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MALFUNCTION – The Superpower RP Where Everything Sucks

What the hell is this?

Welcome to a world where having the genetic mutation equivalent of "superpowers" really, really sucks.

The basic premise is simple: a world united under a single government, where super-powers come with devastating consequences, and where supers (dubbed “Genetic Malfunctions”) are feared for their terrifying abilities. Malfunctions are rooted out during their late teen years, through a test administered every year by their local district to all students between the ages of 15 to 20: the time period over which powers begin to manifest.

Testing positive marks you out as a non-human and a Genetic Malfunction. It means there are now two options for you. If your ability is too powerful, then you are put to death immediately. If not, then you’ll shipped off to one of 150 different Training and Education Facilities across the globe: the concentration camps of the twenty-first century. There, you are trained to use your abilities in order to uphold societal order at all costs.

But even the powers themselves aren’t all sunshine and daisies -- this is the real world, after all, and dangerous mutations mean dangerous consequences. Throwing a super-strength punch means breaking every bone in your arm. Excessive use of telekinesis can cause serious brain damage.

Malfunction takes place in this world. Specifically, it takes place in one of these Training and Education Facilities: TEF-149.

The Rules:

1. No "adult themed" content in the RP -- fade to black or take it to the PM.

2. The GM's word is law. Yeah, all three of us.

3. No god-modding/auto-hitting.

4. Remember that there are real consequences in this setting! If you're going to spit on a guard's uniform, expect to be punished if not hung.

5. Keep IC drama separate from the OOC

6. Act realistic -- don't suddenly barge into conversations where you have nothing to do.

7. READ THE GODDAMN LORE. The essentials, and preferably the supplements too.

LORE ESSENTIALS

Reading the lore essentials is the most important thing that you can do before starting your CS!! We're looking for characters seem to "fit into" the crapsack world of Malfunction, so make sure you know what's going on! And, of course, if you have any questions... please feel free to ask a GM (preferably all the GMs) via a PM.

We're friendly people, and we don't bite~!! Well... Zoldyck only bites sometimes.






SUPPLEMENTARY MATERIALS

We'd prefer it if you at least read the world-building sections of this! But, of course, this is supplementary material. Read this when you're trying to get a better sense of the Malfunction World.








Character Creation

Please read the lore BEFORE you make a character! And if your desired power isn't listed here yet, don't worry -- maybe you're just more creative than us! Go ahead and check with us, and we'll tell you whether you can use it or not.

Submit character sheets through a PM to all three GMs -- that's me, @Ogobrogo, and @Zoldyck!



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Hey, I was loosely following this interest check and it seemed interesting. Are you still accepting character applications? S'cool if you're not, of course, it seemed like there was quite a buzz in that thread. My idea was for a character who had the power to 'turn off' friction from her body, but who could barely control it and was, as such, a walking disaster area cannon-balling into things all the time.
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Hey, I was loosely following this interest check and it seemed interesting. Are you still accepting character applications? S'cool if you're not, of course, it seemed like there was quite a buzz in that thread. My idea was for a character who had the power to 'turn off' friction from her body, but who could barely control it and was, as such, a walking disaster area cannon-balling into things all the time.


We definitely still are, we actually just got the OOC up, like... four seconds ago, so no one except the GMs have started on applications yet.

Your power sounds, quite frankly, like it's exactly what we're looking for. Go ahead and start a CS~!!! We'd love to have you!!

And remember to read the lore first~!!!
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I guess it begins. May work on an app on the morrow maybe.
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I should have my app done some time tomorrow night.
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So, from what I can gather from the OP and the two character sheets, TEF-149 is pretty much just like any other school in a superhuman academy RP, only with bomb collars instead of detentions?
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So, from what I can gather from the OP and the two character sheets, TEF-149 is pretty much just like any other school in a superhuman academy RP, only with bomb collars instead of detentions?


Well... sort of. TEF-149 is a basically an indoctrination center for Malfunctions -- they don't leave until they're completely brainwashed, and they're being trained to be "Guardians of Order": in other words, military weapons. And yes, the bomb collars!!

Think, maybe... a concentration camp for supers~~??
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Well... sort of. TEF-149 is a basically an indoctrination center for Malfunctions -- they don't leave until they're completely brainwashed, and they're being trained to be "Guardians of Order": in other words, military weapons. And yes, the bomb collars!!

Think, maybe... a concentration camp for supers~~??

Okay, I see. But what about Xinyi Li? How come she gets tea?? Huh???

As long as my character gets daily chocolate fondants, it's all good.
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Okay, I see. But what about Xinyi Li? How come she gets tea?? Huh???

As long as my character gets daily chocolate fondants, it's all good.


There's still food in the cafeteria~~! They get fed slop and canned food. Tea's cheap! But don't worry, it's shitty tea!!

I look forward to seeing your character application :D
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Colour me excited and making a sheet, if just to annoy @Zoldyck.
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Colour me excited and making a sheet, if just to annoy @Zoldyck.


Great, we're excited to see what you show us!! :D
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Ayy
Thanks for posting, Bunbro!

If anybody is grumpy over the delay, blame me. My quick, five minute nap kind of turned into like, a ten hour+ sleep marathon. I wanna say that I feel bad, but honestly, I'm refreshed as fuck. SO COME AT ME!!
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Goddamn timezones. I'm gonna have to sit my ass down and read through this all, and I've only just woken up~.
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-retconned-
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I'll finish my sheets soon. I want to post them all at once.
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I'll finish my sheets soon. I want to post them all at once.


pls no

i cant read so many

spare me
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shit

ya'll changed the sheet format, and now I have to convert
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My HTML isn't working somebody end my life lmao

-awaits character approval-
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@AdobeFlash: I can help you with your HTML problems! All you have to do is pick a color, eg. green, and then substitute that into your HTML everywhere it says "color". Add a link to your character image in between the two [img] markings! Also, take out the asterisk before each "hr" to make a line! Like so:


WIP, I'm on mobile so it's sorta garbage. Tell me what you think


For additional feedback, give me half an hour to take a shower, and then I'll send you a PM with more comments!!

One thing that I can tell you right off the bat, however, is that it's a little short for an Advanced RP character sheet. Usually, we'd prefer a little more depth in the sheet. Why don't you check out my glorious friend Ogobrogo's CS in the character tab (it's the last one posted, so scroll down) for an example? I think that that might help a lot.

However, it's really very clear that you read through the lore, so thank you very much for that! I think that Adam has a lot of potential, so go ahead and edit it up a bit, and send it back to us!

shit

ya'll changed the sheet format, and now I have to convert


Sorry, Allen!!! But this new version does look nicer now, huh? Ogo made it, and it's so pretty~~~ <3
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<Snipped quote by Mr Allen J>

Sorry, Allen!!! But this new version does look nicer now, huh? Ogo made it, and it's so pretty~~~ <3


It does look very pretty, but am I allowed to shape it to my will, whilst still retaining all the categories and such? :3
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