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Yes.


Do you have any questions regarding the content, formatting, structure, etc.?
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I read it over twice, so I think I'm good.
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@Tank O The Lake These people just thrown off by how normal your guy seems, if your doing space crime I'd be down to make a character in your space crime family
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The Vadilevs are actually a family of war heroes. My guy controls a small army, so I think I can hold my own on some backwater world, then slowly expand into my character's dream of the largest and most powerful syndicate out there.
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"One day, we shall meet again, and my shield will be with yours or on it."

- Alexei Vadilev, 2058
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@Fractured So is that it, then?
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@Fractured So is that it, then?


I was reading through it. I don't have any problems with the character, so I want to drill in a bit on how you want to integrate him into MR. I'll also refer to our resident weapons expert @Galaxy Raider since he knows way more about guns and such, especially ones that are powered up.
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@Fractured Fire away.
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@Fractured Fire away.


Since most of our stuff is with interdimensional beings, did you have anything in mind for interacting with him?
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He originally came here with much of his outfit after stealing an experimental portal device in '61. Needless to say, he's less than thrilled that he lost a lot of good men trying to acquire a thing that just shot him into the middle of nowhere. Luckily, he's managed to cobble the thing back together and bring the rest of his crew, establishing a link home.
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"We don't question the portal, because questioning it makes it break."

- Alexei Vadilev, 2063
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He originally came here with much of his outfit after stealing an experimental portal device in '61. Needless to say, he's less than thrilled that he lost a lot of good men trying to acquire a thing that just shot him into the middle of nowhere. Luckily, he's managed to cobble the thing back together and bring the rest of his crew, establishing a link home.


So he's a space traveler that managed to go interdimensional, and now they travel Existence?
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@Fractured Well, he's from Earth (at least an Earth), and they were working on portals to colonize other worlds, and he stole a portal.
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And his guys kind of broke it in the process and knocked him and about 50 other guys into a new universe.
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And his guys kind of broke it in the process and knocked him and about 50 other guys into a new universe.


Alright, cool. So they're interdimensional now and end up running into one of our existing IC chars?
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Um, yes.
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Um, yes.


Anything on motivation now that they've realized that they're part of a much, much bigger world than they thought? Or have they realized this yet?

Even universes with a "multiverse" are parts of isolated "clusters" in MR, and someone isn't truly considered interdimensional/Tier Four until they can go between any universe and any cluster.
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I'm planning on being a villain/antihero, just so y'all know. Considering my ambition is to become the literal CEO of Crime, this is rather obvious.
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Yeah, he's actually taking this rather well. While some would see an insurmountable barrier of a barren universe, Alexei sees profit everywhere.
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