'll most likely take a look in the morning.

EDIT: Eh, wait, not finished. I'll still look at it though, probably
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@RoflsMazoy Thanks! I did put in a little bit of time, took me a nice evening. You did put quite a bit of effort on your premise, I felt like I should repay it with some effort too. That isn't to say quantity makes great, I mostly chose that route to do something new. Now it still need some tweaking with some formulations and typos, but the big parts are done.

Gotcha on the PM's. C:
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@OwO Roku's approved! Ain't nothing wrong with him far as I can see. I should also say @YummyYummy your character's also approved. You two can go ahead and put 'em in the character tab, but gimme a sec to put a placeholder for NPC sheets first.

For everyone else, it'd be great if you could tell me when you're done with 'em, at least for the next couple days because I'm gonna be busy, again, irl.
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I will be done with my character on Monday cause I will be away for the weekend
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Aye, just going to finish some parts of the CS and fix some formulations and it'll be in there! Not in the biggest of hurries.
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I'd finish up if I didn't have so much trouble thinking of techniques
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I be finished within the next few days.
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Still working on my draft, but I've only now just realised how similar some parts of my concepts were to @YummyYummy, I might need to go back and change some things. Also, names are hard.


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Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by YummyYummy
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@TheMushroomLord Make the character you want to make, bud. Don't let a butt-appendage lady get in the way.
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Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by Bartimaeus
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Alrighty, my gal's done finally. She could use a little polishing, but the sheet is functional. I think xd



I think all the other sheets so far look naisu, so hopefully mine is alright haha.
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Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by TheMushroomLord
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Okay, here’s version 2. Still need to finish off and tidy up some things, work on colours and actually give this guy a name (if anyone has any suggestions on that front it wouldn't go unappreciated).

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I'll try to have my character done within the week. I gotta get school stuff done first, but it should be done this week
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Alright, I finished the section for Missions and Training in the OOC. To summarize in case you haven't read it, on a particular night you can choose to either train or undertake a mission. Training is more free-form, and you basically decide what your character is going to do and play it out with either me if you need NPC enemies, or another player if you're stringing them along for the night.

Missions are standard plot to plot stuff with/against me. It's basically where a decent chunk of plot will happen.

Now I don't think I mentioned this in but it's one mission/training session per night. Although if you're done with training early, you might get called into a mission which is doing particularly badly.

I do wanna emphasize though that particularly the Training structure is one which is rather experimental, and I'm not too sure will pan out all that well. I'm sure it'll be pretty good if you're doing it with someone else but in this instance I'm just iffy a couple aspects like if it's me that's doing it and trying to back up you, I'm not sure how well that goes or how fun it feels. Also not sure about splitting up the player base if there's multiple missions that need to be done in a night. Kinda doubt that happens though because I'm the one that's supposed to set that.

Anyway, that's all about that. I'll check out your character sheets tomorrow since I'm feeling pretty drained tonight already.
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Updated a bit with some different techniques and things. Let me know if everything still checks out.


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Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by Cu Chulainn
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Been looking for a roleplay like this! Is this still open? I might make an Arts savant if so~
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@Bartimaeus Character looks great! Feel free to put them in the character tab if you think you're finished.

@TheMushroomLord I'll also pretty much say accepted, I don't think there's anything you could really add that'd make me say no.

@Vega7285 The sheet looks pretty good, but you wanted to ask for some ideas for using twin character techniques? If you don't mind splashing into Unarmed Martial Arts as a Talent I'd suggest maybe something like a Tandem Beatdown, where Mizuki flies out on its own and starts attacking the enemy while Homura engages them hand to hand combat. Or maybe Mizuki can split into two swords, so Homura uses one and Mizuki does the same thing.

Or how about this actually; make Mizuki her own character sheet! Or at least adding Mizuki as an extra feature on the character sheet. Something like incorporating 1 (or 2, to match Homura's) rank/s of Specialist in as 'Mizuki', as if the Agency recognizes both characters as individual personnel. That way you could slip some combination attacks into Mizuki's skill set instead of needing to share space for both of them.

One final suggestion is just for a more 'specific' take on the tandem beatdown, as in being specific about how the strikes go you could describe the types of attacks Mizuki will do while it's out for the combination strikes. So something like;

Mizuki flies through the air to strafe the opponent with its point and slicing edge, before performing a diagonal slash downwards from behind the opponent, followed by a quick barrage of left and right strikes as Homura fights them on the other side.


Lots of directions you could go but I would recommend something like that, which would be pretty fun. Otherwise I have no complaints about the character sheet.

@Cu Chulainn Yes we're still open! If we close I'll change the status myself. I don't imagine we would unless we got too many players, although I suppose you never know what might happen.
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@RoflsMazoy Awesome! I do have a question regarding Arts, specifically when it comes to how it was like before the Akasha. Would there be fringe families and secret Shinto sects that knew of it to a degree? I was essentially considering someone whose family managed a shrine and made a contract with the Kami who resided in it, so I was wondering to what degree they would be spiritually aware of such things.
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