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Idc when/what we do. Im just here for the ride
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What you suggest to make her unique?


She doesn't need to be a killing machine or have a particularly tragic backstory. In fact, if she's already super-duper skilled, it would make her less interesting to play with because there's no room to grow. She just needs to be someone with a story that's interesting to watch.

Maybe she could be a twin or sibling to someone who seems to always get recognition and praise, while she's usually ignored. That way, her joining a gang makes more sense since she's trying to rebel, and she could be motivated by her desire not to be outdone by her sibling.
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Im sorry then. I guess was expecting something different.
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Keep in mind this is a RP set in a school with a bunch of, delinquent, but otherwise normal kids, it states so in the original post. So having a genetic experiment clone super human would be a bit out of place.
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@leyroyjenkins Please don't take the GM's rejection as some kind of judgment over your writing, either. Just because she isn't a fit for this game doesn't mean she's bad, or even uninteresting.

I'm not speaking from much of a pedigree, but to disagree with Noblebandit slightly, I believe that, at their core, interesting characters make interesting choices. The backstory merely provides context: who she is, who she thinks she is, and what the reader will expect from her at face value as a result of that. The talented writer then deviates from those expectations, both in mundane or in story-significant ways, because she's not a trope; she's a person, and people surprise each other in some incredible ways.

I hope Morrigan ends up in someone else's RP because she is (or, at least, can be) extremely interesting. What is she gonna do once a sweet, shy boy begins to fall in love with her? How is she going to try to keep him safe with the organization chasing her down, eventually trapping her in a corner? Does she protect him (violently, of course), or does she protect his idea of who she is, the fake, normal version of Morrigan who he adores?

I bet she wants to be alone because that sort of thing keeps happening to her, right? She always tries to fit in somewhere and someone, something, always screws it up; she's always forced to use violence to protect what she cherishes, or destroy what haunts her. What a shame that she can't control who she loves, or who loves her. Not without chasing him away.

And the worst part is, there's a time limit. So even if she did manage to make friends, a boyfriend, or even a surrogate family, ultimately it's a selfish decision she's made; because with the ticking hourglass which is her unstable genealogy, soon she'll be depriving all those people of a friend/girlfriend/sister/daughter. So does she "protect" even them from the heartbreak by keeping herself distant and aloof? Or does she make the ultimately selfish choice, and try to be their companion for the brief but beautiful time that she'd have with them?

Put her somewhere else, bro. She ain't much of a delinquent but she will be special to someone. To you and to the others who get to meet her in another RP.

10/10 would read a manga about Morrigan
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I really appreciate everyone's patience with this - I'm knocking out our game opener now, just waiting on a response from another member of the team about some plot importance - we are just about to get started!
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Zoey Boey better than the alternative

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aaaawesome
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Excellent! Let's get this show on the road!
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@Courtaud Should we move those posts to the IC and OOC tabs, respectively?
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Hello all! I've posted up our opening game post. I'd like to add these character bits to each of us so we have some dynamics in play. I'll add this to our first 0th post here in the character thread too.

Mai Li and Kevin (who Minato affectionately calls Gaijin) will be our newest members. Whereas Gaijin is familiar with Sarayashiki's gang somewhat and knows Ten Ton (they get along incredibly well) Mai Li is almost brand new, invited to the gang (against her better judgement) by Yonaka. Her motivations are up to her.

Ikue is a member of the gang, but acts as a sort of informant throughout the city. She is a former member of the Student Council from her first year, but left for personal reasons.

Yonaka and Akina have a rivalry, with Yonaka's hot blooded nature coming into conflict with Akina - they are both incredibly talented with a Kendo stick.

Ana is distrustful of Takanashi.

We are all friends, but with friendship does come interpersonal related drama, and I'm open to exploring those story threads.

Our gang itself is mostly new, small knit, but currently vying for strength against various clubs who may or may not be aligned with the villainous Student Council.
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For those who missed the OP before it got deleted:
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Are you not able to see the 0th post attached to the IC game?
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No sir

Edit: Never mind I forgot the 0th Post doesn't give you notifications or contribute to the post count. Me me big brain
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No worries, I've edited the 0th and posted in a regular post in order to get everyone else's eye on it
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@Courtaud Li'l bit of godmoding in my post; I'll remove if it's troublesome for you
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I’ll get a post up a little later
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@Zoey Boey Is Yonaka the surname and Aimi the given name?
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Zoey Boey better than the alternative

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im excited :)
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Zoey Boey better than the alternative

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@pugbutter Yes. I wasn't planning on it but she got referred too by her last name a bunch of times so I just went with it. besides I think it fits her better than Aimi.
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Yeah it's pretty important to conveying interpersonal reletionships in Japanese.

Surname = more formal
Given name = more friendly

Honorific = more formal, less affectionate
No honorific = very affectionate, all but reserved for family only

And obviously there's the minefield of knowing whether to call a gang-girl "-chan" or not, because some will be flattered but others will take it as fightin' words, like you're calling them small and frail or something 😬 lmao
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