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Maybe. But it's done poorly.


Hmm... how so, if I may ask?
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Hmm... how so, if I may ask?


It's all just far too obvious and has no amount of subtlety. Why even have a love interest if he exists to do nothing but prop up the main character?
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Multiple seven and twelve. Quickly.


Uh... eighty four?
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Uh... eighty four?


You have two lightbulbs with exposed wiring that are blinding when you turn them on. You have the light switch nearby too, a fishing pole, and a knife. There's a small tank of fish and you want to kill them all as fast as you can. How do you do it with only the resources available to you? You can't use anything I didn't list and you don't have to use everything.
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You good?


*turns my head*
I’m nervous and anxious.
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*turns my head*
I’m nervous and anxious.


About our meeting? Why?
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You have two lightbulbs with exposed wiring that are blinding when you turn them on. You have the light switch nearby too, a fishing pole, and a knife. There's a small tank of fish and you want to kill them all as fast as you can. How do you do it with only the resources available to you? You can't use anything I didn't list and you don't have to use everything.


... What?
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... What?


Just answer the question, I'm checking something.
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Just answer the question, I'm checking something.


I break the tank with the knife?
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I break the tank with the knife?


It's made of steel.
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It's all just far too obvious and has no amount of subtlety. Why even have a love interest if he exists to do nothing but prop up the main character?


Hmm.. well, for one, it depends. Maybe that situation doesnt work for you, but how does the main character feel about it?
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It's made of steel.


I break it with the knife.
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I break it with the knife.


You can't break the container.
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You can't break the container.


You're moving the goalpost.
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Hmm.. well, for one, it depends. Maybe that situation doesnt work for you, but how does the main character feel about it?


She was written to like it. But that's just bad writing.
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You're moving the goalpost.


*Rolls my eyes*
Okay, fine, new scenario. Everything is the same except you can't break the container.
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*Rolls my eyes*
Okay, fine, new scenario. Everything is the same except you can't break the container.


I pick up the container and hold it to the wires and turn the switch.
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I pick up the container and hold it to the wires and turn the switch.


And that works why?
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She was written to like it. But that's just bad writing.


What makes you think that she was written to like it? Were there any indicators?
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And that works why?


Because the light overloads the fish's brains. You said they're blinding, so they're strong enough to give the fish seizures.
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