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@canaryrose
Thank you, I truly appreciate it! :)
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I fixed my application. :)
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The fixed version looks great!

Goddamn I'm tired. I'll look for a header tomorrow. Haven't done much editing of any kind because it's way too goddamn late to do that kinda stuff right now.



looks good, welcome aboard :)



First, welcome back to group RPing! A couple of points:
  • Not related to your CS, but I would love it if you could join our Discord! It would make communication and all that a lot easier if you could join.
  • I really love the character and I think she'll fit in really nicely! I think I just want to see a little more elaboration in some of the points.
  • Your personality could use a little more elaboration. It's a bit short as of right now. Especially with the part about being "ditzy" and stuff. I would love to just see a little bit more about how Fia is.
  • Backstory could also use a little more. I think the backstory is very important and I'd like to see some more information about her life, especially about the entire Communicator situation, which isn't really touched upon.
  • Powers also could use some more specification, especially the part about controlling plants and water and stuff. That needs to have some bounds as to how her abilities work.
  • Lastly, there are some coding issues that could be fixed, if you could just read through and make those changes that would be great.

I love her and I can't wait to see your changes :)

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@Angel of Red Sorry for the snafu! Your critiques should be directed at the right person now :)
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@Angel of RedHi Angel, you should join the Discord channel when you have a moment. There's a lot that we discuss for the RP outside of the forum.
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@tokkiya Yes, thank you, I just did. :)
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I might finally have some free time this week. Is everyone still in a cave/ on the mountain or have we moved on from that?
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I might finally have some free time this week. Is everyone still in a cave/ on the mountain or have we moved on from that?


Everyone but RainforestGiant's character, Nathan, is still in a cave/on the mountain. Well, Nathan is on the mountain too, but he's at the barrier outside the palace.
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@Kumbaris I saw your note in the IC. You should join the Discord and discuss these things. I don't know how long your note has been there. Also, I'm waiting for Hitman to reply since it would be their turn.
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I have my post all written down but I am currently in class. I should have a post by this evening.

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EDIT: WHere are you all getting the fancy text for your names?
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*dabs*
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I'll be on vacation starting tomorrow through the 24th or 25th. You guys can just pretend that Tor is passed out drunk or something Β―\_(ツ)_/Β―
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