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Sorry for the silence. Been busy with life and working on my post, decided to rewrite part of it. Not sure if I should do one entire intro post or split it into two parts.


Splitting in half makes the work load easier, and then you can post if you feel like the second half is gonna take longer.
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Going to attempt a weekly posting schedule to a) pace myself and b) keeps me engaged with story and allows me to pick away at posts as time allows.
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@Sep, great first post! Obviously, we've since talked behind the scenes, and I'm excited about how our plots have woven together. Rhodey thus far offers a different perspective from most of the others in the RP, being an active government agent. So I'm excited to see the moral struggles that brings and where things go with Stark ending the Patriot project.

@Half Pint, I am loving the characterization of Reed and his wandering thoughts while simultaneously enjoying how Sue keeps him rooted and present. You're writing the pair in such a way that you can see they have a lot of history, and there's a good amount of tenderness in the way they interact with one another while still pushing a compelling narrative.

@webboysurf, I've always been a fan of your characters and the dynamic between the Outlaws is no exception. In particular, the way Roy and Bucky operate with each other and their (oft one-sided) banter is very enjoyable to read. I am looking forward to seeing the greater plot come together and where you take these characters.
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Awh shucks.

Thanks boo.
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Post up.

To keep all our stories straight. I mentioned Mayor Oswald so he is the current mayor of New York City. We also now have the debut of Adrian Toomes or the Vulture!

Sorry I am a little slow, but I am happy to get the post done!
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I was thinking of Osborn. The reason being that he seems like he’d play politician better in the current political climate. Then in the background, he is slipping his corporation stuff from the US government to enrich himself a little that he’d get because he is the mayor. Tech the metahuman control agency is using, and maybe a super human serum is somehow involved. Whether it be from his company that he’d posture to sell to the agency or something the agency has been working on.

Fisk, I had thought of him buying up small but brilliant tech companies namely to put the scientists to work on arms manufacturing. It is how Silk’s first villain in the IC, The Vulture, will appear. Bought out by Fisk and given a bit of Reach tech to make his invention of a flying suit finally possible but now he is in debt to Fisk.

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Post up.

To keep all our stories straight. I mentioned Mayor Oswald so he is the current mayor of New York City. We also now have the debut of Adrian Toomes or the Vulture!

Sorry I am a little slow, but I am happy to get the post done!


Did you mean for the Mayor to be Osborn per your previous post quoted above? Or did you change your mind to Oswald?

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@Half Pint, I am loving the characterization of Reed and his wandering thoughts while simultaneously enjoying how Sue keeps him rooted and present. You're writing the pair in such a way that you can see they have a lot of history, and there's a good amount of tenderness in the way they interact with one another while still pushing a compelling narrative.


Thank you so much! I also am loving the Exiles, I read your last post earlier today and really liked how you worked @Sep's post into the whole thing. I can see a lot of the seeds you're sewing with Trask, Stryker, Mystique, etc and I'm excited to see what's going to happen with them!

I've been really enjoying reading everyone's posts as well, I'm looking forward to getting to collab with everyone at some point! It'll be interesting to see how our stories can all interconnect and how our versions of these characters will interact.

Going to attempt a weekly posting schedule to a) pace myself and b) keeps me engaged with story and allows me to pick away at posts as time allows.


I am also going to try and stick to a similar schedule. I work from home most days, but ironically I get most of my work done when im in the office and skiving on a Tuesday so I expect my posts will normally go up on a Tuesday or Wednesday. Currently I'm a post ahead as I'd begun writing my first one before the IC went up so I've got a bit of a head start!
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Did you mean for the Mayor to Osborn per your previous post quoted above? Or did you change your mind to Oswald?


Aaahh! You’re right! Norman Osborn is the mayor! I got the wrong Os- last name
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Thank you so much! I also am loving the Exiles, I read your last post earlier today and really liked how you worked @Sep's post into the whole thing. I can see a lot of the seeds you're sewing with Trask, Stryker, Mystique, etc and I'm excited to see what's going to happen with them!

I've been really enjoying reading everyone's posts as well, I'm looking forward to getting to collab with everyone at some point! It'll be interesting to see how our stories can all interconnect and how our versions of these characters will interact.


Thank you, I really struggled with this latest post because I was putting a lot of pressure on myself to get Nightcrawler right, he's the one I simultaneously was looking most forward to writing but also dreading haha. Still trying to get my character voices 100% where I want them while also keeping a cohesive plot.
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@Half Pint I meant to thank and by the time I noticed my fat fingers mistake it wouldn't let me take it back. Soz.
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So I got stuff planned and got ahead of myself.

Does anyone have intentions on Kingpin playing a part in your character’s story? I mean he will be doing normal gang stuff but she’s definitely working on a grand scheme with sourcing Reach tech and scientists and engineers to work that tech into usable equipment. Usually those that are desperate from circumstances but any comic book villain that makes their own gadgets and stuff can fall in that category.

Vulture is one for example.

Could be a way to cross and collab eventually leading to Kingpin plot stuff.

If that has any takers let me know!
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So I got stuff planned and got ahead of myself.

Does anyone have intentions on Kingpin playing a part in your character’s story? I mean he will be doing normal gang stuff but she’s definitely working on a grand scheme with sourcing Reach tech and scientists and engineers to work that tech into usable equipment. Usually those that are desperate from circumstances but any comic book villain that makes their own gadgets and stuff can fall in that category.

Vulture is one for example.

Could be a way to cross and collab eventually leading to Kingpin plot stuff.

If that has any takers let me know!


Stark Tech is going to be a big thing for Rhodey going forward so can work in stuff if you wish on that angle.
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Stark Tech is going to be a big thing for Rhodey going forward so can work in stuff if you wish on that angle.


Would criminals stealing from Stark Tech draw Rhodey’s attention?
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@Half Pint I meant to thank and by the time I noticed my fat fingers mistake it wouldn't let me take it back. Soz.


Haha no worries! I thought it was in reply to me skiving off work to write my posts anyway!

So I got stuff planned and got ahead of myself.

Does anyone have intentions on Kingpin playing a part in your character’s story? I mean he will be doing normal gang stuff but she’s definitely working on a grand scheme with sourcing Reach tech and scientists and engineers to work that tech into usable equipment. Usually those that are desperate from circumstances but any comic book villain that makes their own gadgets and stuff can fall in that category.

Vulture is one for example.

Could be a way to cross and collab eventually leading to Kingpin plot stuff.

If that has any takers let me know!


I've no intentions of using Kingpin, but I'm going for a similar thing with the FF in terms of experimenting and researching Reach tech! I'd love to collab at some point being that they're both in NYC!
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Would criminals stealing from Stark Tech draw Rhodey’s attention?


I don't want to reveal too much I think only one... Maybe two people know where I'm going with what I'm doing but short answer is yes.

@Half Pint I'm guessing we don't need to go into much detail about Reed and Stark knowing eachother, or the fact that he has definitely hit on Sue
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Haha no worries! I thought it was in reply to me skiving off work to write my posts anyway!

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I've no intentions of using Kingpin, but I'm going for a similar thing with the FF in terms of experimenting and researching Reach tech! I'd love to collab at some point being that they're both in NYC!


Hmm… okay I have an idea for a little bit later. Vulture is developing and using Reach tech and is flying around NYC so I’m sure he makes the papers. Whether FF pursue a single mention lead like that or not, I leave up to you. But I am thinking Cindy seeks out the FF, depending on how reasonable it is she’d know of the FF and their interest in Reach tech, to help give her a lead she is looking for.

Also could be a fun intern opportunity for Cindy! Some mentoring to building her own tech.

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I don't want to reveal too much I think only one... Maybe two people know where I'm going with what I'm doing but short answer is yes.

@Half Pint I'm guessing we don't need to go into much detail about Reed and Stark knowing eachother, or the fact that he has definitely hit on Sue


Then Cindy will probably have a hard drive with (your) Stark’s name on it soon.
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Totally missed that this had an ooc and I posted after the link in the int thread oops.
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Damn, The new york peeps are cooking hard.

Also I think its a missed opportunity not to make JJ Jameson the mayor of NYC. Too many web-heads crawling around, his disdain alone could fuel the entire city lmao
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Going to attempt a weekly posting schedule to a) pace myself and b) keeps me engaged with story and allows me to pick away at posts as time allows.


Trying to follow the same method this time around myself. Got a good formula going for the posts that break it down into chunks I can write on the go and reformat later.
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