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3 mos ago
Everybody wants that fire IC but nobody wants to GM it.
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11 mos ago
If you're roleplaying with your only friends, you're roleplaying with your best friends.
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2 yrs ago
I think to sell someone on an interest check, it's really important to seem enthusiastic about your own idea. That means writing more than a single sentence to attract potential players.
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3 yrs ago
The virgin "My post was so bad it killed the RP!" VS the chad "My post was so good it concluded the RP."
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Bio


W I T H R I G H T E O U S H A N D S





Did you know that Dante's inferno is called a divine comedy because things work out for the protagonist? Back in the day, the only two genres were comedy and drama. The only difference was that in a comedy, the protagonist is better off at the end, and a drama is the opposite. So that's why a story about going through hell can still be considered a comedy, even if it's not funny.

Name:
Broken Promise, BP, Boss

Age:
Old enough to know better, too young to care. (that is to say 30's)

Preferred RPs:
I Prefer to make my own, but will occasionally join something if it looks interesting. I'll join just about anything so long as it isn’t overly edgy/sweet, though it's rare for me to do. I don't do 1x1s too often either.

Preferred Roles:
I tend to play adorable characters everyone wants to befriend or proper assholes everyone wants to stay away from. I try not to play moral paragons or prime evils.

RP Conquests:
I've completed quite a few RP's off site, but most of them are on private forums or have simply been lost to the ravages of server crashes. As for stuff here, I'm sure everyone who sees me post in the off topic sections has seen me find an excuse to talk about Danganronpa: Tower of Carnage. It's a project that took over 4 years to complete and I feel pride not only for myself but all the wonderful people who helped make it enjoyable during its run. Re: Zero: The High Council Is technically my first, but it was just something I kind of took over and ended up ending the story after just six months. It finished, but eh...

Last RP I finished was Symphony of Espers which turned out pretty good.

RP's in progress:
For some reason I can't seem to stay away from Ari's magical girl RP, even if I'm not sure why I'm still in it.

As for my own projects, I'm doing Symphony on High to continue the gigachad adventures of the espers in Pax Septimus.

RP Graveyard:
I've been pretty fortunate on this forum. I think I joined one when I first came on the site that didn't really do anything, and there are a few 1x1 things that didn't go anywhere. It's disappointing when an RP ends before it can be finished, but I've come to look at them as learning experiences.

And then there's that london magical girl RP, and that dark magical girl RP. I think I'm done joining magical girl RPs for a while.

Other interests:
Videos
I watch a lot of educational videos on youtube. Usually as research for something I’m writing or purely because a topic interests me. I like channels like Tier Zoo and Daryl Talks Games, and I’ll also watch things like Critical Drinker or Literature Devil to deepen my understanding of story telling. Though I also like memes and jokes, to which I’ll find myself watching stuff like Sseth, but usually find myself surfing through meme videos. I gotta work on that.

Games
I have a rather long history of playing virtually every platformer to come into existence during the indie boom, as well as quite a few other indie games. I’ve played Meatboy, Binding of Issac, Gunvolt, Cuphead, Princess Remedy in a World of Hurt, Classic Metroid, Warcraft 3, Final Fantasy 7,8, and 14, Left 4 Dead, Shantae, Celeste, Danganronpa, God Eater, the list goes on. What I’ve played is kind of all over the place. I don’t play many games these days, I tend to pick things that look interesting and go on a decent steam sale.

Painting Minis
I do this in moderation. Otherwise, it's a pretty expensive hobby to start...

Music
I listen to everything, save most country/rap songs. I have too many favorites to name.

Personality:
Not one to take life or the internet too seriously. Is only serious about writing well and having a good time.

People to Insult:
Dalton is a Dingus.

Most Recent Posts

@Emeth

Oof.



I'm looking back over the DoCS, and it seems something very important from V1 wasn't put in V2. While you're glamors are technically legal, the way it's supposed to work is every glamor needs to be one grade above/below another glamor if it isn't already the average. In other words, if you have a silver and platinum glamor, one of your glamors needs to be gold.

Please drop the grade of one of your platinum glamors down to gold, then you can increase bronze to silver or a platinum to emerald.

I actually told someone about this recently, but it happened in a private chat.
@Chevaleresse Mysterious parents background!

I'd like to know how Rika came across her grimoire. Additionally, her "Self Defense Weapon" needs to be identified. Is it a billy club? Rubber hammer? Rubber chicken? Just indicate what it is.

Otherwise, accepted! Shoukou can fly her way to the character tab. It'll be fun to see her interaction with Boteg the golden dragon.

The silverback was a durable fellow. While he was ultimately able to do nothing about Tsubomi’s desperate gambit, he wasn’t out of the fight yet. After the ape was kicked aside, he growled and spun around to face his attacker. The shower of lasers from Hizuki were a distraction, but not one the ape was going to get fooled by. He lifted his arm in front of his face and charged. His movements were clumsy due to the blood, but still looked strong.

"Oy!" Morganite intercepted the ape and shoved them back with her shield. "Ah got no idea wot er doin’ gurl, but ah don’t like it!" The pinkette didn’t take her eye off the ape. "But if Hizuki needs ya, you should get outa here!" The other girl shambled to her feet and looked around. She seemed torn, possibly between the natures she had been filled with. She adjusted her hat and turned around, only for another ape to jump at her. That ape was quickly intercepted by Morganite’s other shield. "Get da studs outa here!" Morganite pulled out a phone and held it up to the side of her head. Apparently it had been vibrating. "What are ya callin’ me for? Ah just woke up!" While Morganite protected everyone, the other girl got to work moving the students. She was picking them up one at a time and walking them over to a window, at which point she rolled them outside.

It looked like things were being handled, if only momentarily.
I've been getting some questions asked through PMs and DMs, so I'll put some of them here.

Q: Can we play as the Inquisition?

A: Yes. They were introduced in SoH when Raphael the Righteous Hearted came to Pax Septimus after hearing about what happened to an old friend of his. Raphael has since left Pax, if only momentarily, but other espers from the Holy See have remained.


Q: Does our faction grade always start at F?

A: For many new players/characters it will. Most returning characters will get an E or D to represent their faction's appreciation of their past achievements. Unless it's Himiko, she's going to be G or H if we see her again.


Q: Since this is a short RP, would it be better to make a one off character or one that could last into the next RP?

A: Older characters will always have an advantage, so I would recommend making a character you can enjoy playing for a while. New and old characters stand on equal footing in terms of how strong they are as espers, but older characters will always have more connections and opportunities due to being in the world longer.
@Half Pint Its a beastie boy from the hit American hip hop group!

You don't have any of the glamor grades labeled, and you're still missing genre, so I'm not going to look at the stat blocks too closely. Looks alright from a glance. Only real thing that needs to be addressed is the backstory. It's great, but while it's safe to say the US military has a reason to show up anywhere (as well as GEMINI) Maverick doesn't really have a global presence. It's possible Artie was detained and taken back to America, which is where he was intercepted. It would also explain his presence in Pax Septimus. We can nail down specifics in RP if you'd like, it's just a very weird time because GEMINI and Maverick Alternative had a joint operation at the end of the last RP, and I don't see them trying to style on each other so soon after that. But if we pretend that happened in the past, then that's doable. So I guess there's not really anything wrong with your backstory, I'm just filling in gaps with what makes sense for the present situation. I'd take other suggestions, but that feels like the simplest explanation.

As for genre friction, just flavor it as something else. It could be stamina, focus, or some other type of energy our boy can tap into. You could take lightining and use the speedster note for him pushing himself to run a top speed, use shield/reflect to brace for blows, push/pull on self for impossibly high jumps if not a savage blow that sends an opponent reeling, etc. They will still be treated as magic by the system, of course, so they can be dispelled or weakened by abilities that target magic when/if that happens.

Espers are inherently magical, it's kind of what makes them who they are. Not having any access to arcane damage isn't recommended, as monsters, like humans, are sometimes jerks regardless of what you do. But it's not impossible to get around without it.
@Ponn The squad leader returns! Ashley is accepted and doesn't have to wait until tomorrow to jump into the character tab.
@Half Pint Oversized gauntlets/claws would just be Hand/Hand for the keyword, then you could bump up your RANGE based on how big/long you want them to be.

Thrown weapons tend to be unpopular for espers due to the fact that letting go of your instrument for too long causes you to forcibly leave your esper form. There are going to be features that help combat that, but I figured it was best to make you aware of it.

I do plan on expanding the list of weapon keywords, but players are encouraged to find a close approximation for more exotic selections. For an edged boomerang, Hatchet is a close match. It can be thrown and used in close quarters.
@Ariamis Looks good so far. Having an esper who was successfully attacked and lost something to a monster (that wasn't their parents) before they were an esper is uncommon, so I'm glad to see that in her backstory.

It looks like you're having some problems with the formatting. I had made an error with the example sheet and put SENTINEL in both the Instrument and Style fields, but the correct name for the Instrument attribute is RANGE.

I'll hold off on making any more comments until you're done.


"Fluids pass through it huh?"

— Suki Oyama


For some reason, that Evil Eye already knew, Oros started chuckling as soon as she said "permeable by liquids." She didn’t stop until the golem pilot was done suggesting things Oros could do. "Sure!" She finally managed. "I think I’ve got something up my sleeve. Or rather, in my veins!"

The top of the golem’s body squeezed out a (comparatively) tiny red tendril. It lashed at its surroundings, but Oros was unable to enjoy the same external view Evil Eye did. Fortunately there were no other magical girls around that might have gotten wrapped up in it.

There were a lot of bird creatures, and it seemed like the bone golem could spawn them as fast as the detention club could destroy them. Technolight zigged and zagged through the creatures as the giant shadow plowed through the rest. The bile at the shadow golem’s feet burned, but Evil Eye didn’t plan on standing in it for long. While the great shadow was shorter than its bony opposition, that didn’t stop it from shoulder checking the abomination’s hip. Its pelvis swung back, and it threw its foot behind itself to stop from tumbling backwards. Spider line cracks ran up and down its leg, and pale dust was shaken out of its wounds. The ivory golem noticed another attack coming in, and raised its arm to brace for it. When Earthshaker made contact, a chunk of bone was fired out of the repulsive creature’s arm.

It howled, not in pain, but out of fury.

More cracks formed over its body. Ivory plugs of bone were fired out like wine corks, and more black bile was spewed forth. This time there was no sign it was going to let up. The bile formed an acidic mist that burned everything around it, if it wasn’t drenched outright. And along with the bile came even more birds. They scattered as soon as they were released. The Giga miseria was pouring forth all the anger of the damned now. The former pets of Hibusa town rallying against sins only they knew.

Five of the undead birds merged together into a single being. Gore wove its bones together and collapsed its beaks into a single silhouette. With a single roar came five different voices, and it soared towards Roche beak first.

More birds swarmed around Nyxia, coming closer, but never quite reaching her position. They spat bile and rope, but it didn’t reach her.

The ivory giant drove its fist into where the shadow’s head should have been. While this didn’t reach Evil Eye, it did reach Oros. Where there had been a single harmless tendril there were now rows of saw toothed tendrils, giving the shadow golem a blood red mohawk. As the ivory giant pulled its hand back, the black golem was picked up along with it. The shadowy fibers around Oros were starting to tear, and the massive shadow was sinking ever so slightly.






"Youre the devil in disguise, oh yes you are~"

— Black Gate


Black Gate winced and ducked behind the ape. "W-why are you so mad? Did you really-" There was a change in Black Gate’s desires. It was small, like a single bud on a sakura tree opening up. A few pink pedals in a sea of red hatred. "I want friends, but, but, but-"

"How?" Mr Banana’s voice was firm. His eye was looking directly at Hizuki through the empty frame of his sunglasses. "How could you expect us to trust you? How could you expect us to trust the club? How could you expect us to open up to anyone?!"

Hizuki’s boosters would have set the school ablaze if there was anything left of it. The ape’s feet, being as hand-like as they were, gripped the concrete foundation. The fabric started to tear across his abdomen. First it was just a few threads coming loose from the earlier locust attack, but as the tear grew, it tore faster, and finally the suit ripped in half. The upper half of Mr Banana was carried into the sky. But inside his torso, a hundred or so Michis held the inside of Mr Banana’s costume together. Their bodies stretched as Haruna carried the ape’s torso higher into the sky. Their pristine black dresses stretched, and the pale flesh of their hands and faces stretched along with it. Before long they looked like white and black ribbons tethering the ape’s two halves together. Hizuki could feel every single one of their desires crying out at once, like a swarm of locusts making the exact same sound as they beat their wings. When Mr Banana spoke, a hundred other voices joined him.

"Tell mom and dad its not their fault Do you know what she was trying to tell us, paladin? Do you think anything were doing today is any reflection of you? Or are you humble enough to see"

The Michi strands holding onto the ground snapped loose, and the lower half of the monkey suit went limp.

"...Youre just being an obstacle!"

All of the Michi strands shot upwards like they were rubber bands. The sudden jolt threw Mr Banana out of Hizuki’s grip, and far above her. Black Gate stumbled backwards, but before she could fall off of her friend, one of the Michi strands grabbed her and pulled her inside the cluster. She disappeared from sight.

Then all of the Michis started to stretch out again, wrapping around each other, forming a giant knot of self loathing and fear. Black Gate’s desires, still unclear, were swiftly buried under the desires of the other Michis. As they continued to twist and knot upon each other, they grew even bigger than Mr Banana, far bigger. As their knot grew tighter, they swelled into tubes and looked nothing like the girl they once represented. Their massive form flew in front of the sun, and Hibusa town was eclipsed.

"You see innocence wherever you look, we see only sinners."

"But we treat everyone the same."



"We are more alike than wed like to admit."


Mr Banana, Black Gate, and a hundred or so Michis descended onto Hizumi. While her thrusters were keeping her aloft, it was clear she was being pushed closer to the ground.
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