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@Majoras End

Really messed up city but I mean not bad at all.

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@Akayaofthemoon

What can I say? The city was an easy target for crime. :T
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@Majoras End

If you say so.... xD
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@Akayaofthemoon@Majoras End

Can I play devils advocate here?
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@AngelofOctober

You may speak your concerns and suggestions, besides, it was only an idea. Might not keep that backstory.
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Go for it!
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@Akayaofthemoon@Majoras End

The Purge movies are already hard to stomach because they require you to suspend your suspension of disbelief in a way that isn't even accurate to do so.

I'll be frank and say there is a number of psychological articles and a bunch of articles, with the right research, that already deconstructs the Purge as a rather unrealistic situation. I would not be able to suspend my disbelief with a Purge like incident in someone's history. It comes off a bit campy.

How about drawing parallels from our real world? Change her name. Start doing research about the Middle East. That be an interesting thing. Or the regime of North Korea.

There are more real world incidents you could draw from, but instead of developing the history from a fictitious source that is unbelievable, to a realistic source written from a fictitious point of view.

I hope that makes sense.
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If you want a dramatic experience without the whole killing city of doom thing. There is always serial killer thing. She was told to hide but saw it all happen. Cops find her later and everything crumbles into chaos from there
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@Majoras End what time period are you intending this Alice be from? Only for the simple fact that I feel like a purge is slightly unrealistic. If you're wanting to go along the lines of her having a mental break from her family being murdered you could actually just have a person break into her home and have murdered her family. Her having seen it would cause a break resulting in her attacking said person.

If you wanted her to have a feeling of guilt maybe it could be a person who have been stalking her. It wouldn't be something that was her fault but as a result of her family dying she would blame herself. Once again this is just an idea.
Other ideas could include terrorist attacks. Or war I suppose.

That being said I don't understand if you are thinking Purge like the movie, or just a civil war one side purges the other kind of thing.
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Thanks for the suggestions you three! Ill be simplifying Morgan's history to being a wittness to her familly being killed.
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I also didn't realize everyone and their mother replied to you when I typed mine 😅
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My mother has neglect and abandonment abuse covered she's not coming over to critique no one's history idea
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My mother has neglect and abandonment abuse covered she's not coming over to critique no one's history idea


You too?!?! 😂
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We just have four people left that need to make characters, right?
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@Akayaofthemoon yep. Leaves (though he is close to done. Just has history) Majora, Mist, and Echo. Salunes has been approved just minor editing issues.
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Awesome! So excited to see them all ^_^
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Sorry! The coding was wonky, so I'mma fix that real quick before re-putting in my characters, haha.

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Just finished up my kiddos right now, haha. Tell me if you'd like for me to edit or add anything in. :)
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@EchoicChamber You accidentally put she's instead of he's :P Fix that and you can move it over
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@Midnight Howl Whooops. Sorry, lemme fix that real quick.
I mean uh
I have no clue what you're talking about hahahaha
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