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What’s your idea behind the half-sibling thing? Alternatively, how many bastards can one Knight sire?


I just found funny that they posses similar focus, direct combat that is, and Rowan is a full Kaides, not a bastard. As I said before I am a little lost regarding what the actual parentages and relationships are, so seeing that Ferrucio has a Kaides parent I just thought 'Well, what if they share the same parent?'
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Reposting my character here since I updated them and I don't want to edit in that post anymore (too much content makes me scroll down)



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So what I'm seeing is that both of Ophelias direct siblings effectively run away from home and leave her alone. One even after just being poisoned after she had effectively dealt with that her whole life.

~yay trauma~
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So what I'm seeing is that both of Ophelias direct siblings effectively run away from home and leave her alone. One even after just being poisoned after she had effectively dealt with that her whole life.

~yay trauma~


Ophelia's life is a perpetual chain of "well, it couldn't get any worse, right?"
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So what I'm seeing is that both of Ophelias direct siblings effectively run away from home and leave her alone. One even after just being poisoned after she had effectively dealt with that her whole life.

~yay trauma~


Yeeeah. Think it'll be a good story of sisters broken apart (two of the three who heavily contributed to that happening) who try(?) to fit back together, reconcile, make up for past mistakes and all that.
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I think im going to go for a cure, I think it'd make the most sense with her cynical and realist outward, but hopeless optimistic and do the impossible core attitude she has. Hell, maybe she doesn't get cured. I'd be fine with that, too.

I will say she has probably looked for a cure, starting with religion, failing, and then looking to magic and alchemy and maybe finding some small information there but otherwise nothing ever bore a lot of fruit.

I gotchu fam, this isn't a "I got a System" style Regression but a Quest has been created! >:)

@Remram Welcome to the madness! I believe this makes 17 now? Lawd help meh XD

@ERodeReally liking it so far! Here's what I've got for feedback:


@TeyaoLooking good, here's a few comments I had:


Also, on the subjects of half siblings and how many illegitimate kids a nobleman might have: All Players who are kids of the Patriarch would of course be half-siblings, and Kaides children being born from Austenos, Fulvya, or Deividas' unnamed adult kids, would all fall under "cousins." As for children born out of wedlock, whether due to elopement, foolish young romance, or countryside brothels---it's the medieval ages baby, ain't nobody got birth control! XD

@OwOComing together nicely! I just have a few questions mostly for clarity and further GM scheming:


So what I'm seeing is that both of Ophelias direct siblings effectively run away from home and leave her alone. One even after just being poisoned after she had effectively dealt with that her whole life.

~yay trauma~


Heroes are born from Tragic Backstories, after all!
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@SilverPaw@OwO
ok, I wanted to give ourselves a proper timeline at least so we can maybe plan things a little better. I think I got everything correct? Lemme know if not.

-Timeline of Events-
987 - Estelle is born
988 - Silvers character is born
990 - Ophelia Born
993 - Attempt on Ophelia's life
1006 - Estelle was poisoned. Ophelia is 15, Estelle is 18, Silvers character is 17.
1007 - Start of Regression. Estelle left home after finally recovering. Ophelia is 17. Estelle is 20. Silvers character is 19
1009 - Silvers character leaves home. Ophelia is 19.
1011 - Ophelia Leaves the Academy at 21
1012 - War start
1017 - Rocks fall, everyone dies, the end.

And to also maybe suggest their mom dying in battle at some point. So I can give Ophelia more trauma.

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Lookin' forward to it already fam.
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@SilverPaw@OwO
ok, I wanted to give ourselves a proper timeline at least so we can maybe plan things a little better. I think I got everything correct? Lemme know if not.

-Timeline of Events-
987 - Estelle is born
988 - Silvers character is born
990 - Ophelia Born
993 - Attempt on Ophelia's life
1005 - Estelle was poisoned here and left home after recovering. Ophelia is 15, Estelle is 18, Silvers character is 17.
1007 - Start of Regression. Ophelia is 17. Estelle is 20. Silvers character is 19
1009 - Silvers character leaves home. Ophelia is 19.
1011 - Ophelia Leaves the Academy at 21
1012 - War start
1017 - Rocks fall, everyone dies, the end.

And to also maybe suggest their mom dying in battle at some point. So I can give Ophelia more trauma.

@Zeroth
Lookin' forward to it already fam.


I think Estelle left home in 1007? While my character left in 1009.

As for the mother dying in the war, ofc we can do that >:) Wanna ramp up on the whole betrayal thing? If so, maybe something like: the mom got intel on one or both the assassination attempts on her daughters. *But* it was actually one of the unnamed traitors we still don't know about who was trying to eliminate a powerful Kaides during the war setting some things up with the demons...tho she killed her assailants, they did her in. And ofc to our characters it'd be unknown who did it atm.

Or, a simpler thing: she died facing off a horde of demons in a blaze of glory defending their home.
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I think we need a family tree kekeke.

You got a specific year for when Estelle got her ass poisoned, owo?
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I think Estelle left home in 1007? While my character left in 1009.

As for the mother dying in the war, ofc we can do that >:) Wanna ramp up on the whole betrayal thing? If so, maybe something like: the mom got intel on one or both the assassination attempts on her daughters. *But* it was actually one of the unnamed traitors we still don't know about who was trying to eliminate a powerful Kaides during the war setting some things up with the demons...tho she killed her assailants, they did her in. And ofc to our characters it'd be unknown who did it atm.

Or, a simpler thing: she died facing off a horde of demons in a blaze of glory defending their home.


Right Says she spent a year and a half basically bedridden. So if it happened when she was 18, yeah I think thats right.

Mhm, I was thinking mom died protecting Ophelia, as she likely went to war too. We can, perhaps, do both.

Ambushed by 'demons'/unnamed traitors during the campaign. Mom killed 'em all, but would basically die in Ophelia's arms or consequently find her body later with others after going for reinforcements.
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For the eyeball, it was damaged beyond fixing and likely had to be removed. I basically have no plan for her to have her eye fixed and to be a long range archer again (outside of cute scenes where her siblings call out her shots).

The assassin probably had the means with a fantasy poison. She made a lot of enemies of rich kids (or was just targeted from overall schemes against the family--she didn't know).

As for the old man, his prime would have been crazy. As an old man, still strong but nowhere near who he was. He would probably have aura, considering how he basically bought enough time for a village to escape before dying. The plan is to get him and the orphans as NPCs.

As for the orphans, she would know the events, but they would have happened before the point they revert. No saving their parents, but perhaps saving their future so they wouldn't become drafted fodder.
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The backstory is still being written, and I would like some suggestions, but I mainly want to know if I did the abilities correctly.

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@ZerothI was originally thinking that it’d be the father who was a Kaides, but I think it’d be spicier if it was the mother who was the Kaides instead. Something something, popped outta the womb and looked nothing like (read: cuter than) the husband ever could. Probably still will have a similar kinda setup though, where a knight of House Kaides spends a celebratory last night of a long deployment at a brothel before returning home to their family and spouse. Nine months later and oops, that’s not your kid!

Probably wouldn’t be a ‘son’ of the Patriarch in that case; more associated with one of the adult kids.

I’ll leave you to flesh out ze Young Master if you want, but they’d be associated with the Kaides. I had approached it as the angle that Ferrucio himself was allowed to stay in the House basically to serve as a second set of hands for the proper heir; in that case, the Young Master would be his older sibing/cousin/etc. I was generally thinking that they’d be the ignoble sort who was the one that put out the hit on Estelle, for two tigers cannot roam the same mountain, but that’ll be kinda up to OwO.

The Swiftblades could be a non-elite unit of House Kaides yeah. I was thinking they’d be a frontier force that basically deals with all the monsters plaguing the borders of the kingdom. A protector of the commonfolk, who ride on swift steeds and cleave through calamities with blessed steel, answering the demon armies that are too much for ragtag adventurers and too small to mobilize the army.

Think it’d be part BEEG PR for Kaides and part “this is where idealistic knights go to chase their dreams”.
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I’ll get a WIP up this weekend. My supervisor quit this week so I inherited all of his work until management finds a replacement.
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@Atlas946I like the idea that one of his main "do better this time" reasons is, plain and simple, that he recognizes he COULD have done better and didn't. However, I do think some parts need some work:
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@Silver CarrotLooks like everything's off to a good start! Did you want to create any NPCs from her backstory, like the Duke or her Fiance? And what would you say her goal will be in the second life? And is the "maybe she was responsible for the poison" stuff off the table at this point or are y'all still working that out?

As far as her "natural talent" goes, would you say she was like a legit anime-style "genius?" Or is it more that she might have been "gifted" at a young age, but without development was only "average" as she grew up? Like a kid who can do the times tables easily in elementary school because they're good at rote memorization, but struggles when they hit algebra because they never learned to actually understand the numbers and processes they were seeing?
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@Zeroth

I might still go for her having ordered the assassination. Still thinking about it.

And I want it an extreme example of 'wasted potential' when it comes to her sworsdmanship

Less 'Fantastic at elementary math in elementary but struggled with algebra in high school'

More 'She was doing algebra flawlessly in elementary but stuggled with *second year* algebra in third year of high school because she never studied'
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@Zeroth, I fixed the spells and wrote a backstory that I think works. As for NPCs, the only one I can think of would be the last person he saves. I don't really have a story for them though. Other then that, I'm still open to more suggestions!

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I might still go for her having ordered the assassination. Still thinking about it.


If the villainess was involved in Estelle's poisoning, she will be put into a freakazoid bear hug and told she is forgiven.
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