@AdamantiumWolf That's pretty much perfect so would she abandoning her post to fully join rebellion now? Also just one quick fix under age you put her gender.
"To all soldiers, pilots, and members of the Rebel Alliance. The Emperor is slain, the Death Star in ruins. Now we must fight! We must work together, take back our home's and free our people from the grasp of the Empire. This war is far from over, but now comes the true war to rebuild the Republic and give us all the power to choose our future!" The message came in across the Holonet, through Imperial channels. From Mon Mothma herself, the mother and leader of the Rebel Alliance. Every PA system or public terminal heard the message, they finally had hope. People from Dantooine to Coruscant heard the new's some reacted with fear while other's broke out into open rebellion.
Yet in the Corellian sector a second message went out to smuggler's, turncoats, and other's who bore grudges with the Empire. People who had reason's to fight the Empire and to work with the rebel's. It was a message meant for those who would fight, who strike back at the ruler of Corellian sector. The voice was masked, the signal heavily encoded. "You have been chosen, to join the Rebel Alliance's 7th battle line. We have ship's, crew's but we need the best star fighter pilot's out their. You have been called to serve, to destroy this Empire and restore a fair and equal Republic. Come to Saccoria's capital, then book a shuttle to Corellia and ask them to wave the fee." With that the signal faded ending and cut off completely.
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Naomi Dargon, the Grand Moff and ruler of the Corellian sector ground her teeth. Her fleet's had cleared to rebel strike group's yet now they all knew the truth. Riots had broken out, but ordered would be restored soon, she had notified her pilot's and ships in orbit to destroy all ship's leaving without clearance. Storm troopers were busting down door's and executing rebel's where ever they could be found. She would not loose what she had worked so hard to hold on to, she would control this sector or see it burned to the ground before she handed it over to the rebel's.
Now however was her time, with her power and the fall of the Emperor she needed to take charge. Choose carefully, her next move's could help her secure a high position in the Empire. She was still young and ambitious, she would find her winning horse and back them with her power's. Then she could work her way up to sit at the Emperor's side, command fleet's and the respect of all her peer's. Return to Coruscant and leave this sector of scum and back water drunkard's.
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I am focusing this on the idea of rebel's who are in a bad way trying to drive out Imperial force's. I am also willing to expand the idea to include Imperial pilot's or Admiral's attempting to maintain order. At the same time I want it show how the rebel's are winning heart's and mind's especially here in home of smuggler's and thieves, Corellia. As their main fleet is going to be busy striking supply lines and gathering intel the pilot's for this team are going to attempting high risk missions. Specifically targeting thing's to make the Empire either pack up or move more ship's in depleting force's elsewhere.
Name: Appearance: Race: Age: Skills: (Beside's as a pilot like marksman, spy, technician.) Bio: (A history of what brought to fight for this cause.) Gear: (Kind of things you would take with you for missions.) Ship: (What kind of ship you fly, stick to starfighter's for now.) Droid: (Behind every great pilot is a great R-unit Astromech droid, any unit from the R2-R6 series is fine. They can be modified unit's made to look more like the successful R2 line.) Other: (Other thing's you'd like to throw in about your character.)
Swifty nodded and turned around walking backwards he looked over all the other. Then he spoke up next. "Call me Swifty, it's not my name but its what I go by." The blonde Hylian smiled looking over the others. They were from all corners of the world it seemed. Pretty irregular bunch of people, still they at least seemed respectable, he wondered if any of them new anything about his power. He looked towards Kira next stepping over to the as she had heard her answer the of the other girl near before.
He pulled back the bow and let the arrow appear, before asking her the question he had. "Excuse me but do you know anything about this power? It's just that I was orphaned pretty young and I'm wondering if this might link me to my family, if don't know anything it's fine." The young boy asked hoping she would have some answer's for him on the nature of his abilities and as to why he might be related to Hero or even what hero he was related to. "I just don't see anyone else here with a power like mine so I was curious that's all." He said making the arrow vanish letting the tension go on his bow.
"Diamond city is that way." Answered the Colonel pausing at the strange new girl who had arrived. "You a slaver?" He asked looking to the girl that was traveling with her carefully. "Because the city doesn't allow slaver's or those who keep slaves." He said from inside the power armor. "Were just heading out, got an Enclave problem up by Salem. Though I'd recommend you'd lose the slave, the Minutemen and Brotherhood are the law up here. I'm supposed to shoot anyone taking slaves or keeping them." He finished looking at the girl.
Looking back at the others behind he rolled his eyes. "Come on then lets get going. I don't want those caps I paid you all going to waste." He said as the started to walk along again, hoping they could reach the campsite by nightfall or at least somewhere they could sleep in proper beds rather than ratty mattresses on the ground or worse the ground itself. He wished they had picked up some more merc's but what they had would have to due, at least they all seemed competent.
@Kieran You don't need much honestly, Corellian sector is basically just a big trade route and the capital planet Corellia has large shipyards and access to trade routes that keep the Empire together. You'd just need to figure out your character. The wiki would be useful if you want to play a race that's not human, with plenty of near human one's or more out their races.
For ship's the Y-wing and X-wing are pretty common and were seen in the movies you could dig into it more if you wanted a obscure ship. Like the Naboo fighter or B-wing, it's after episode six so you would probably be able to use Imperial ship's if you wanted, through fixing them would be tough.
You can also message me with idea for what you want I'd help you out if you like!
@jordy0403 V-wing doesn't have a hyperdrive so maybe lose the droid to install one or move up to an A-wing. Clone war's Era ship's will be easier to fix due to older parts but they will be outperformed by more modern vessels.